Writing Feedback / Inventors and doctors, both are important to our society and both are play their role wisely. [7]

Hi
Just some simple errors:
now a days=>nowadays
people are discussing=>people discuss
the inventors and doctors=>inventors and doctors
play vital role=>play a vital role
inventors are play an enormous role=>inventors play a crucial role
Inventors are work had=> ? Inventors work hard
and invented=>and invent
useful think=>useful things
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I am not a professional grader but I think you need to read more essay samples (I have to do it too :))))
Keep practicing because I believe you can.
try to read many sample answer, it will help us to learn new vocabulary and gain our ideas