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Posts by alex137911
Name: Alex C.
Joined: Nov 14, 2015
Last Post: Nov 26, 2016
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From: Canada
School: KCVI

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alex137911   
Nov 26, 2016
Undergraduate / Describe your best experience working as a leader or working in a group or team (SHAD Valley 2017) [3]

According to CBC, at least 30 000 Canadians are homeless on any given night. We see them in all our cities, and we always pass by them on our way to school and work. Even though we are always exposed to their plight, how many times have we actually stopped to help? I too, was guilty of this complete disconnection and disregard Canadians feel for those less fortunate than us. For this reason, I decided to volunteer at Loving Spoonful, a local charity.

In Kingston, over 15% of the population lives under the poverty line. Hundreds of people are homeless, and cannot afford fresh, healthy food. Loving Spoonful volunteers collect surplus fresh food from restaurants, grocery stores, food donations and local community gardens in order to aid those in need. As a volunteer, I was the team captain of the food collection division of the charity. The duties of our team involved: setting up Loving Spoonful's booth at the Farmer's market to receive food donations, informing the public of Loving Spoonful's upcoming events, selling tickets to the events (e.g. the Kingston Film Festival), and setting up for the events.

This opportunity was my one of my best experiences working as a leader for many reasons. First of all, I learned how to problem-solve on the spot. For example, when collecting food donations, we had to weigh all the food and pack them into plastic boxes. When we ran out of plastic boxes I went around to different stores in the area to ask them if they had any cardboard boxes they had not recycled yet. Secondly, I learned useful time management and organizational skills by helping the administrative team setting up and organize various events. And finally, hearing all the success stories of our efforts made all of our hard work worth every second, and gave me a sense of fulfillment. As the famous saying goes, "You have not lived today until you have done something for someone who can never repay you." (1931/2500)

PS I have a limit of 2500 characters (spaces included). Thanks for looking this over!!
alex137911   
Nov 26, 2016
Undergraduate / Describe your favorite academic subject and explain how it has influenced you. [4]

@ymcashehata

After all, scientific discoveries are not made by parrots who refuse to question what their surroundings....

Overall, I think it was well written. I think you took a creative approach to answering the question asked of you, however you may want to expand more on your conclusion. Your conclusion is your last impression you leave the reader with, so it should be a very strong ending. For example, why is it important to you that science presents order to a complex Universe? How has it influenced you as a person?
alex137911   
Nov 15, 2015
Book Reports / Practicing Moral Courage - A Different Kind of Strength (To Kill A Mockingbird essay) [6]

Thank you for looking through my work justivy03 and vangiespen! @vangiespen, could you please clarify what you mean by, "However, I feel that a much stronger transition sentence is needed between your last sentence and the scene from the book. There was nothing depicted to prepare the reader for the upcoming quote, making it clear that a transitional quote was forthcoming." Which part of the essay are you referring too? Thanks again for editing my work!
alex137911   
Nov 14, 2015
Undergraduate / Moving from one country to another is a life changing experience [11]

1. Perhaps adding a topic sentence to your first paragraoh or even an entire introductory paragraph would make the topic of you writing more clear
2. "Thus, it will be an opportunity to develop your opinion about a new society."
3. "I, along with my family..."
4. "It was not easy for us to leave everything behind and move towards a fresh new start."
5. "...and leaving all my friends was not something that I was willing to give away."
6. "...finding a job ..."
7. "I started off as a waiter at a local restaurant"
8. You might want to consider adding a concluding paragraph, summarizing your writing and maybe extending on to your future aspirations in America.
alex137911   
Nov 14, 2015
Book Reports / Practicing Moral Courage - A Different Kind of Strength (To Kill A Mockingbird essay) [6]

Consider the strength required for certain characters in the novel to "stand firm in their own truth" in the face of failure and/or dangerous opposition. How do the actions of certain characters in the novel help readers recognize and learn to practice moral courage?

