Writing Feedback / IELTS task 2 exam - best way to learn: "learning by doing" or through books and from teachers? [2]

Some people believe that the best way to learn anything is "learning by doing". Others would rather than learn through books and from teachers. Think of learning a language. Which way do you think is a better way to learn language?.

These two ways have some advantages and disadvantage by following their feature. In my opinion, there is no best way to learn anything, even though English.

The people get learning skills from many sources when they had grown up. Usually, their ability to understanding new things is based on their human nature and their talent. Some people gen up new words when they hear the first time. But in some other people, it is difficult to remember. Also, people had their own way to learn, which is set on their life experience. It is hard to compare learning skill because every skill is useful for owned people.

Everything has their special cause. So different to explain the essence of something. The people know about the essence of them is important to understand about something. For that reason, when we explain different meanings we must use different ways to beneficial for learners. For example, to guide locations by on the picture is easier than to write or to tell. However, to teach English grammar by writing is efficient than other ways.

So that we must attend to choose a learning ways, what kind of things we have to learn. Our choice would be related nature of them.I wouldn't say which one is better. In my case learning by doing is better for me. Finally, we must use both of them, only assume that which one is optimal for current condition.

Writing Feedback / Writing about a successful person, Vincent Van Gogh example [3]

A successful person is one who has earned a lot of money.
To what extent do you agree or disagree

Before the write about a successful person, I want to define the success of human, answer the how to measure a success. Success is defined by person goals. Persons have different goals. Some people want to be famous, some people want to be rich, and some people want to be dignity and some people want to compile classical music other people has simple goals just long live with family etc. It is hard to choose best goals, everything has two sided. But some people can succeed their goal, others cannot. It is difficult the people succeed goal which is they have big goals. So, in my opinion, a successful person is not only has earned a lot of money but also who can rich his or her goals. To measure success which is the how person to reach his or her goal is better than person how much money earned.

I agree a successful person is who has earned a lot of money when the person's main goal is to be rich. But foregoing every person has different goals, so they need different valuation and different measurement of success. For example, Vincent Van Gogh was a very poor man. But now he is one of the most famous painters in the world. He wanted that, his life and goal were to make wonderful fine arts. He did it, he has big success.

My idea is inhibited to define a successful person by money. Finally, I totally disagree the successful person is who has earned a lot of money.

I just starting. Pleace give me advice.How many scores can I get writing task when I write essays like this?