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|IELTS TASK 2 Essay about the problem of stress
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - 6 hrs ago / Thangnguyen315 - 2 hrs ago
|The amount of time spent by telephone in the UK, in three categories, over the seven-year period
NEW - UK telephone calls by three categories Topic:The chart below shows the total number of minutes (in billion) of...
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|[IELTS TASK 2] Advantages and disadvantages of genetically-modified foods
2 - @phamhieu98 I personally think that you do not have to wite about which side outweights because the topic does...
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|The population by age groups in one town who rode bicycles in 2011.
Writing FeedbackThao Huynh - 14 hrs ago / yuanyuan123 - 12 hrs ago
|Reasons affecting farmland degradation over the world
3 - Thank you @Maria!!! Your suggestions are helpful, so I corrected my essay as below. Writing this kind of figures...
Writing FeedbackLUNA94 - 2 days ago / LUNA94 - 1 day ago
|IELTS Task 2- Developed and developing nations should both combat climate change
2 - @Katherine_Tu1101 I think you should provide more information in your third paragraph so that your essay can be fully...
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|IELTS TASK 1: A BAR CHART SHOWS IRRITANTS FOR THEATER-GOERS
Writing Feedbackthaley - Jun 21, 2019 / thaley - 1 day ago
|Animal experiments to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products
Writing Feedbacksandyhsu - 1 day ago / Maria - 1 day ago
|The bar chart illustrates the proportion of overweight men and women in Australia
2 - @myronpage Hi there! Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. Firstly, I...
Writing Feedbackmyronpage - 2 days ago / Maria - 1 day ago
|Room for Improvement - Rhetorical Essay Comparison and Contrast
2 - @Martinez1011 Hello there! Let me do my best to provide you with substantial feedback on your essay. ...
Writing FeedbackMartinez1011 - Jun 21, 2019 / Maria - 1 day ago
|IELTS task 1: pie charts about the average percentages of nutrients
4 - Well, As you have some adjustments in the comment so i think you have a good writing here. Just...
Writing Feedbackoneouran - 2 days ago / vietcti - 2 days ago
|IELTS Part II: Should we invest in science education only for the country development.
Writing Feedbackvietcti - Jun 20, 2019 / vietcti - 2 days ago
|Parent's money - CAMBRIDGE IELTS 8 TEST
NEW - Question- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however,...
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|The price of 800 grams of four kinds of bread in a particular European country
Writing FeedbackSangdoan - 2 days ago / Sangdoan - 2 days ago
|The pie charts below compare 2 years in terms of online sale in retail sectors in Canada
Writing Feedbacknochu307 - Jun 20, 2019 / nochu307 - Jun 21, 2019
|The invention of computers is one of the most significant inventions all the time. Academic IELTS
Writing Feedbackotgon - Jun 11, 2019 / otgon - Jun 21, 2019
|Positive & Negative to actions to effect environment
Writing Feedbackyennhi2010 - Jun 20, 2019 / vietcti - Jun 20, 2019
|IELTS Writing Part II: Essay about the positive and negative development of tourism in some country
Writing Feedbackvietcti - Jun 19, 2019 / vietcti - Jun 20, 2019
|Task 1 about the proportion of consumer expenditures on different categories
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Jun 20, 2019 / Thangnguyen315 - Jun 20, 2019
|Pie charts showing data on British students speaking additional languages
4 - @Maria Hi Mara, Thank you very much for your constructive feedback! It helps a lot. I really appreciate...
Writing FeedbackTruc02 - Jun 19, 2019 / Truc02 - Jun 20, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 Essay about the best way to tackle environmental problems
6 - @Maria Thank you very much for giving me such useful feedbacks ! I really appreciate your support :D...
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Jun 16, 2019 / Thangnguyen315 - Jun 20, 2019
|Encouraging the young people to live alone - is it a good idea?
4 - @solivagant Hello there. First and foremost, try to ensure that the language you are using in your articulation...
Writing Feedbacksolivagant - Jun 15, 2019 / Maria - Jun 20, 2019
|IELTS essay Task 1 on Water usage in different areas in the world
3 - @dodquynh Hi there! Next time, it would be beneficial if you could provide the graph alongside your post...
