Posts by SlimeTim

SlimeTim

Jul 1, 2016

Research Papers / Cracks description. Fracture surface and stereoscope image. [4]

Hi Ashkan1363, here is some mistakes I think you have made

Of part: of the/a part
From side wall of truck body: From the/a side wall of the/a truck body
"MUESTRA Para ~~analisis~~ ": Analysis
Figure XXXX to XXX ~~show~~ : shows
Each crack arbitrarily ~~labelled~~ :labeled
For crack number 3, crack initiated at the/a centerof the picture and propagated toward the/an upper right side of the/a picture
... right side of picture and propagated towardthe left side of image: For crack number 2, it is initiated at the/a right side of the/a picture and propagated toward the left side of the image.

You paragraph miss a lot of articles, about grammars you don't make lot of mistake in that but try to remember to write the articles. Anyways these are my ideas about your mistakes.

SlimeTim

Jun 30, 2016

Writing Feedback / Eating at home has many advantages; it's safer for us because we know what we are going to cook [4]

Thank akbartaufiq25 for you advise. I very appreciates it, I will try not to made the same mistake as this one again!

This is my new start sentence:Nowadays there are a lot of restaurants around the world and people are enjoying eating in the restaurant because they are lazy of making their own food. But according to me, I would like to prefer eating at home. I think that eating in home is safer for us because we know what we are going to cook.

SlimeTim

Jun 29, 2016

Writing Feedback / Eating at home has many advantages; it's safer for us because we know what we are going to cook [4]

Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

According to me, I would like to prefer eating at home. I think that eating in home is safer for us because we know what we are going to cook. The ingredients we will buy are fresh or not? Nowadays, restaurants may buy the rotten things like dead fish and the made sauce from rubbish. That is why we need to be careful about the food we eat and only eat in a restaurant that we're sure they are safe, it is hard to tell that if the restaurant is using fresh or rotten ingredients. Therefore, I think it is better to stay at home and make your food. That will be cheaper and healthy, and it also improves your cooking skill so you can see how useful it is if you cook at home. You can still eat outside but only for special occasions, you should eat at home for your good. You can also be bothered by people who are drunk, and they sit next to you. That is why you should eat at home.

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This is my first thread, I am practicing writing essay. Could anyone give me some advise about this essay. Thank you very much!