aiman02
Dec 27, 2015
Undergraduate / Longevity brings many drawbacks; nevertheless, it still benefits young people -IELTS life expectancy [2]
One of the concequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expentancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, Improving of health care give more benefits for human to live longer and increase their life's duration. Some people believe that living longer give many benefits rather than it advantages. I strongly believe that living longer give many dire effects.
Nonetheless, many people argue that increasing old people in one country brings some trouble. The main factor is overpopulation in one country because of longevity of old people. There are some drawbacks of life's duration of old people, such as society and financial aspect. Firstly, old people who live longer can become burden to society, old people who enable to do their daily routine need help of some people in their surrounding. In addition, people who live longer must be funded by our government due to they are not productive anymore to work. Futhermore, the rate of getting disease like dementia disesase increase that can not be treat with modern technology.
On the other hand, the longevity makes old people can get treat of their children. Otherwise, young people are able to know their grandfather or their grandmother. However, old people can share a lot of about their experiences in preceding years so that young people can learn from their past generation. For example when taking decision young people must think it over about the consequences that they can face next. In my opinion, young people must concern with old people can increase their self-awaness.
In conclusion, although longevity brings many drawbacks they still can give contribution for young people. Young people should care about old people to improve their self-awarness in their social life.
One of the concequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expentancy is increasing.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Recently, Improving of health care give more benefits for human to live longer and increase their life's duration. Some people believe that living longer give many benefits rather than it advantages. I strongly believe that living longer give many dire effects.
Nonetheless, many people argue that increasing old people in one country brings some trouble. The main factor is overpopulation in one country because of longevity of old people. There are some drawbacks of life's duration of old people, such as society and financial aspect. Firstly, old people who live longer can become burden to society, old people who enable to do their daily routine need help of some people in their surrounding. In addition, people who live longer must be funded by our government due to they are not productive anymore to work. Futhermore, the rate of getting disease like dementia disesase increase that can not be treat with modern technology.
On the other hand, the longevity makes old people can get treat of their children. Otherwise, young people are able to know their grandfather or their grandmother. However, old people can share a lot of about their experiences in preceding years so that young people can learn from their past generation. For example when taking decision young people must think it over about the consequences that they can face next. In my opinion, young people must concern with old people can increase their self-awaness.
In conclusion, although longevity brings many drawbacks they still can give contribution for young people. Young people should care about old people to improve their self-awarness in their social life.
