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Name: MOKWUNYE BEATRICE FAITH
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Beatrice96   
Aug 6, 2016
Poetry / STANDING FOR OUR VALUES; BLACK NOT FAKE [4]

Thanks a lot HiddenGrace for reviewing my work. I'm grateful.
But could you please explain what you mean when you said: "I'd like to know more about the values you talk about. What are they?"

Thanks whole lot!
Beatrice96   
Aug 5, 2016
Poetry / STANDING FOR OUR VALUES; BLACK NOT FAKE [4]

For how long shall we hold captive
the truth
The truth about our originality and credulity
How long shall we hold depressive
our pride
Our pride of black decent
And dazzling beauty
How long shall we burrow
Under the shadows of coloured globe
How long, oh comrades, shall we
bury our mother tongue
In the gaping holes of alien cord.

Forget not, my kindred, your originality
Squiggle not your simplicity
Muzzle not your individuality
Hide not under the shadows
But by the value instilled in thee
show the world
The black within
Beatrice96   
Aug 2, 2016
Writing Feedback / 10 MOST EFFECTIVE STRATEGIES TO READ AND REMEMBER [6]

Are you sick and tired of reading and forgetting them all, the next day? Maybe you've already given up! Probably, you've declared right away, "To hell with studies for all I care!" Or "I'm not brilliant enough!" Perhaps you're yet to proclaim any of these, but the truth remains that you are not happy, your academic performance is incredibly at stake and based on that, you feel downcast and incompetent among peers. Ever wonder why?

The problem is you aren't using the right approach to study. But, don't you worry about that; It's finally here, right here at your fingertips. So, before the end of this piece, you'll discover various strategies to help you retain and then to trash forgetfulness into the lagoon.

Few years back in high school, I also faced a similar challenge. I had to struggle with virtually all my subjects. I'm a voracious reader. Over five hours, I can spend on a particular topic tirelessly reading. At the end of my studies, I feel so much excitement and well-read. But, unfortunately, next day or two, I forget almost every bit of the information. That was the most despondent moment of my academic life.

That got me weary and same time, searching, asking and adjusting until finally, I hooked up with these outstanding step-by-step approach to effective study, which eventually changed my life. Therefore, I'm so glad to share with you, those strategies right here and now! Let's get started.

FIRST THING FIRST: EXERCISE!
Studies indicate that mental exercises, to be precise, help the brain retain larger range of information for a longer period. Spend at least 20minutes on mental exercise before study. The mental exercise can be meditation or yoga where total calmness and relaxation of the mind is maintained. It can as well be brainstorming, solving difficult puzzles or word problems. The whole essence is to get the mind relaxed and focused. When the mind is relaxed and focused, then the brain can assimilate and retain more effectively.

TRASH THE SOCIALS
Social networks such as facebook, twitter, and so many others, are the major source of distraction for 21st century teens. According to some psychological facts, the ability to retain new and vital information is almost impossible when the mind is distracted. Therefore, it is advisable to turn off all electronic devices-phones, tablets, ipads, laptops, e.t.c-before study. Forget about your numerous "tweets" and "beeps," you'll get back to them afterwards.

USE THE SQ3R TOOL-KIT
SQ3R is a reading strategy developed by Francis Pleasure Robinson in his 1946 book, "Effective Study." Robinson adopted SQ3R to boost students' ability to retain information for a longer period. Therefore, SQ3R is an acronym for: Survey; Question; Read; Recall; Review.

SURVEY
The usual student-tradition is: open up a text and begin to read straight to the end. This is one of the reasons our brain battles to retain those information. A straight-away-reading is not an effective study skill. First job when you open up a text is survey. That is, browse through the entire chapter you hope to study at that moment. Identify the topics and subtopics in that particular chapter. Also note every highlighted words and phrases (most highlighted words and phrases appear in italics while others are boldly printed). Survey the summaries and the exercises. The whole essence of survey is to prepare your mind on what it's expected to know before the study ends.

QUESTION
After survey, ask questions. Write out some basic questions you expect to answer by the time you're done. Also, pen out some of the questions written at the end of that chapter. Try giving an answer to these textbook-questions, but in case you can't answer any at the moment, don't panic. keep it aside. However, have it in mind to provide the correct answer before the end of study. Note: questions outline the core purpose of your study. It's, however, these questions that determine whether you've acquired the required information at the end.

READ
Read mindfully, paying attention to important details. This is quite different from survey. In survey, you read quickly mindless of certain words and phrases, but reading pays close attention to every details including "new" words and phrases. You read to digest. The best approach is to take note; jot down basic information! The more you jot, the longer it sticks. If you don't jot, the whole reading is wasted. So, note-taking very important to effective reading. The goal is to get it painted in the brain.

RECALL
After every 45minutes, take a break. Let's say 5minutes-break. Studies show that few minutes break after 45-50minutes reading give the brain-memory more room to access and process information. Spend the 5minutes on some other activities. It could be to score a song, play game, gist with a friend etc. but hey! don't turn on device.

After the 5minute break, task the brain. This is the "recall" process. Go over the questions you had written earlier and provide answers to them. You might not necessarily answer all correctly, but just measure your progress by attempting. Then, see if you need to read over again. Focus on the passage that provide answers to that particular question. Also, voice out loud those things you learnt from that chapter. The more you chant them; the better they stick.

TOOLS TO HELP YOU RECALL.
Teaching! Just walk up to a friend and volunteer to teach him/her, or you can stand in front of the board at your free period and share your newly acquired knowledge with classmates. However, in case you're shy or rather uncomfortable with that, you can gather up toys, heap of books or any kind of inanimate objects, make them students and then teach. The purpose is to get it fixed and easy to remember.

Another way to recall is by diagrams and related video games. By diagram, create a mind-picture of what you've learnt. It can as well be done on paper. We assume the topic studied is family. Sketch out a diagram to represent different types of family, members and roles of each member of the family. Further, visit sites such as youtube et al. Download video games related to "family" and play.

Finally, REVIEW! Every day or two, go through the note taken during the reading process.
Repeat the SQ3R over again if you need to. If, however, you judiciously follow these strategy for five "good" times without any positive change, buzz my inbox
Beatrice96   
Jul 12, 2016
Writing Feedback / In under developed countries, touriusm has disadvanages and can be said the opposites [3]

The recent report shows that due to downturn in oil prices and globalization (use a comma after a subordinate clause to form a compound sentence with the main clause. Subordinate clauses usually begin with subordinate conjunctions like "Due to...")has boosted the tourism sector has received a significant boost. (ensure you use modifiers very well as they add "spices" to your essay)

...some people hold an opinion,about tourism having a negative effect on their culture and traditions . (To obey the rule of parallel structure, the tenses must be the same on both side of the conjunction: "And") There are, therefore, people on the both sides of the argument eitherwho are neither for ornor against the motive.

para 2
Let'slet us (do not use contractions for academic essays) havetake a look at it'sits ("its" is used to show possession) negatives,.

some A lot of people in the society have raised ana (use the article "a" before a consonant ) concern over the diminishing of their native culture and traditions.

...to cater to tourist need.

para 3
...section of the
society.
Tourism have has fueled infrastructureinfrastructural development...

Conclusion

...country, as, ...
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