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|Discuss advantages and disadvantages of technological devices
3 - Hi, I'm an IELTS learner and here are just some personal suggestions: Firstly, I really appreciate the clear idea...
Writing FeedbackNhatKRK - 19 hrs ago / buiquynhhuong - 11 hrs ago
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: OPINION - SPORT as a controversial matter in school curriculum
3 - Hello bangbangbt! Here are my advice for you! good shape = good body shape they will be pupils will...
Writing Feedbackbangbangbt - 2 days ago / Waterloop - 14 hrs ago
|People should learn about the past despite some drawbacks of studying history
4 - it were written they were invention of penicillin have has can now trying try would more proud...
Writing FeedbackTuanAnh123 - 18 hrs ago / Waterloop - 14 hrs ago
|Environmental protection is the responsibility of politicians, not individuals. IELTS TASK 2
2 - Okay. So, you did not meet the minimum word requirement for this essay. There are percentage points that will...
Writing FeedbackJohnJake - 21 hrs ago / Holt - 17 hrs ago
|IELTS TASK2 - limit the use of cars
2 - This is a pretty effective discussion. You show that you have a clear understanding of the discussion topic and...
Writing Feedbackleerose111 - 1 day ago / Holt - 17 hrs ago
|Government: Conserve endangered species or human being is more important. Both views and opinion?
Writing Feedbacknguyenhoangtung - Jul 8, 2020 / nguyenhoangtung - 1 day ago
|IELTS Book 13 test 3 task 1 - Top 10 countries for the production and consumption of electricity
2 - The word countries signifies the plural form of "country" so there is no need to use an apostrophe after...
Writing FeedbackWaterloop - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|Reading newspapers and books online - CAM 15 | Test 2 | Writing Task 2
Writing FeedbackPhamhatrang - Jul 8, 2020 / Phamhatrang - 1 day ago
|Getting promotion is one of the biggest drives for people - factors which lead people to work hard
Writing FeedbackTinathanh - Jul 8, 2020 / Tinathanh - 2 days ago
|The line graph indicates how the birth rates of China and the USA fluctuated from 1920 to 2000
Writing Feedbacknguyentananhquoc - 2 days ago / nguyentananhquoc - 2 days ago
|Ielts task 2: the impacts of punishment in moral education and the right way to punish children
4 - It appears that you totally misunderstood the original prompt for this essay. The discussion pertains to the necessity of...
Writing Feedbackbuiquynhhuong - Jul 8, 2020 / Holt - 2 days ago
|IELTS TASK 2 - Appearance or Work Quality? Discuss both views.
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 8, 2020 / Holt - 2 days ago
|CASHLESS TRANSACTIONS ESSAY- IELTS TASK 2
4 - The third reasoning paragraph is unnecessary since you are not being asked to discuss the possible drawbacks, repercussions, or...
Writing FeedbackPtp03 - Jul 8, 2020 / Holt - 2 days ago
|The changes in the emission of carbon in four countries in the period from 1967 to 2007
2 - Hi, there :) I think it's better to put your overview into your intro paragraph. That way, you can...
Writing Feedbackleerose111 - Jul 9, 2020 / ravatrav - Jul 9, 2020
|TASK 2: Animal Extinctions - causes and solutions
4 - In truth, the way that you wrote the essay does not really offer clarity in the discussion. You are...
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 7, 2020 / Holt - Jul 9, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: SHOULD THE GOVERNMENT CARRY AND CONTROLL SCIENTIFIC RESEARCH?
2 - You make some relevant points and provide some specific examples to support your arguments, while there are some redundant...
Writing Feedbackththao_99 - Jul 8, 2020 / leerose111 - Jul 9, 2020
|IELTS: people pay to enter museums can help conserve artworks and facilitate sustainable development
Writing FeedbackWaterloop - Jul 7, 2020 / Tinathanh - Jul 8, 2020
|High wages are believed as a prominent part of delighted life rather than a sense of satisfaction
Writing FeedbackElsa - Jul 6, 2020 / Tinathanh - Jul 8, 2020
|IELTS 2 - Diagrams about the life of the salmons - from "fry" to the adult salmons
5 - Thank you so much for your kind advice! I will paraphase next time, have never realised the importance...
Writing FeedbackWaterloop - Jul 6, 2020 / Waterloop - Jul 8, 2020
|Opinion essay: the university is not better than a training center in the process of knowledge
4 - @jhhh11 I'm grateful to hear your contributions. It's really helpful for me <3 @Holt I appreciate all of...
