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Name: Mariama Posseh Turay
Joined: Oct 13, 2016
Last Post: Oct 21, 2016
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MPT991   
Oct 21, 2016
Scholarship / Proving that it's me who belongs to the future leaders or influencers - Chevening Scholarship [3]

Hi arian, thanks for your comment in my essay
In one of my past job experiences in the women's empowerment project, I faced the problem of motivating and managing the girls and women to write their feelings and start discussions about the critical issues of the day in their society, via social media through essay writing. For the first step, I did network for the under coverage girls and making teams among them to help communicating.

You should state the problems you faced in motivating the girls.

Then, in every team encouraged them to choose a topic for discussion, give their opinions, analyze from various aspects, find the weakness and opportunities and initiate the resolutions, provide recommendation for the improvement, and as a whole, analyze the topic based on their social status:

This sentence is too long, would be easy to understand if you break it into 2 or 3 sentence
I encouraged each team to choose a topic for discussion, share opinions and analyse it from their different perspectives. They also had to find out the weaknesses, opportunities, initiate resolutions and put forward recommendations for improvement.

The plan was that the girls were taking points from the group discussions and by the gotten ideas from the group, they have written their essays.

The ideas they shared during the group discussions helped them in writing their essays.
MPT991   
Oct 15, 2016
Scholarship / My leadership skill was started since I was a student. Chevening Scholarship 2017 [3]

Hi taufikekosusilo, i think you should go over your essay because it has a lot of grammatical error

'At the moment, organization atmosphere had been [...] and communities which support my activity'. It is hard to understand what you are trying to say here.

'At office, the leadership that has been forged since childhood ...'
Putting this sentence this way will be better: The leadership skills i developed during my childhood has made me to become courageous and a creative thinker.
MPT991   
Oct 15, 2016
Scholarship / Being an example for the people. Chevening Scholarship: Leadership and Influeunce Question [2]

Chevening is looking for individuals that will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your own leadership and influencing skills to support your answer.

As a leader, people look up to you and you have to be an example to be able to influence others in order to see the positive change you desire. In other wards if you want to see things change for the better it has to start with you. I came to learn this important lesson the first year I started working at my current job site.

Twenty four hours on call can be really hectic and in order to perform well as a doctor cooperation from the nurses is highly needed. There were few nurses that were committed and took their job seriously. The rest had lackadaisical attitudes. They grumbled and argued when they were asked to do what is required of them. They didn't like working with me during the night because according to them I work too hard and I barely sleep at night especially if there's a critical patient in the ward. The greatest challenge for me was having them perform their duties at night. One night I went into the ward to check on the patients and found all the nurses sleeping.

Even though I was so mad that night I decided I was going to find a way to teach them to take their work seriously and put the interest of the patients first by being an example. Whenever we have difficult cases in the ward or an emergency at night I am always at the forefront, I'm not just the doctor who sits and give instructions after examining a patient. I get involved in attending to the patient, I even helped them with their own tasks if and when they need a helping hand. I encouraged them and I made them understand that the patients are the reason we are in the hospital, therefore when we come to work we should give our all and if it costs us not to sleep at night then we will have to wait until the next day when we are off duty to get all the sleep we need. With the dedication I displayed for my work they've come to understand the importance of their job as well. Today the nurses I work with understand me better, they know that when I'm on duty we have to work and do our best for our patients.

Aside from my work at Emergency Surgical and Paediatric Centre, I also help one of the Senior Consultant Paediatrician in Sierra Leone (now retired from government service) run his private clinic whenever he is out of the country. I draw up a schedule for me and two of my colleagues and make sure each day a doctor is available to see his patients. My colleagues and the nurse will call on me whenever they need help. This has being a good experience for me as it has enhanced my organizational skills.

I believe I have what it takes to be a great leader in Sierra Leone in the future.
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