Writing Feedback / Based on the previous question, what do you think XX's business will be like in the next ten years? [6]

We do not have the previous question, so it may be difficult.

... products are changing people's life lives, XX's physical stores builds build a comfortable ...
Although the are a many obstacles such as China's knockoff [what is this]. , I think XX will maintain its attitude, keep exploiting exploit more designs, and open more locations in more countries.

That's just the first paragraph. Will continue later.

Writing Feedback / Article review _ Are crocodiles warm or cuddly mothers? [2]

/The content is fine, but I could only give more feedback if you tell me the prompt / what are they asking for?

Undergraduate / A free ticket? Does not that sound inspiring? Trip to the capital of the Empire State of Mind [2]

The content is okay and answers the prompt. To conclude the essay, you could summarize what do you plan to do in New York City: basically list down everything that you want to do in a quick sentence. I do not see much errors in punctuation and word choice.