Writing FeedbackTuHuynh051001 - Jul 7, 2020 / TuHuynh051001 - Jul 8, 2020
|Older people struggle with use of modern technology. Reasons and solutions
5 - Clearly you have written under the required word count, and it is likely that you will be penalized for...
Writing FeedbackGATE - Jul 2, 2020 / Ptp03 - Jul 8, 2020
|IELTS Academic 14, test 2: one of the biggest problems of our time is the loss of particular species
6 - I think you should write one more paragraph before the closing to directly give your opinion about this problem....
Writing FeedbackTama Yu - Jul 6, 2020 / ththao_99 - Jul 7, 2020
|IELTS Essay (Task 2): Positive & Negative Effects of IT
3 - Thank you very much for your feedback, @Holt. Would it help if I make some changes to the writing...
Writing Feedbackilmanovski - Jul 1, 2020 / ilmanovski - Jul 7, 2020
|TASK 1: Plastic Bottle Production Process
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 7, 2020 / Holt - Jul 7, 2020
|IELTS Task 1 - Birth and death rates in New Zealand
2 - Hi @lynn1851010065, - Your paraphraph 2 and 3 are quite short (only 2 sentences each) --> You should write...
Writing Feedbacklynn1851010065 - Jul 7, 2020 / jhhh11 - Jul 7, 2020
|TASK 1: Maps of the Olive Drive Area
2 - You did a wonderful job in the summary overview. However, you forgot to indicate which year represented the increase...
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 7, 2020 / Holt - Jul 7, 2020
|Some students decide early in life to pursue vocational careers that involve cooking and baking.
3 - Never start a paraphrase with the phrase "It is true..." because that removes the objectivity of your essay presentation....
Writing Feedbackducpronehaha123 - Jul 7, 2020 / Holt - Jul 7, 2020
|Reasons why local people don't visit these locations as frequent as tourists
Writing Feedbackiamieltstaker - Jul 7, 2020 / Dattranvan1811 - Jul 7, 2020
|Online communication platforms reach out across the globe and befriend others from different nations
3 - You did an acceptable job in the paraphrase section. The only problem that I have with it is that...
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 6, 2020 / Holt - Jul 7, 2020
|Essay about teenage problems
3 - The first problem that heavily weighs down your essay is the lack of proper formatting. Your second paragraph is...
Writing FeedbackJackie08 - Jul 6, 2020 / Holt - Jul 7, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - HIGHER EDUCATION FOR THE PUBLIC
Writing FeedbackHuongGiangNguyen - Jun 30, 2020 / ducpronehaha123 - Jul 7, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: what do you think - are entertainers worth their fortune?
Writing Feedbackblitzer101 - Jul 5, 2020 / blitzer101 - Jul 7, 2020
|GRE Argument Essay : skateboarding prohibition at Central Plaza
NEW - skateboarding's impact on businesses nearby Argument The following appeared as a letter to the editor from a Central...
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|IELTS writing task 2 about government's investment
4 - a deveoped country stable economy stabilise Korean wave were was Korean drama and Korean song. On...
Writing FeedbackElsa - Jun 26, 2020 / Waterloop - Jul 6, 2020
|Writing task 2: discuss about the extinction of animal species
3 - the extinction of animals should be obligated by countries and individuals -> Countries and individuals should shoulder their responsibility...
Writing FeedbackDiepVu99 - Jul 2, 2020 / Waterloop - Jul 6, 2020
|The investments of many governments in the arts are pointless and should be reallocated elsewhere
3 - In my opinion, I am very interested in your ideas as it very clear, but there are some things...
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 6, 2020 / Ellen Trang - Jul 6, 2020
|IELTS writing task 2: Teenage and adult life as the happiest time of lives
3 - The justification paragraphs are not properly formatted. While you did good work in referencing second person pronouns, you should...
Writing Feedbacknaufal abiyyu - Jul 5, 2020 / Holt - Jul 6, 2020
|Essay about reasons and keys to recent situations of local attractions
5 - Your second and third paragraphs need more development. The second paragraph should focus on the reason why people from...
Writing Feedbacknhuquynh20 - Jul 5, 2020 / Holt - Jul 6, 2020
|IELTS: Globalization has both advantages (economy) and disadvantages (diseases)
Writing FeedbackTinathanh - Jul 2, 2020 / Tinathanh - Jul 5, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: provide almost all young adults with access to tertiary education
2 - You did not need to include irrelevant information in the opening paraphrase. Use only the information located in the...
Writing Feedbackbangbangbt - Jul 4, 2020 / Holt - Jul 4, 2020
|IELTS TASK 1: Employment Rates of four Countries (bar graph)
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 3, 2020 / Holt - Jul 4, 2020
|Young generations now spend more time and money following fashion trends. To what extend do you agre
5 - hi, i have some comments for you. 1. you should not use personal example in an academic essay...
