nepal2
Dec 20, 2015
Undergraduate / Explain why you are interested in the first-choice major-Mathematics? [5]
Thanks @vangiespen for your kind suggestion.
I feel first 3 sentences are jumbled up breaking the flow of the essay. The rest is good.
I have revised and this is my new draft.
Please give your comments.
What I like the most about Mathematics is that it has everyday use. Fields like science and technology, business and astronomy apply it in their every aspect. It is amazing and more than just learning concepts and theorems. It requires the process of logical analysis, creativity and thinking. I enjoy exploring its pattern, structure and depth. Every time I face new problem, I find new connection where the new fact lies. Every new problem gives my brain the task of analyzing and finding the solution provides me immense pleasure and satisfaction. It has been one of the most important subject to me since I started my education. Mathematics cannot be apart from my life and I will continue learning its theorems, finding new facts and applying them in everyday life.
Thanks @vangiespen for your kind suggestion.
I feel first 3 sentences are jumbled up breaking the flow of the essay. The rest is good.
I have revised and this is my new draft.
Please give your comments.
What I like the most about Mathematics is that it has everyday use. Fields like science and technology, business and astronomy apply it in their every aspect. It is amazing and more than just learning concepts and theorems. It requires the process of logical analysis, creativity and thinking. I enjoy exploring its pattern, structure and depth. Every time I face new problem, I find new connection where the new fact lies. Every new problem gives my brain the task of analyzing and finding the solution provides me immense pleasure and satisfaction. It has been one of the most important subject to me since I started my education. Mathematics cannot be apart from my life and I will continue learning its theorems, finding new facts and applying them in everyday life.