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Sep 17, 2016
Writing Feedback / Tourism is travel for pleasure, it can bring down the walls that separate people [2]

Summary For more tolerance, we need more ... tourism?

There is always a separate in each country, especially in countries that have conflicts. Most people in other country would argue that all citizens who have conflict with them are guilty. however there are also many people who be nice to them. it is noticed when we traveling to countries that have a conflict with our country.

There are many ways to bring down the walls that separate people. Tourism is one of them, but also media and education also has the same role. Tourism is travel for pleasure, it can bring down the walls that separate people. you might be wondering, can tourism change things? Can it bring down walls? Yes, tourism is the best practical approach to cut down those dividers and to make a manageable method for interfacing with each other and creating friendships.

what if one million people travel internationally each year trip to relate to people, not being just take a picture of the bus and then uploaded to social media, but we have to share each other when we traveling. This is the future of the journey, we have to travel in order to change the world for the better life.
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