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Posts by Niadruru
Name: Athanasios Ntelezos
Joined: Dec 1, 2015
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Niadruru   
Jan 5, 2016
Graduate / SOP PhD Interdisciplinary biosciences. Methods to answer fundamental questions on how organisms work [12]

Thank you again for your comments. If I get the scholarship it will be thanks to you!

I love engineering and I love biology - my academic path has been marked by the quest for the research field that would allow me to combine these two disciplines. Eventually, Berthold Hedwig's "Insect Hearing and Acoustic Communication" introduced me to neurophysiology and bioacoustics, and even inspired the subject of my MSc thesis. Now I wish to read for a PhD in Zoology under his supervision, and the Cambridge Trust can provide me this opportunity by considering me for the following awards: the Cambridge European Scholarship, the St Edmund's Duke of Edinburgh Scholarship, and the Vice-Chancellor's Award.

Following my graduation with an MEng in Electrical and Computer Technology, I gained my first experience in interdisciplinary research as assistant in the Digital Signal and Image Processing Laboratory of the University of Patras, where I developed biomedical signal processing applications. Though my experience at the University of Patras proved invaluable, I had yet to find my field; this would happen with my MSc thesis, which tested the hypothesis that moth wings absorb the echolocation cries of bats in order to render the moth inconspicuous. The thesis received the top grade among all Master's theses in the Department and I am now adapting it into the paper "Ultrasound Absorption in Moths: a Comparative Study between Nocturnal and Diurnal Species" for submission to a peer-reviewed journal. More important, after a seemingly perennial struggle with depression that caused an extension to my graduate studies, I had eventually found my true calling to be the application of engineering to the study of bioacoustics.

My MSc thesis equipped me with a solid background in insect bioacoustics and now I wish to advance my knowledge with a PhD that will investigate hearing in the genus Bicyclus (Lepidoptera: Satyrinae) by means of intra- and extra-cellular recording, neuroanatomical tracing, imaging, and laser vibrometry. My plan is to begin with the examination of the hearing organ, named Vogel's Organ, and proceed to the identification of its neural projections and the mapping of the auditory pathway. I am confident that the skills and knowledge on biological sensory systems acquired through my PhD will prepare me for a successful career in academia; my ultimate goal is to establish my own interdisciplinary lab and incorporate this knowledge into engineering solutions, such as hearing aids and microphones inspired by the tiny insect ears.

Since the completion of my MSc, I have amassed approximately £4,200, which I intend to invest in my PhD. My parents have also offered me their support; however, due to the current financial situation in Greece, they cannot afford more than £2800 per annum. Without financial support from the Cambridge Trust, I am unable to read for a PhD in Cambridge. I am well aware of the prestige and responsibility that come with the Cambridge Trust awards and I am certain that, given the opportunity, I will thrive in such an intellectually stimulating institution as the University of Cambridge.
Niadruru   
Jan 5, 2016
Graduate / SOP PhD Interdisciplinary biosciences. Methods to answer fundamental questions on how organisms work [12]

The SOP is adressed to an organisation that provides scholarships. The instructions are as follows: The ******* offers scholarships to the academically highest scoring applicants with demonstrated financial need. Please give reasons why you believe you should be considered for a scholarship and mention those for which you consider yourself eligible;

Therefore, I think I should mention the scholarships in my SOP
Niadruru   
Jan 4, 2016
Scholarship / Unfairness at the jewelery store - describe a situation when you or others were treated not right [3]

Racism, for example, is one of the many obstacles that nearly most, if not all, immigrants experience. I believe a comma is needed after all

It was a sunny Saturday afternoon when my aunt, Modesta, my parents, and, I decided to go out in search of a birthday gift for my grandmother, who was turning 75. Again I think comma is needed after and

My aunt's and dad's desire to get her the perfect gift was so strong that, I was starting to get annoyed of their argument about what to buy my grandma.

