Sammy Todd
Sep 23, 2016
Writing Feedback / Summary: Network theory - TED ED - Marc Samet [3]
Hi ibe13,
There are some problems with grammar in your essay and I see that you are not an experienced writer because the text is not well structured. You need a lot of practice to do thought clear and readable. Maybe you should read about how to write correctly. Mankind has developed many practices and criteria for the correct writing. Nowadays they all are freely available. For example, you can read articles like this: degree way/blog/how-to-write-dissertation-conclusion
Good luck!
Hi ibe13,
There are some problems with grammar in your essay and I see that you are not an experienced writer because the text is not well structured. You need a lot of practice to do thought clear and readable. Maybe you should read about how to write correctly. Mankind has developed many practices and criteria for the correct writing. Nowadays they all are freely available. For example, you can read articles like this: degree way/blog/how-to-write-dissertation-conclusion
Good luck!
