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|Teenagers' Preference for Fast Food Restaurants in Vietnam and Indonesia
NEW - the choice of particular fast food chains The pie chart presents the proportion of teenagers' preference for three...
Writing Feedbackirsaqisthi - 5 hrs ago / — -
|Writing Task 1 (Pie Charts describing about 3 most preferred FF Restaurants in Viet and Indo)
3 - Instead of using "youngers", you can use "youngsters" as an alternative term to "teenagers". However is usually used in...
Writing FeedbackZaenal_Ipin_ES_I - 8 hrs ago / irsaqisthi - 5 hrs ago
|Writing Task 1 Line Chart Transportation used to travel and to work in one European City
NEW - The diagram illustrates the percentage of several modes of transport used to travel and to work in one European...
Writing FeedbackMahmud30 - 6 hrs ago / — -
|The increase in the amount of waste production. Why is this happening?
2 - Helllooo there..., Could you please submit the question? The introduction you write is good, but it needs...
Writing FeedbackXuan An - 6 hrs ago / eddies - 6 hrs ago
|[IELTS WRITING TASK 2] Rewarding outstanding employees by giving them extra money
Writing FeedbackUN27042000 - Dec 5, 2019 / HanNguyen0510 - 6 hrs ago
|IELTS - Writing task 1 IELTS Oman and Spain Populations by its citizens' age
2 - Task achievement Try to understand the basic grammar be aware of using comma. You write to complicated just make...
Writing Feedbackyasabh - 8 hrs ago / Mahmud30 - 6 hrs ago
|Writing Task 1 Pie Charts 3 Fast Food Restaurants in Vietnam and Indonesia over the 10-year period
2 - Task Achievement: > You are not allowed to add an irrelevant personal opinion. > The data is not about...
Writing FeedbackMahmud30 - 10 hrs ago / eddies - 7 hrs ago
|IELTS Writing task 1 - The rate of women's literacy and population growth in selected countries
NEW - Good evening everyone! Would you mind to give me some advice for my writing task 1? Below are the...
Writing FeedbackHanglmk - 8 hrs ago / — -
|IELTS Writing Task 1 : Percentage of three known Fast Food Restaurants in two Asian countries
2 - Task Achievement > The introduction is good, but you fail to deliver the message clearly. You cannot start the...
Writing Feedbacksantrinabawi - 12 hrs ago / eddies - 8 hrs ago
|Visitors numbers to Ashdown Museum before and after its renovation
NEW - Hi! This piece of writing is for IELTS Writing Task 1. Comments/criticism/suggestions please! Summarise the information from the...
Writing FeedbackTriceLiu - 8 hrs ago / — -
|The proportion of Omani and Spaniard people by age
2 - Task Achievement: > you attempt to write the overview, but you fail to use this accurately. The differences in...
Writing FeedbackGhitamalia - 12 hrs ago / eddies - 8 hrs ago
|The proportion of population by age in Oman and Spain
2 - Task Achievement: - You need to first include the picture, so this helps readers understand the graph and...
Writing Feedbackkanzanism - 12 hrs ago / eddies - 9 hrs ago
|Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be?
NEW - local filmmakers lack of support The film industry has made significant contributions to each country's economy. However, there...
Writing Feedbackmaika0211 - 13 hrs ago / — -
|IELTS TASK 2 - Are celebrities over-paid ?
NEW - salary for entertainers Some feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sport stars are paid...
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - 14 hrs ago / — -
|Describe a fear you had to overcome. How did you overcome it? (TOEFL Independent Writing)
2 - @Sunrise011 Although i'm not really a Toefl contestant, I think your essay is pretty good with clear structure and...
Writing FeedbackSunrise011 - 2 days ago / Thangnguyen315 - 15 hrs ago
|In the chart the percentage of people using multiple social networking sites; Ielts 2
Writing Feedbackbaohii2001 - 2 days ago / baohii2001 - 1 day ago
|SOP for my application in German university in master in mechatronics and robotics program.
NEW - Hello everyone, I am applying for master program in mechatronics and robotics and I am new to this...
Writing FeedbackRushilkumar - 1 day ago / — -
|Single career or several careers or ways of earning money and further studying
NEW - Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic: ...
Writing Feedbackhungxd08 - 1 day ago / — -
|International travel is becoming cheaper, countries are open their doors to more and more tourists
2 - Hi, Please consider some my comments on your essay. 1. Firstly, I think you should not confirm that "This...
Writing FeedbackLinh Nguyen Mai - 2 days ago / hungxd08 - 1 day ago
|Describe charts showing students' opinions about services in their university library-Task1 Ielts
2 - Dear Tamtran, I believe you have a clear understanding of the dos and don'ts of explaining charts, yet, I...
