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Name: Nicolette Rose Vartuli
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Undergraduate /
BU CGS program drew me in instantly - intrigued by the fields of Political Science and Economics [3]
Tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what has specifically led you to apply for admissionNo more than 250 words. Mine is currently 154:
BU's CGS program drew me in instantly. I have always been especially intrigued by the fields of Political Science and Economics, and I am currently torn between which one to choose as my major. By being a part of CGS, I would be able to try each major on for size, as I would be given the opportunity to pursue various subjects in relation to both Political Science and Economics. The tightly-knit CGS community and access to academic advisors would help guide me through the difficult process of choosing a field that I would want to work in for the rest of my life. When I come to a final decision of what my major is, I know my choice will be the right one because I would have had the time to think about it as well as the opportunity to take a variety of classes in both of my areas of interest.
Undergraduate /
Joke obsession- William and Mary Supplement- What makes you unique? [4]
This is great! The only thing I see here is that maybe you can change "Whoever said that puns are the lowest form of humor was clearly and simply wrong in my opinion." to "In my opinion, whoever said that puns are the lowest form of humor is just plain wrong."
Undergraduate /
Tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission [5]
It can't exceed 250 words. This is my rough draft (145 words):
BU's CGS program drew me in instantly. I have always been intrigued by a broad spectrum of topics, from U.S. government to Biology. By being a part of CGS, I would be able to satisfy my interests by leaning a wide variety of subjects, while at the same time I would have more time to decide what major I would like to pursue. The tightly-knit CGS community and an access to academic advisors would help guide me through the difficult process of choosing a field that I would want to work in for the rest of my life. When I come to a final decision of what my major is, I know my choice will be the right one because I would have had the time to think about it as well as the opportunity to take a variety of classes in different subject areas.
Any corrections or things I should change/add? Thanks :)
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