wolfieD
Dec 16, 2015
Undergraduate / "My Youtube Community Channel" - University of Michigan Supplement essay #1 [7]
Louisa, I used your suggestion as a basis for my revision. I liked how you made my essay more clear and concise! However, I kind of wanted to let them know more about our specific interest like the computer software part so I kept that part.
When I first uploaded YouTube videos of me creating banner arts and desktop wallpapers, the last thing that I thought would happen would be that a community would emerge from my interests in video games and computer software.While I was just having fun creating Photoshop art, I did not realize that the comments being left on my channel came from other content creators as well. I had managed to find a community with like interests and a passion for uploading videos that conveyed our love for what we were doing.
I later started a community channel along with a few other content creators from the community. The community channel is where we all uploaded our own videos from playing our favorite games to me continuing to create my own artworks. While our community was off to a slow start, I made sure that, as a founder of the group, we always expressed ourselves in a self-satisfying way and that our work always brought joy to our viewers. Now, our channel has grown at a steady pace and has grown in members because of the welcome they receive and achievements they accomplish through the help of our cooperative group.
Thank you so much for your time and help!
Louisa, I used your suggestion as a basis for my revision. I liked how you made my essay more clear and concise! However, I kind of wanted to let them know more about our specific interest like the computer software part so I kept that part.
When I first uploaded YouTube videos of me creating banner arts and desktop wallpapers, the last thing that I thought would happen would be that a community would emerge from my interests in video games and computer software.While I was just having fun creating Photoshop art, I did not realize that the comments being left on my channel came from other content creators as well. I had managed to find a community with like interests and a passion for uploading videos that conveyed our love for what we were doing.
I later started a community channel along with a few other content creators from the community. The community channel is where we all uploaded our own videos from playing our favorite games to me continuing to create my own artworks. While our community was off to a slow start, I made sure that, as a founder of the group, we always expressed ourselves in a self-satisfying way and that our work always brought joy to our viewers. Now, our channel has grown at a steady pace and has grown in members because of the welcome they receive and achievements they accomplish through the help of our cooperative group.
Thank you so much for your time and help!