Nad720
Feb 11, 2016
Undergraduate / An experience that taught you about yourself or the world... UBC Personal Profile (Computer Science) [3]
Hi Guys, Quick response would be appreciated. Deadline around the corner. I am applying for CS at UBC and Part of my Personal Profile requires two essays and this is one of them. Suggestions on grammars, structure, general comments, any thing will help.
Thank you so much and I'd love to return the favor!
Tell us about an experience, in school or out, that taught you something about yourself and/or the world around you. (maximum 200 words)
In 2014-2015, I volunteered to work as a Junior System Analyst for Garricks Contracting LTD, and got accepted due to my skill and experience with computer. Though, I was limited to certain amount of task, due to my qualification, But it never stopped me from performing my task because I quickly followed my intuition and made the most of resources available to me. In the process I learned that "at first a degree speaks an employer's language, it only makes sense that a bachelor of computer science degree reflects this reality. I would say that this experience had undoubtedly influenced my view of on social development and I rediscovered my ambition and passion for the things I do and being determined to make a positive change to my status and for the benefit of people around me. Such positive lesson and reflection. For me, This is a stepping stone.
Hi Guys, Quick response would be appreciated. Deadline around the corner. I am applying for CS at UBC and Part of my Personal Profile requires two essays and this is one of them. Suggestions on grammars, structure, general comments, any thing will help.
Thank you so much and I'd love to return the favor!
Tell us about an experience, in school or out, that taught you something about yourself and/or the world around you. (maximum 200 words)
In 2014-2015, I volunteered to work as a Junior System Analyst for Garricks Contracting LTD, and got accepted due to my skill and experience with computer. Though, I was limited to certain amount of task, due to my qualification, But it never stopped me from performing my task because I quickly followed my intuition and made the most of resources available to me. In the process I learned that "at first a degree speaks an employer's language, it only makes sense that a bachelor of computer science degree reflects this reality. I would say that this experience had undoubtedly influenced my view of on social development and I rediscovered my ambition and passion for the things I do and being determined to make a positive change to my status and for the benefit of people around me. Such positive lesson and reflection. For me, This is a stepping stone.