I would suggest you to rewrite in more formal style the 2nd paragraph and remove They were driving me crazy. Also consider using mother instead of mum.

engraved in on it
The gentleman responded to my aunt by telling her, that she could not afford that design on a two set jewelry piece.
Niadruru   
Dec 2, 2015
Graduate / SOP PhD Interdisciplinary biosciences. Methods to answer fundamental questions on how organisms work [12]

Hi I am applying for PhD in interdisciplinary biosciences. It is SUPER urgent. Please ignore the conclusion. I am still working on it. Thanks

One of my most vivid childhood memories is witnessing the emergence of an adult cicada from a nymph, thus solving the mystery of the cocoons that deluged my backyard every summer. As a child, this discovery gave me a first taste of the satisfaction that animal research can offer. As an adult, research gave me a sense of purpose that was nothing short of revelation to someone who has struggled with bipolar disorder most of his adult life.

Following my graduation with a MEng in Electrical and Computer Technology, I conducted for the first time interdisciplinary research in the biosciences as research assistant in the Digital Signal and Image Processing Laboratory of the University of Patras. My first task was to develop image processing algorithms for biomedical applications. I focused on filtering and segmentation techniques and achieved high accuracy in the detection of tumors in Magnetic Resonance Images (MRIs). I went on to work on the processing of electroencephalographic (EEG) signals and the efficient removal of unwanted electromyographic (EMG) and eye-induced artifacts.

Even though my experience at the University of Patras proved invaluable, I still had the feeling that I had not found my ideal research field. However, during my graduate studies towards an MSc at the Department of Electronic and Electrical Engineering of the University of Strathclyde, I read a book that had a great influence in the formation of my research interests. As a passionate, if amateur entomologist, I was intrigued by the Department's research on insect acoustics and proceeded to read Kenneth D. Roeder's seminal Nerve cells and Insect Behaviour. This book introduced me to bat-moth interactions, neurophysiology, and the potential to map motor behaviours on specific neurons. Roeder described his experiments with such contagious enthusiasm that I eventually based my MSc thesis on his hypothesis that moth wings have evolved to absorb the ultrasonic cries of bats. In order to test this hypothesis, I conducted a comparative study of the ultrasound absorbance between diurnal and nocturnal moths. Subsequently, based on Scanning Electron Images (SEM) images that reveal the porous structure of the wing scales, I derived analytical models that aligned with the experimental results. The thesis confirmed the hypothesis and received the top grade among all Master's theses in the Department. It is currently under revision with intent to submit a paper for publication in February. More important, the hours I invested in rigorous research for my thesis were the most blissful I had experienced in years. After a perennial struggle with depression that among others caused an extension to my graduate studies, I had finally found my true calling in the application of my engineering knowledge to the study of animals.

The Interdisciplinary Biosciences DTP is the ideal programme to pursue my research interests. Coming from engineering, the training during the first year is invaluable. Furthermore, I am offered the opportunity to be part of the world-class Animal Flight Group. For my DPhil project, one of my ideas is to investigate the mechanical impact of flight on the auditory system of a moth and test the hypothesis that there is an element of active tuning in the moth ear. Through my DPhil, I seek to gain expertise in neurophysiology and biomechanics and by the time I finish I hope to have fulfilled my potential as interdisciplinary researcher.

For the first few years following my graduation, I would like to travel and work in biomechanics labs around the globe. When I feel confident that I have made connections and obtained a global perspective of the research in my field, I wish to settle in an institution and begin to climb the academic ladder. My ultimate goal is to lead my own lab. I dream of it as a lab where neurophysiology, bioacoustics, biomechanics and engineering meet. There, I can continue my research as well train and pass my knowledge to the next generation of professionals, scientists, researcher, and, why not, Nobel winners.

I am excited to live in an era that technological advances offer the opportunity to study animals in such depth. As a DPhil student in bioscience with background in engineering, I will aim to provide a fresh approach and apply interdisciplinary methods to answer fundamental questions on how organisms work.
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