Writing FeedbackLUCAS16692000 - Jul 3, 2020 / bangbangbt - Jul 4, 2020
|How has technology improved our daily lives?
Writing Feedbackbadboiz - Jul 2, 2020 / Holt - Jul 3, 2020
|Statistics of people who used Internet among the USA, Canada and Mexico citizens (1999-2009)
2 - You have an acceptable presentation. All the facts are there and the essay can be considered informative for something...
Writing Feedbacktrangianghuongli - Jul 2, 2020 / Holt - Jul 3, 2020
|IELTS Writing Test 2 Part 2 Book 14 Cambridge: Environmental Problems
2 - There are several environmental prompts for the Task 2 test. Without a specific reference to the correct prompt, I...
Writing FeedbackCaoquanbao - Jul 2, 2020 / Holt - Jul 3, 2020
|IELTS: BOTH VIEW - Some people say that there is no need to go the Cinema
2 - You may want to reconsider your word count for the Task 2 essay. As you are required to proof...
Writing FeedbackChloeee - Jul 2, 2020 / Holt - Jul 3, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2: RECRUITMENT ( INNOVATION OR TEAMWORK )
Writing Feedbackmoctutuyen2901 - Jul 2, 2020 / zanjan2010 - Jul 2, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2 : Business and marketing, promotion funds (which makes people buy their products)
Writing Feedbackmoctutuyen - Jul 1, 2020 / moctutuyen - Jul 2, 2020
|The table below shows the percentage of the population by age groups in one town who rode bicyles
Writing Feedbackhatzlyy - Jul 2, 2020 / hatzlyy - Jul 2, 2020
|Topic: Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices is wrong
2 - The prompt requires you to discuss both views and give your opinion. There is no clarity in reference to...
Writing Feedbackducpronehaha123 - Jul 2, 2020 / Holt - Jul 2, 2020
|Explain the main causes and effects of childhood obesity, and sugesst some possible solutions.
3 - You are not properly developing your paragraphs. You need to use related information from topic to topic per paragraph....
Writing FeedbackEllen Trang - Jul 2, 2020 / Holt - Jul 2, 2020
|IELTS Book 10 Test 3 Task 2- more similarities between different countries
3 - There are 2 errors in your opening statement: - Lack of paraphrase for the phrase " the same products...
Writing FeedbackWaterloop - Jul 2, 2020 / Holt - Jul 2, 2020
|IELTS Book 10 Test 3 Task 1 - Charts about the destination of UK graduates and postgraduates in 2008
3 - You did not outline the sectors being measured in the graphs within the summary overview. These sectors will help...
Writing FeedbackWaterloop - Jul 2, 2020 / Holt - Jul 2, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2_ Avantages and Disadvantages of owning a smartphone.
3 - The more appropriate number of words for the Task 2 essay is 275-290 words. An essay written within that...
Writing FeedbackTranNhi - Jul 2, 2020 / Holt - Jul 2, 2020
|The use of mobile phone is as antisocial as smoking. Mobile phone should be banned like smoking?
3 - While your response is correct, your reasoning paragraph could have been better. When asked to give an extent response,...
Writing Feedbackzanjan2010 - Jul 2, 2020 / Holt - Jul 2, 2020
|Certain benefits - advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad
2 - Hi! Here are some feedback based upon my knowledge: - I think that the word "demerit" is not suitable,...
Writing Feedbacksontran18012005 - Jul 2, 2020 / jhhh11 - Jul 2, 2020
|IELTS-Task 1 AGRICULTURAL PRODUCION IN THE EASTERN AND WESTERN REGION-BARRON'S WRITING FOR THE IELTS
Writing FeedbackMinhthuy1993 - Jul 2, 2020 / Minhthuy1993 - Jul 2, 2020
|IELTS ESSAY (task 2). bad news vs positive news
3 - Your prompt restatement fails to present an understandable idea or representation of the original prompt. This is the most...
Writing FeedbackYaghish - Jul 1, 2020 / Holt - Jul 2, 2020
|IELTS TASK 1: Employment Rates of South Korea (line graph)
4 - Hello Mr.Holt, thank you so much for such a valuable comment! However, please forgive me that I am not...
Writing Feedbackjhhh11 - Jul 1, 2020 / jhhh11 - Jul 2, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2: social and practical problems caused due to language barriers
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for providing me the detailed comments on my essay. I am really grateful for...
Writing Feedbackrayng123 - Jun 30, 2020 / rayng123 - Jul 1, 2020
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