Writing Feedbackdodquynh - Jun 17, 2019 / Maria - Jun 20, 2019
|Investing on the arts is a waste of money - Agree or disagree?
3 - @nguyenvuong Hello there. Let me provide you with feedback on your writing. Firstly, I recommend that you try...
Writing Feedbacknguyenvuong - Jun 16, 2019 / Maria - Jun 20, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: CARE ABOUT ANIMAL EXTINCTION OR HUMAN'S PROBLEM? DISSCUSS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.
4 - @Dang Khoa Hi there! Thanks for being a consistent, active participant in the forum. Let me try my...
Writing FeedbackDang Khoa - Jun 18, 2019 / Maria - Jun 20, 2019
|Genetically modified food as a new solution to agriculture productivity
Writing Feedbackbaonguyen - Jun 19, 2019 / baonguyen - Jun 20, 2019
|The bar chart illustrates the age distribution of Australians who did regular physical activity
Writing Feedbacknthao9987 - Jun 19, 2019 / nthao9987 - Jun 20, 2019
|Should be any financial concession made for people who take option for private schools education?
Writing Feedbacktiffanyvietnam - Jun 19, 2019 / tiffanyvietnam - Jun 20, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - DESCRIBING THE DATA FROM TABLE
4 - @Wendynguyen803 Hi there! Let me try to provide a substantial feedback for your essay. First and foremost,...
Writing FeedbackWendynguyen803 - Jun 13, 2019 / Maria - Jun 19, 2019
|IELTS- parents give more freedom to children nowadays
3 - @Jipsa Jadwani Hi there! First and foremost, ensure that you would have clarity in the delivery of your...
Writing FeedbackJipsa Jadwani - Jun 19, 2019 / Maria - Jun 19, 2019
|What is better: academic or vocational education?
2 - @suong1510 Hi there! Good luck with your exam in October. I'll provide you with feedback on your writing....
Writing Feedbacksuong1510 - Jun 19, 2019 / Maria - Jun 19, 2019
|Writing task 2: education is expensive - funding
5 - I think your ideas are good, and you should reduce redundant words to make your voice stronger. But I...
Writing Feedbackyuanyuan123 - Jun 11, 2019 / suong1510 - Jun 19, 2019
|The chart reveals the data about global sales of IT products (2000 - 2003)
Writing Feedbackmphuonggg - Jun 17, 2019 / mphuonggg - Jun 19, 2019
|Task 1: Table about the annual expenditure of college students
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Jun 18, 2019 / Kate22 - Jun 19, 2019
|IELTS: When designing, the use of a building is the most important, rather than appearance.
5 - @Maria Your comments have been always useful, thank you very much. It was a difficult topic to write, I'll...
Writing Feedbackmanhmoc - Jun 16, 2019 / manhmoc - Jun 19, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: a general thesis that salary is the most vital element of a job
NEW - Question: When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extend do you agree or...
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|Wearing company's uniforms - share your opinion
Writing FeedbackHanNguyen0510 - Jun 18, 2019 / Maria - Jun 18, 2019
|Task 2 Ielts: having a single career or having several careers
5 - @Dang Khoa @HanNguyen Thank you so much for strict comments! They're so useful to me. Please keep doing that!...
Writing FeedbackDiepVu - Jun 17, 2019 / DiepVu - Jun 18, 2019
|Different approaches when it comes to investing in building transport facility
3 - Hi there, Your grammar and word usage are quite proper. However, there are some points that I found in...
Writing Feedbackdodquynh - Jun 17, 2019 / HanNguyen0510 - Jun 18, 2019
|The graph shows the proportion of people visiting 4 destinations in Brighton - period of 1980 & 2010
2 - I think you have a problem in this sentence: ... people going to pier ... Moreover, if you can...
Writing FeedbackMiAnnn - Jun 18, 2019 / DiepVu - Jun 18, 2019
|Task 1: Development of Chorleywood village from the nineteenth to the twentieth century
3 - @Maria Thank you so much I know i have many problems in expression and i'm trying to fix this...
Writing FeedbackDiepVu - Jun 15, 2019 / DiepVu - Jun 18, 2019
|Write your profile for the website of a club you belong to.
