Katerina0686
Jul 27, 2016
Writing Feedback / The table shows the the demand for bananas and coffee in 5 countries over a 6 year period [3]
Writing task 1 for ielts pie chart. Hi I'm a new member here in the forum, can i ask someone to check it?
The table shows the sales fair trade labelled coffee and bananas in 5 countries over a 6 year period from 1999 to 2004.
In 1999, Switzerland has the most largest sales of coffee with 3 million euros while U.K and Denmark have just .3 million in difference. Sweden had the least demand of o.8 million euros only.however by the year 2004 U.K had significantly increased by Almost 20 million euros as per transaction. Denmark was also added half a million. on the other hand Belgium and Sweden with both 2 million in respectively.
Meanwhile the demand for bananas during 1999,Switzerland has shared with 15 million euros while Belgium with just 0.8 million. By the year 2004 both countries sharply increased with three-fourths of enterprise. Also U.K, Sweden and Denmark significantly arose with more than 5 million euros.
In conclusion, both banana and coffee had increased its demand over a period of 6 years.
160 words.
Writing task 1 for ielts pie chart. Hi I'm a new member here in the forum, can i ask someone to check it?
The table shows the sales fair trade labelled coffee and bananas in 5 countries over a 6 year period from 1999 to 2004.
In 1999, Switzerland has the most largest sales of coffee with 3 million euros while U.K and Denmark have just .3 million in difference. Sweden had the least demand of o.8 million euros only.however by the year 2004 U.K had significantly increased by Almost 20 million euros as per transaction. Denmark was also added half a million. on the other hand Belgium and Sweden with both 2 million in respectively.
Meanwhile the demand for bananas during 1999,Switzerland has shared with 15 million euros while Belgium with just 0.8 million. By the year 2004 both countries sharply increased with three-fourths of enterprise. Also U.K, Sweden and Denmark significantly arose with more than 5 million euros.
In conclusion, both banana and coffee had increased its demand over a period of 6 years.
160 words.
