Writing Feedback / The peak of malarial death was a bit over 5 million in 1930. [2]

Mosquitoes, Malaria, and Education - Bill Gates

In 1960, there were high rates of death children before the age of five because of some diseases such as diarrhea, pneumonia, and malaria. In the year of 1990 there were a half cut down of childhood death rates because of some changes in community from the rising of income and the use of vaccines. The peak of malarial death was a bit over 5 million in 1930. This disease became more gigantic in not only poor countries but also rich countries such America and European country. The knowledge and innovation has been created to decrease malaria for example the use of DDT or even the use of net to banish the mosquitoes. Developed countries got rid of this disease faster than some countries around the equator with majority are poor country. To get rid from malaria we need many elements in order to eradicate malaria such as communication, scientist, government, etc.

Education also huge problems in this world where some place are still experiencing low education system. People who do not have good education will lead to difficulties in getting a job. Low income people also tend to enter the jail. We have to change the way people believe and make more people equal in getting a job and having an equal salary. Great education is one of the solutions that need to spread all over the place to people. To make an education better can be done by having a great teacher.

Writing Feedback / I totally disagree that banning air travel is the only strategy to stop air pollution. [7]

Air travel is the latest transportation that is available to go anywhere in this world with the shortest time to spent. I totally disagree that banning air travel is the only strategy to stop air pollution.

The development of air travel is the highest number comparing to the other type of travel. Many people use air travel more often than before which can create a huge amount of emission and lead to air pollution. The air travel also has a big influence in making unbalance habitat for some animals especially birds.

However, air travel is one leading type of transportation that can give many advantages for human. Firstly, air travel can save a lot of time for people to move from some part of the world to the other side of the world in short of time. With this advantage, many activities can be done easily and faster. Secondly, with the use of air travel, the aid distributions for some people in conflict or disaster area become more efficient and quick. Thirdly, air travel can make a huge impact for some people in a remote area to go out from their region. The last, restricting air travel in order to prevent pollution is not a good method because the contribution of other transportations such as car and motorcycle also gives a lot of emission to the atmosphere.

To sum up, I believed that restricting air travel is not the best solution in preventing air pollution. There are many advantages from the use of air travel rather than the drawbacks. Many ways in reducing air pollution such as minimize the use of private transportation and planting more trees are the greatest solutions rather than restricting air travel.