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|IELTS Writing Task 2 -Task: describe your opinion of sense of competition or co-operation is better
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|Both passion and colleague relationship might influence people's enjoyment of a job.
NEW - Ielts writing task 2 job satisfaction As most people spend a major part of their adult life at...
Writing Feedbackjocelyne001 - 14 hrs ago / — -
|Besides reading, writing, and Math, the computer skills can be also necessary for a child
2 - Hi,I have some suggestion about your writing " a wide range " in the second paragraph is a phrase...
Writing Feedbackzcs2008china - 1 day ago / vuvietha - 22 hrs ago
|In many countries not enough students are choosing to study science subject. Causes and effects?
2 - personally, I think that you should avoiding using "..." in your writing. instead, using different phrase such as "...
Writing FeedbackVivian0209 - 1 day ago / vuvietha - 23 hrs ago
|The line graph illustrates data on how much car commuter in Britain (1990-2030)
2 - Hello In the first paragraph, you wrote data on how much car commuter which has different meaning from...
Writing FeedbackNgocnam2k - 1 day ago / jocelyne001 - 1 day ago
|Soil degradation - ielts writing task 1 pie chart and table
2 - Hello Personally speaking, firstly, it's not appropriate to use abbreviations (NA, E, O) in the essay because Ielts...
Writing Feedbacknohope123 - 2 days ago / jocelyne001 - 1 day ago
|On Tackling Congestion in Chinese Cities
NEW - Hi, the following is a practice essay about congestion in China. Suggestions will be appreciated :) Over the...
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|The question - what is the right age for the children to start learning a new language
5 - @kev2 I think using only 2 sentences for the first paragraph is enough. Perhaps you can write like: "People...
Writing Feedbackkev2 - 2 days ago / Veranda - 1 day ago
|The two bar charts compare four levels of residents' weights in Charlestown by percentage
NEW - Ielts writing task 1 bar charts - weight ASSESSMENT The charts summarise the weight measurements of people living...
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|Essay about the air pollutants in UK
Writing Feedbackanhxinh99 - 2 days ago / TriceLiu - 2 days ago
|IELTS - using laptops and mobile phones, during lessons is a good way to encourage children to learn
Writing FeedbackJane Wong - 2 days ago / Jane Wong - 2 days ago
|30-year price of three food product groups and CPI in The Line Chart
NEW - IELTS Writing task 1 Line Chart The line graph gives information about changes in price for three different...
Writing Feedbackiamxuu - 2 days ago / — -
|Do the advantages of learning a foreign language at primary school outweigh the disadvantages?
2 - Hello~ I only have two suggestions. I think you can add a little explanation about why people have...
Writing FeedbackVeranda - Aug 20, 2019 / jocelyne001 - 2 days ago
|Some people think that it is best to live in a horizontal city while others think of a vertical city
Writing Feedbackvuvietha - Aug 19, 2019 / vuvietha - Aug 20, 2019
|Working before studying - paper
Writing FeedbackCuong Trinh - Aug 19, 2019 / Cuong Trinh - Aug 20, 2019
|Ielts Writing task 2- Banning the use of mobile phones
2 - The opening, structure and conlusion of your essay is good, But there are mistakes in grammar and sentence formations....
Writing FeedbackHuyBryce - Aug 19, 2019 / sujith1993 - Aug 20, 2019
|UK school spending - How to describe a pie chart in Ielts 8 writing task 1 ?
Writing FeedbackKaren Chick TY - Aug 13, 2019 / Karen Chick TY - Aug 19, 2019
|Letter to a friend asking for help with translation of documents
3 - @coke Hi there. Thanks for consistently being a member of the forum. I hope you're doing well. I'll try...
Writing Feedbackcoke - Aug 19, 2019 / Maria - Aug 19, 2019
|Ielts writing task 2 - technology impact on tradition
4 - @coke OK~thank you! I think maybe I should add more details there to explain my idea, so it would...
Writing Feedbackjocelyne001 - Aug 19, 2019 / jocelyne001 - Aug 19, 2019
|You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors the city
Writing FeedbackQuoccuong - Aug 16, 2019 / coke - Aug 19, 2019
|How to convince about an Open Education Organization's activities and goals
4 - Open Education Organization is dedicated to serve the needs of the Afghan women and girls in provinces by providing...
