suomi0610
Sep 19, 2016
Writing Feedback / Palestine conveys appreciation for Indonesia's continuous support [3]
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Palestinegives an appreciation for Appreciates indonesia Indonesia because it continues they continue to support their country the middle eastern nation until this time now, which encourage when they delivered a message encouraging independence an independent palestine. This message delivered was delivered by foreign minister palestine the Palestinian foreign minister to the Indonesian foreign minister during bilateral meetings took which took place in venezuela. Besides, Indonesia will be supporting and bring bringing this issue about their Palestine's independence to several next pivotal meetings in other that getting to get the world's attention and support whole the world.
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