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Writing Feedback / WRITING TASK 2: What can be done to encourage exercising in the elderly? [3]
A properly written 40 minute essay should contain no more than 300 words. By writing almost 400 words, you are actually risking not being able to complete such a discussion during the actual test. You do not have to go into an extended discussion of the given topic. The examiner wishes to read only a simple response that shows your ability to write in academic English and, most importantly, that you can understand English discussion instructions.
In the first paragraph, you will be seen as having established a good restatement. Your response to the first question was uniquely posed, but you failed to properly respond to the second question. Therefore, the thesis statement is incomplete and will be facing deductions because you neglected to answer the second question, thus leaving only a partially relevant writer's opinion for the examiner to read. However, the succeeding discussion paragraphs are well developed and should help you overcome any other deductions your essay may face.
A properly written 40 minute essay should contain no more than 300 words. By writing almost 400 words, you are actually risking not being able to complete such a discussion during the actual test. You do not have to go into an extended discussion of the given topic. The examiner wishes to read only a simple response that shows your ability to write in academic English and, most importantly, that you can understand English discussion instructions.
In the first paragraph, you will be seen as having established a good restatement. Your response to the first question was uniquely posed, but you failed to properly respond to the second question. Therefore, the thesis statement is incomplete and will be facing deductions because you neglected to answer the second question, thus leaving only a partially relevant writer's opinion for the examiner to read. However, the succeeding discussion paragraphs are well developed and should help you overcome any other deductions your essay may face.