Writing Feedback / TED Summary : Teach every child about food [4]

Hy there.
your essay is good enough, but you need to improve your vocabulary for increasing your vocabulary score.
==> Try to use ( such as ) when you want to give a cople of examples
==> Many children do not know about kinds of vegetables and fruit(s)

Student Talk / Is it right to get your term assignments done by someone else? [11]

I do agree with your statements, but I believe that man just propose and god will dispose, who did their assignments by their own effort they will get more upsides, beside that their skills will improve automatically. Nowdays numerous of job need skills and they will gain the job easily.