Writing Feedbacksossos010101 - Jun 17, 2019 / dodquynh - Jun 17, 2019
|Task 2 - In the past, knowledge was stored on books. Now, knowledge is stored on the internet.
Writing Feedbackacynguyen0909 - Jun 16, 2019 / nguyenvuong - Jun 16, 2019
|An increase in bad behaviors, poor discipline and anti-social behaviors in schools
2 - Dear, Overall, it's quite a good essay. However, I think you can add more contents in the first...
Writing Feedbackmaria4506 - Jun 16, 2019 / Katherine_Tu1101 - Jun 16, 2019
|Task 2- Foreign learning: advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad in the developed countries
6 - @Maria Thank for your feedback. It is so useful and a lot of great words and grammatical clause structure...
Writing FeedbackMinhAnh - Jun 15, 2019 / MinhAnh - Jun 16, 2019
|IELTS-2 : Should we let old languages die?
Writing Feedbacknaomi1993 - Jun 10, 2019 / acynguyen0909 - Jun 16, 2019
|IELTS Task 2: Should people live alone or share accommodation with others?
5 - Hi guy, I would like to contribute some comments on your article. The arguments and ideas you...
Writing Feedbackcoke - Jun 15, 2019 / acynguyen0909 - Jun 16, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: Whether working for one or several places
2 - Dear you, I think you should start your conclusion by using other phrases like: To conclude, In conclusion rather...
Writing FeedbackKatherine_Tu1101 - Jun 16, 2019 / Thangnguyen315 - Jun 16, 2019
|Task 2 - Townsfolk either live alone or in small family units, rather than in large family groups
Writing Feedbackacynguyen0909 - Jun 15, 2019 / acynguyen0909 - Jun 16, 2019
|Universities should provide easier access to poor people or people from rural areas who want study
Writing Feedbackarceus28 - Jun 15, 2019 / maria4506 - Jun 16, 2019
|IELTS writing T2: living in a small family unit or building an extended family?
2 - @nguyenvuong Hello there! I think that, for the most part, your essay is nicely well-written. You were able...
Writing Feedbacknguyenvuong - Jun 15, 2019 / Maria - Jun 15, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: Watching TV is a waste of time. Agree or disagree?
2 - @Dang Khoa Hello! Firstly, be cautious of the formatting and structure of your sentences. While you attempt to...
Writing FeedbackDang Khoa - Jun 15, 2019 / Maria - Jun 15, 2019
|TASK 1 ( IELTS ACADEMIC ) Outokumpu companies share price - LINE GRAPH
3 - @MiAnnn Hi there! Welcome to the forum. I'll try to provide you with feedback on your essay. ...
Writing FeedbackMiAnnn - Jun 15, 2019 / Maria - Jun 15, 2019
|Pictures - Describe the cutting tools
Writing Feedbackbuiminhese - Jun 13, 2019 / Dang Khoa - Jun 15, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1: Marriage Statistics of 8 countries in 2 different years
3 - Thx @nguyenvuong, i just realise that run-one sentence is quite good if we add them, it makes our essay...
Writing FeedbackDang Khoa - Jun 14, 2019 / Dang Khoa - Jun 15, 2019
|IELTS 2 - Fair Judgement - the best way to reduce crime is by giving longer prison?
3 - Hi guy, I think a thesis statement should be written in the opening paragraph. Your essay will be...
Writing Feedbacknguyenvuong - Jun 14, 2019 / acynguyen0909 - Jun 15, 2019
|Some people believe that the only purpose of films are entertain - what about education?
Writing FeedbackDangKhoaBui - Jun 14, 2019 / acynguyen0909 - Jun 15, 2019
|Increasing travel between countries enable people to learn different cultures or increase tension
2 - ... culture varyies from... ... destination, having doing/making a short ... ... increaseing travel ... development of the...
Writing Feedbackmurph - Jun 14, 2019 / thaonguyen1st - Jun 14, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 - Children spend time playing computer
Writing Feedbackacynguyen0909 - Jun 13, 2019 / acynguyen0909 - Jun 14, 2019
|IN MODERN WORLD, THE IMAGE IS BECOMING A MORE POWERFUL WAY OF COMMUNICATING THAN THE WRITTEN WORD
NEW - Hello¡ I am applying to a College program in Canada, and how English is not my first language, I...
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