Writing Feedback / Athletes are obliged to train their skills and focus not only to the muscles or body movements [4]

Hay rosa, i will give you some suggestion

Original sentences : The rapidity and accuracy visual is an imperative activity needed to ...
My Suggestion : ... imperative AVTIVITIES needed to ...

Happy writing!

Writing Feedback / My summary task about social Networking [9]

Hay aris, my i will give you some suggestion

Original sentences : - the popularity of a social networking
Suggestion :- The popularity of a social networking

happy writing mr mamals!