Posts by NG176

NG176

Jan 25, 2016

Essays / I am struggling with my thesis statement. My chosen topic is about doping in sports [6]

Because of their need to succeed, young athletes resort to performance-enhancing drug despite of its detrimental effects ... How about this?

NG176

Jan 25, 2016

Essays / I am struggling with my thesis statement. My chosen topic is about doping in sports [6]

My struggle with my thesis statement: Undeterred by the detrimental effects of Performance-enhancing drugs, young athletes still resort to PED use.
Any advise in improving my thesis is very much appreciated.

NG176

Jan 25, 2016

Essays / I am struggling with my thesis statement. My chosen topic is about doping in sports [6]

I need help with my thesis statement. I am looking into doping in sports by young athletes. So far, I came up with: Undeterred by the detrimental effects of Performance-enhancing drugs, young athletes still resort to doping / PED use.... Any thoughts? Any feedback will be highly appreciated.