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Dec 20, 2015
Undergraduate / Explain why you are interested in the first-choice major-Mathematics? [5]

Thanks @vangiespen for your kind suggestion.
I feel first 3 sentences are jumbled up breaking the flow of the essay. The rest is good.

I have revised and this is my new draft.
Please give your comments.

What I like the most about Mathematics is that it has everyday use. Fields like science and technology, business and astronomy apply it in their every aspect. It is amazing and more than just learning concepts and theorems. It requires the process of logical analysis, creativity and thinking. I enjoy exploring its pattern, structure and depth. Every time I face new problem, I find new connection where the new fact lies. Every new problem gives my brain the task of analyzing and finding the solution provides me immense pleasure and satisfaction. It has been one of the most important subject to me since I started my education. Mathematics cannot be apart from my life and I will continue learning its theorems, finding new facts and applying them in everyday life.
nepal2   
Dec 5, 2015
Undergraduate / Explain why you are interested in the first-choice major-Mathematics? [5]

Please check this supplement and provide me feedback.

Mathematics has been one of the most important subject to me since I have started my education. I never took it as difficult and boring subject but rather always enjoyed learning it. I enjoy exploring its pattern, structure and depth. Mathematics is more than just learning concepts and theorems. It requires the process of logical analysis, creativity and thinking which I admire the most. It helps me develop the imagination as well as process of thinking and logical analysis. Its limitless and unrestricted field provides me an opportunity to study wide range of topics as well as to apply different ideas and methods to solve challenging problems.

What I like the most about Mathematics is that it has everyday use. Fields like science and technology, business and astronomy are incomplete without Mathematics. The Rubik's cube can be solved with algorithms and a rocket's speed can be calculated using integration. As I found these new connections, I noticed new facts in every questions. Every new problem gives my brain task of analyzing and the solution gives me immense pleasure of satisfaction. Mathematics cannot be apart from my life and I will continue learning its theorems and applying them in everyday life.
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