Unanswered [6] | Urgent [0]
  

Posts by kaurishmeet
Name: Ishmeet Kaur
Joined: Dec 29, 2015
Last Post: Dec 29, 2015
Threads: 1
Posts: -  
From: India
School: St. marks girls senior secondary school

Displayed posts: 1
sort: Latest first   Oldest first  | 
kaurishmeet   
Dec 29, 2015
Undergraduate / Honesty is what matters to me the most. Stanford University supplementary essay [3]

What matters to you, and why? (100 to 250 words) Stanford University supplementary essay help as my is within 2 days...

According to me giving back to the society in which we live is what matters to me the most. The act of charity is very important for me. Since childhood I have actively taken part in the charitable activities organized by my school and the NGOs in the vicinity. I am a follower of Sikhism and my religion encourages me to shoulder the responsibility of helping those in need. I offer my voluntary services frequently at our holy place of worship and assist in making food as well as cleaning the premises.

I am a compassionate person at heart and I love to feed the stray animals. I have also tutored the poor children in my locality. Engaging in these activities has given me a sense of immense gratification and imbued me with inexplicable happiness from within. Whatever I have learned from my experiences, I wish to share with others and inspire them to become responsible global citizens like me. I aspire to make a career in the field of Computer Science so as to create something novel by which the whole society would be benefitted.

or

Honesty is what matters to me the most. I believe that if all of us do our jobs with utmost honesty and dedication, a lot of problems such as corruption can be eradicated completely. If we are honest in our relationships, we can make some lifelong friends and acquaintances and have a meaningful bond with them. Being honest is what gives strength of a person's character and make him or her worthy of respect. Honesty is a trait in humans that can help in making this world a better place for everyone. I fulfil every task that is given to me with absolute honesty and sincerity and this is what I expect from others too. In the future as well, I want to work honestly-be it in my collegiate life of professional life. I will also strive to inspire all those around me to be honest and sincere in whatever they do and experience the ultimate gratification of being good and doing good.

In this i was thinking to personify some object like a bag or closet and then explain that how dreams and my experiences matter to me.We can personify some object like a bag or a closet that matters to me which contains my memories, experiences, dreams,aspiration,my thoughts,etc.I want to become someone out of crowd and not remain unidentifid,etc.Then we can mention about my feeling of being good human being and using al my experiences and skills to help the society.This is what makes a person not part of crowd and then the points mentioned in the essay.

Please someone edit or add some examples if possible and please tell which is good...
Need Writing or Editing Help?
Fill out one of these forms:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳

Academic AI Writer:
Custom AI Writer ◳