Undergraduate / "Why Tufts?" - Why not? Diversity, campus, internships [6]

thank you i deleted that part Today i started the second essay but it is not as good as i thought it will be.

There is a Quaker saying: "Let your life speak." Describe the environment in which you were raised-your family, home, neighborhood or community-and how it influenced the person you are today. (Required length is 200-250 words)

I grew up in family which was involved in medicine.They have always encouraged me to do the best i can and never give up in my dreams.They never forced me to do what they wanted but they always supported my ideas and gave me the opportunity to figure what was right and what was wrong.I had done a lot of activities but i always had a special interest in science and math.And this made me want to become an engineer in the future.Because of this great difference between my parents and me i learned how to accept other's ideas and this really influenced me in a positive way.Living in a community where i was seen as a outsider i always respected peoples ideas and tolerated people who were discriminating me.And this was actually what made me become a more diverse person because i got to meet people like me and this bordered my horizon and because of this i choose my father as my role model because he taught me how to respect people how to respect peoples ideas and most importantly he tough me to never give up in what i believed in and it is this which makes me who i am today.

can you please give me an idea about it

Undergraduate / "Why Tufts?" - Why not? Diversity, campus, internships [6]

Thank you for the replay.this is what i came up with

When I asked myself "Why Tufts?",the first thought that crossed my mind was "Why not Tufts".The diversity gives me a sense of familiarity while the beautiful campus along with its proximity to Boston provides endless opportunities for internships. I hope to assist Dr.Leisk with his groundbreaking work on machine design which will give me the necessary base to conduct my own research later on. Mechanical Engineering is my passion and Tufts provides me with all the tools to pursue it, not to mention a gorgeous campus as well. After reading this you tell me, Why not Tufts.