Writing Feedbacktamtran - 2 days ago / Sunrise011 - 2 days ago
|What are the characteristics of a good coach? (TOEFL Independent Writing)
NEW - a combination of various values and qualities It is common between people to think that coaches withhold a...
Writing FeedbackSunrise011 - 2 days ago / — -
|What factors influence decisions which news content print in newspapers and which broadcast on TV?
2 - @hungxd08 Hi! I would like to give you some opinions about the introduction of the essay. ... an...
Writing Feedbackhungxd08 - 2 days ago / tamtran - 2 days ago
|Teachers and schools for child development - Ielts writing task 2 evaluation and opinion
3 - Dear Vicky, Overall, you have some grammatical and structural errors. However, I think the issue of your essay...
Writing Feedbackb791129 - 2 days ago / Sunrise011 - 2 days ago
|Essay about having little leisure time and studying under a lot of pressure of youngster
3 - @Maria Thank you very much for your review. I hope i can edit these mistakes in the following essays...
Writing FeedbackHarry Nguyen - Dec 8, 2019 / Harry Nguyen - 2 days ago
|In recent years, some kind of animals are running the risk of extinction - their name is on red list
2 - Hi there! I would like to give several suggestions: 1. The first reason is human's illegal hunting activities...
Writing FeedbackLeetequila - 2 days ago / TriceLiu - 2 days ago
|Should rich nations share their strength with others?
3 - Dear Maria, Thank you for your very valuable comments! I read my essay again and I really realise the...
Writing Feedbackhungxd08 - Dec 8, 2019 / hungxd08 - 2 days ago
|Is ability to relate to others enough to end up being successful ?
Writing Feedbackshahabs1992 - Dec 8, 2019 / shahabs1992 - 2 days ago
|Freedom of Speech and the Internet
3 - @bettybetty17940 Welcome to the forum! This is my feedback - hopefully, you are able to learn something from it....
Writing Feedbackbettybetty17940 - Dec 7, 2019 / Maria - 2 days ago
|Create a promotional brochure about a man-made wonder of Viet Nam
2 - @baotran114 Welcome to the forum. I hope my feedback helps you improve this brochure. Be extra cautious when...
Writing Feedbackbaotran114 - Dec 8, 2019 / Maria - 2 days ago
|The number of bee colonies and how much honey they produce
2 - @majid61 Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback of mine gives you insight on how to improve...
Writing Feedbackmajid61 - Dec 7, 2019 / Maria - 2 days ago
|IELTS WRITING TASK2 - Free Subjects Decisions?
2 - @roswita116 Hi, thanks for coming to the forum! I'll be giving you feedback on this writing. First and...
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Dec 6, 2019 / Maria - 2 days ago
|IELTS writing task 2: The freedom of the media
5 - I think your essay is quite good enough. However, I think it might be considered carefully as follow: 1.Some...
Writing Feedbackskeptical - Dec 4, 2019 / hungxd08 - Dec 8, 2019
|Essay about whether human fight against climate change or finding new habitable planet?
Writing Feedbackd1a9t99 - Dec 1, 2019 / d1a9t99 - Dec 8, 2019
|[MAP - task 1 IELTS] Map description about changes after the hydroelectric power dam was build
Writing Feedbackphamnhuphuong - Dec 6, 2019 / phamnhuphuong - Dec 7, 2019
|IELTS GT 2 worldwide trend of vegetarianism which supposed to be beneficial to our health
6 - Thank you both @roswita116 & @eddies! Your comments do help a lot and yeah, writing introduction and conclusion...
Writing Feedbackplforielts - Dec 1, 2019 / plforielts - Dec 7, 2019
|IELTS Writing 2: Compulsory unpaid community service for high school students
2 - @TriceLiu Hello, I would like to share my feedback to your writing. Firstly, You have a well written...
Writing FeedbackTriceLiu - Dec 6, 2019 / XPROFF - Dec 6, 2019
|In some countries at secondary or high school, there may be two streams of study
2 - @hoangrobin Hello, welcome to the forum! I hope that my feedback gives you an idea on how to improve...
Writing Feedbackhoangrobin - Dec 4, 2019 / Maria - Dec 6, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 1 - coffee and bananas sales statistics in five countries
2 - Hellloooo there, let me help you with some feedback. Let's start with the opening paragraph. Here I see that...
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Dec 6, 2019 / eddies - Dec 6, 2019
|Solving the pollution caused by plastic bag
2 - @Nguyenvananh Hi there. I would like to give you some feedbacks about your writing.😁😁 First of all, I...
Writing FeedbackNguyenvananh - Dec 6, 2019 / roswita116 - Dec 6, 2019
|WRITING TASK 2: TRUTH AND LIE
2 - @thanhtu98 Hi there. I would like to give you some feedbacks about your writing.😁😁 As I can see...