Ronald Reagan once said "Above all, we must realize that no arsenal, or no weapon in the arsenals of the world, is so formidable as the will and courage of free men and women." Though it is unknown if Ronald Reagan, the 40th president of America, ever read To Kill A Mockingbird by Harper Lee, he has perfectly captured the recurring theme of moral courage in Harper Lee's novel.The persistence shown by the characters to always do what is right demonstrates to the reader the challenge of practicing moral courage in the face of difficulties. As Ronald Reagan said, moral courage and the willpower to keep doing what is right is a powerful weapon. Characters in this novel wield an incredible amount of courage and willpower to "stand firm in their own truth" in the face of difficulties, and by always doing the right thing, mockingbirds such as Atticus and Tom Robinson help readers recognize and learn to practice moral courage.

In the 1900s, when this book was published, the common belief was that in order to have courage and be brave, you had to be a man and physically fight something or someone. This notion as amplified by the return of the soldiers after the end of World War 2 in 1945. "I wanted you to see what real courage is, instead of getting the idea that courage is a man with a gun in his hand. It's when you know you're licked before you begin but you begin anyway and you see it through no matter what. You rarely win, but sometimes you do." [149]. Though Atticus was explaining to Jem why he had wanted him to him to read to Mrs. Dubose, in a way, he was also explaining to his children why he had to defend Tom Robinson. Atticus understands that courage has more than one form, and that moral courage - the strength to always do what is right - is what shows the character of a person. Atticus knew that he was "licked" before he began, since no jury had ever acquitted a black man over a white man, but he defended Tom to the best of his ability regardless. He could not bring himself to give up on Tom because at his core, Atticus is a mockingbird. He lives to make life just for everyone, thereby making life easier for everyone in the long run. Through Atticus, Harper Lee is making a point that moral courage is just as heroic as physical courage.

Though moral courage is a powerful weapon, it must come hand in hand with willpower, for someone to be able to stand firm in their own truth. Moral courage is the bravery to do the right thing, whereas willpower is the sheer determination to carry through and not give up, no matter how difficult to overcome the obstacles may be.

"'The hell he is,' said another man. 'Heck's bunch's so deep in the woods they won't get out till mornin'.'

'Indeed why so?'

'Called them off on a snipe hunt,' was the succinct answer. 'Didn't you think a'that, Mr. Finch?'" [202].

It took an immense amount of moral strength and courage for Atticus to come and defend Tom, knowing full well the men out to get him wanted to kill him. However, it took an even greater amount of willpower for Atticus to stay put and not flee - leaving Tom to an inevitable demise. In the face of a serious threat, where Atticus could've gotten badly hurt, he faced down his opposers and stayed true to his beliefs. Atticus was willing to sacrifice himself if it meant Tom might be protected. In this scene, men are seen fighting intellectually with willpower, not with fists in a stereotypical brawl between men - common to literature in the time period. Readers recognize through this scene, that characters with moral courage also have the willpower to carry through with their actions, no matter the consequences, if it means doing what is right.

Finally, a sense of justice is needed in order to practice moral courage. In order to "stand firm in their own truth in the face of failure and/or dangerous opposition", the characters, such as Tom Robinson, must first be be able to recognize what is right and what is wrong. To do this, characters need to have strong principles of right and wrong. When Mayella Ewell offers Tom a nickel to "bust up" a chiffarobe for her, he refuses and does it for free. In the setting of To Kill A Mockingbird, Maycomb is in the grips of the Great Depression, where an extra nickel could make the difference between dinner, or no dinner. Tom could've had an extra nickel for his family of five, however, he recognized that Mayella's family did not help her with the household chores, and that she could spare no nickel - so he worked for free. Though Tom himself was in no imminent danger when deciding to refuse the nickel, the fate of the Ewell family was. Had Tom accepted the nickel, the Ewells would not have been able to afford their next meal and would have had to scavenge food from the dump. Therefore, without the ability to recognize and do what is right, it is impossible to practice moral courage.

In conclusion, the strength required for the characters to "stand firm in their own truth" in the face of difficulties is moral courage/strength, and a strong will, and in order to practice moral courage, a sense of what is just and unjust is needed. The common belief held by readers that to be brave and be a hero you need to physically fight, is proven completely wrong with characters such as Atticus and Tom Robinson, who demonstrate courage has many forms, and that moral courage - the ability to always do what is right in the face of challenges - can be just as heroic as fighting in the Second World War. "We need men with moral courage to speak and write their real thoughts, and to stand by their convictions, even to the very death." - Robert Green Ingersoll.
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