afoltz
Oct 19, 2016
Writing Feedback / Computers have contributed to medicine, but they brought many hindrances in human development [4]
Maybe add some more detail to certain parts to get your point across more.
Another benefit is that computers can be used as a great learning supporting tool. Students, for instance, can have access to all sorts of information, ranging from websites like online dictionaries to educational videos.I think this part could use a little more detail. You added a great example to get your point across, just maybe explain more.
Maybe add some more detail to certain parts to get your point across more.
Another benefit is that computers can be used as a great learning supporting tool. Students, for instance, can have access to all sorts of information, ranging from websites like online dictionaries to educational videos.I think this part could use a little more detail. You added a great example to get your point across, just maybe explain more.