Writing Feedbackthanhtu98 - Dec 6, 2019 / roswita116 - Dec 6, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2- Benefits and Risks of people living to 150
3 - Your essay is good, but I think you just use simple sentence and repeat some words. When you mention...
Writing Feedbackroswita116 - Dec 4, 2019 / thaithu - Dec 6, 2019
|WRITING TASK 2: Colours impact on people
3 - @roswita116 thanks for your comments. I consider part 2 in my essay mentioning the influence of colour on health...
Writing Feedbackthaithu - Dec 4, 2019 / thaithu - Dec 6, 2019
|The life difficulties in a foreign country where you cannot speak your mother language
Writing Feedbacksue0504 - Dec 4, 2019 / XPROFF - Dec 5, 2019
|Decisions of children - parents? - IELTS TASK 2 essay, review
2 - @prachirai Hi, there. I would like to give you some feedback about your writing.😁😁 Your writing is well-structured...
Writing Feedbackprachirai - Dec 3, 2019 / roswita116 - Dec 4, 2019
|Writing task 2 : More and more young people are leaving school but unable to find jobs
Writing FeedbackPTTu - Dec 3, 2019 / thaithu - Dec 4, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: Advertising on some food should be banned as cigarettes or not?
3 - @Bastian thank you very much for your help, your correction is so helpful and understandable. I just wonder does...
Writing Feedbackthaithu - Dec 3, 2019 / thaithu - Dec 4, 2019
|Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced.
Writing FeedbackYunSoo - Dec 3, 2019 / XPROFF - Dec 4, 2019
|IELTS GT WRITING TASK 1: You would like to do a PT job while you are studying in another country
Writing Feedbackplforielts - Dec 1, 2019 / plforielts - Dec 4, 2019
|ielts task 2 (agree or disagree that wealthy countries should help poor countries.............)
Writing Feedbacklaabobe - Dec 1, 2019 / izecsony5 - Dec 3, 2019
|Both homes and schools have an equal meaning in shaping kids to become well-rounded citizens
Writing Feedbackphanhyeudoi1711 - Dec 1, 2019 / phanhyeudoi1711 - Dec 3, 2019
|Studying at university or college compared to get a job straight after school
2 - @thiannie I'm here to give feedback on your writing. Don't hesitate to approach once more if you have any...
Writing Feedbackthiannie - Dec 2, 2019 / Maria - Dec 2, 2019
|Gaming skills are very beneficial and functional for being successful in your life.
2 - @bita92 Welcome to the forum! Don't hesitate to ask if you have any other questions after reading my feedback....
Writing Feedbackbita92 - Dec 1, 2019 / Maria - Dec 2, 2019
|Spending comparison among five countries - ielts task 1 writing
2 - @windy Hello! It would be helpful if you would include the table's photo for the people in the forum...
Writing Feedbackwindy - Dec 1, 2019 / Maria - Dec 2, 2019
|IELTS Task 1 mixed with table and pie chart - people in Australia
2 - @dhcuber Hello, welcome to the forum! I hope that the feedback you receive from me somewhat helps you in...
Writing Feedbackdhcuber - Nov 30, 2019 / Maria - Dec 2, 2019
|Writing task 2: Testing on animals - experiments to develop new medicines
2 - Hi @phanvantai96qb! Since I am not an english-expert for IELTS, I will give my opinion about your essay...
Writing Feedbackphanvantai96qb - Dec 1, 2019 / izecsony5 - Dec 1, 2019
|A summary of an article on The Guardian about phenomenon brain drain and its causes
2 - @HienRyan Hey, welcome to the forum! I hope that the feedback you receive here becomes helpful for you. Don't...
Writing FeedbackHienRyan - Nov 29, 2019 / Maria - Nov 30, 2019
|Translation of an article about remote work. (Needs revision)
Writing FeedbackNasridean - Nov 28, 2019 / Nasridean - Nov 30, 2019
|Online Studing - Positive or Negative? - IELTS Writing Task 2
2 - @thinhvuduc1210 Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I'm here to give you feedback on your writing - and I...
Writing Feedbackthinhvuduc1210 - Nov 29, 2019 / Maria - Nov 29, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2 (to speak a foreign language can cause problems)
2 - @phantommandy Hi there. Thanks for coming to the forum! I hope that this feedback gives you an idea of...
Writing Feedbackphantommandy - Nov 29, 2019 / Maria - Nov 29, 2019
|Ielts task 2 - knowing how to behave well and learn god manners - such wisdom from school or home?
2 - @kl8600530z Hi. Thanks for coming to the site! I hope that the feedback you receive here becomes helpful for...
Writing Feedbackkl8600530z - Nov 28, 2019 / Maria - Nov 28, 2019
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