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Posts by Amirulmumin
Name: amirulmumin
Joined: Mar 16, 2016
Last Post: Mar 20, 2016
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From: Indonesia
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Amirulmumin   
Mar 20, 2016
Writing Feedback / Scientific research and experiments are nessesary to deeply understand the inventions [3]

Scientific research is application of scientific method to the investigation of relationships among natural phenomenon, or to solve a medical or technical problem, nowadays scientific research has gone too deep. Surely, there are many things which we should not attempt to understand and try to apply in our life.

In our life, there are many discoveries by scientist who have been through many experiments. There are many kinds of discoveries from many kinds of field such as medical sector, communication, technology, fishery and agriculture. As the era goes fast, there are many scientist who have been researching for the development of human's life, scientist make an invention to support human life progressing by research. Scientist not only find and develop an invention, but also they make some experiments that are based on scientific method.

In developed area, we can find many inventions that can be seen clearly. They have spread in entire world, such as invention in the technological field like hand phone water resistant, electrical car, in the agricultural field like melon that has many kinds of shape, watermelon without seed and in the fishery we can see jumbo shrimp, soft crab and many others. Nowadays citizen excites and appreciate the new invention that is found by scientist, they not only want to use but also they want to try to find new invention by themselves, but they do not have many materials that make them not able to do it.

The conclusion is, - I personally excited with the new invention that is found by scientist, I want to know and understand how to find a new invention, because when we learn about scientific research and try to find a discovery, we will have widen knowledge, we not only know how to use, but also we can make research too. As the smart citizen we should try to understand about scientific research that can make us so deeply understand about the invention that has been through scientific research process, so I think it will not go far as the statement mention.
Amirulmumin   
Mar 17, 2016
Writing Feedback / Help in trouble, warm advice - Extended family statement. Toefl writing [5]

i have found some grammatical errors here.

because extended family could helped people
you need to use bare infinitive

a lot of new experience s

because they live their life than people who is in teenager = because they live in their life longer than me, as a teenager .

when I failed or mistake = when i failed or did a mistake

in conclusion i think you need to put more ideas :
example : extended family can replace our parent's position when we are away from home.
Amirulmumin   
Mar 16, 2016
Writing Feedback / The main purpose of universities is to give info and skill to fullfill requirement for work-force [2]

Some individuals believe that the primary goal universities should be to provide information and skill needed for future work. others however feel that the main objective of universities is to give students access to knowledge for its own values regardless if the information is usefull for a job or not.

what, in your opinion, should be the primary objective if university education? give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

(IELTS TASK 2)


The main purpose of universities is to give information and skill to fullfill requirement for work-force. Opponents, the main of universities is to provide education without knowing. If the education is usefull for a job or useless. In my point, i agree if the main purpose of universities is to give information, skill and how to fullfill requirement for work-force.

Getting job is main purpose for students who have finished study from their university. In university, they will learn some lessons and get many knowledges. Ussualy lessons that they will get are appropriate with their career because university provides many majors that they can choose a major what they want. The major will direct students to take them into their career, but in another case, university just teaches more theory than practice, because of that, the students should think how to practice or apply about their knowledge in reality. They do not need to blame university but the students should realize what they should do.

Nowadays, it is difficult to find a job for fresh graduate, some students that have graduate's argu, the recent education system is not suitable with the requirement that is company needed. The system education nowadays does not refer to requirement of the job,but the other students said the recent education system still makes the students have many knowledge, that they have gotten as important as the former education system, something that makes a difference is how to deliver the material to the student by new method. It depends on the students, how to apply the knowledge that they have.

The conclusion is we should realize that we have gotten now is because of university. University makes our mindset better. We have many knowledge that make ourselves have wide-view. We know what we have to do because university makes us mature enough. We can deal with the pressure, we can cooperate with our friends in the team. Those that we do not realize are the one of requirement of work-force
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