ali2407
Dec 30, 2015
Undergraduate / Harvard Essay: You may write on a topic of your choice, or you may choose from one of the following: [2]
To find answers, I rigorouslyresearchingresearchedinto the individual that I called my father.
I learned about the sacrifices he makes mentally, physically, and economically-- all to improve the lives of his children
All my questions were answered, and my spiritual father became something more than a figure to pray to-- he became my role model.
I've come to realize that despite not being with me physically, he's always there to support me in my times of need, as his guidance serves to encourage me in times where I feel the weakest. I strive to become better, in order to make my father proud.
Strong essay, fix some of the grammatical errors and you should be alright :)
To find answers, I rigorously
I learned about the sacrifices he makes mentally, physically, and economically-- all to improve the lives of his children
All my questions were answered, and my spiritual father became something more than a figure to pray to-- he became my role model.
I've come to realize that despite not being with me physically, he's always there to support me in my times of need, as his guidance serves to encourage me in times where I feel the weakest. I strive to become better, in order to make my father proud.
Strong essay, fix some of the grammatical errors and you should be alright :)
