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Name: Flora.B
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Jan 9, 2016
Undergraduate / Meeting my grandma for the first time creative short description [2]

This is a small part of my essay.Please tell me if its any good or if I need to add more to it.

Looking over the horizon I saw a small petite figure looking directly at me. However, as I got closer to her I could see that that this stranger had a certain grandeur about her. Her whole demeanour was that of an gentle and wise heavenly maiden.When she lifted her eyes to look into mine I felt as if she was looking into my soul and replacing every grain of doubt, misery and sadness with a soft warm light.Her thin framboise coloured lips bent into a crescent smile, she offered me a hand, pulling me into a balm leaf scented embrace. In my ear she whispered ever so softly 'Welcome to my home, my dear granddaughter'.
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