Ethan M
Mar 14, 2016
Writing Feedback / Travelling is a sweet escape from stressful life - and the best is sharing joy with a loving family [5]
Hi Kimgrey,
Here are the corrections I would suggest:
Many workers allotted timeMany people allocate time for travelling just to unwind and ...
While some of them choose to travel alone,and some wantsothers like to have a companion. TheseThis essay will tackle both views.
At this present time, there arelotsa lot of people who loves love travelling to experience the worlds' world's amazing spots.
Most of them are j ournalist and w riters who usually travel to ...
... is peaceful and they can internalize thoughts better in their writing with ...
... there are people whoused to travel with companions - a family, friends or a lover. They foundfind it safer and comfortable. For instances, if unexpected events happen ...
... However, I prefer to travel by group, either with my own f amily or with people who ...
... because in travelling you create m emories that last forever and i t makes you eager to travel more.
I also suggest to check out few essay samples - /essays/Travelling-In-Group-Or-Not-47467971, as they could help you better your writing.
Hi Kimgrey,
Here are the corrections I would suggest:
While some of them choose to travel alone,
At this present time, there are
Most of them are j ournalist and w riters who usually travel to ...
... is peaceful and they can internalize thoughts better in their writing with ...
... there are people who
... However, I prefer to travel by group, either with my own f amily or with people who ...
... because in travelling you create m emories that last forever and i t makes you eager to travel more.
I also suggest to check out few essay samples - /essays/Travelling-In-Group-Or-Not-47467971, as they could help you better your writing.