Writing Feedbackmasomakarimi - Aug 18, 2019 / masomakarimi - Aug 19, 2019
|Pie charts - Result of surveys of visitor satisfaction-IELTS Writing task 1
2 - Hello~ I think the essay is generally good, only a little suggestion. Maybe you can try to change...
Writing FeedbackRhiza - Aug 18, 2019 / jocelyne001 - Aug 19, 2019
|Work commuting transportation - Ielts writing task 1 pie charts
Writing Feedbackjocelyne001 - Aug 18, 2019 / jocelyne001 - Aug 19, 2019
|Factors contributing to job satisfaction and the prospect of job satisfaction for all workers.
Writing FeedbackVeranda - Aug 18, 2019 / Veranda - Aug 18, 2019
|Essay about climate change and bringing awareness. (Rough Draft)
3 - @landon7192 Hi. Welcome, dear! All of this feedback is geared towards helping you in your writing endeavors. I hope...
Writing Feedbacklandon7192 - Aug 17, 2019 / Maria - Aug 18, 2019
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2: children are becoming overweight and unhealthy
4 - @longbango Hi there. Welcome to the forum. If you find this feedback helpful, I hope you come back for...
Writing Feedbacklongbango - Aug 16, 2019 / Maria - Aug 18, 2019
|Some people believe that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
6 - I think it's better not to repeat too many times the same words from the title such as cultural...
Writing FeedbackKerlion - Aug 15, 2019 / jocelyne001 - Aug 18, 2019
|ESSAY ABOUT INVESTING TO FAST-TRAIN OR PUBLIC TRANSPORTATION
3 - @GotoIelts Hi! I have some suggestions to improve your essay: 1. whether the government should spend. ("whereas" is inappropriate...
Writing FeedbackGotoIelts - Aug 16, 2019 / Veranda - Aug 18, 2019
|An opinion: if someone pays for a private school, he or she also supports the state education system
3 - @emins Hello! I have some suggestions to improve your essay. 1. You should not explain anything in the introductory...
Writing Feedbackemins - Aug 17, 2019 / Veranda - Aug 18, 2019
|IELTS Task1: the number of visitors and result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were
3 - Thank you so much Maria! Your suggestion is really helpful for me. Can you also give me some comment...
Writing Feedbackanggietw - Aug 16, 2019 / anggietw - Aug 18, 2019
|A good sports person or musician are born or can be taught?
Writing FeedbackVeranda - Aug 17, 2019 / Veranda - Aug 18, 2019
|Ielts writing task 2: education distance learning is quite efficient and convenient
Writing Feedbackjocelyne001 - Aug 17, 2019 / jocelyne001 - Aug 18, 2019
|The report about ten nations dominating the world in the rice industry in thousands of tons
Writing FeedbackHannah Trang - Aug 16, 2019 / Hannah Trang - Aug 18, 2019
|IELTS Writing TASK 1: Languages with the most native speakers
Writing FeedbackDanggDang - Aug 17, 2019 / DanggDang - Aug 18, 2019
|Families who send their children to private school shouldn't pay taxes that support education system
5 - You should try avoiding using in conclusion as a way to close your essay out you want to have...
Writing FeedbackTrinhca - Aug 14, 2019 / colt2002 - Aug 17, 2019
|IELTS Task1: Money Spent and Consumption of Fast Food in Britian
2 - @Rae Zhang Hello. Welcome here. I hope you're doing well in your learning journey. If you find this feedback...
Writing FeedbackRae Zhang - Aug 16, 2019 / Maria - Aug 17, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1 (GENERAL) You are studying for a qualification, and you need some time off work
2 - @KAURNAVI Hello. It's nice to see people constantly coming back to the forum. I hope you find this feedback...
Writing FeedbackKAURNAVI - Aug 16, 2019 / Maria - Aug 17, 2019
|Essay task 1 : the change in percentage of people joinning in seven sports in an European country
2 - @ronaldocr9803 Hi. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find this feedback helpful. If you do, you can come...
Writing Feedbackronaldocr9803 - Aug 16, 2019 / Maria - Aug 17, 2019
|The climate changing - even more crucial than species extinction?
4 - With the advent of technology, environmental problems affecting the earth inadequately. One of these troubles is the loss of...
Writing Feedbackf22542727 - Aug 14, 2019 / KAURNAVI - Aug 16, 2019
|WRITING IELTS TASK 1: The process of milk production
Writing Feedbackzigzagboy001 - Aug 15, 2019 / zigzagboy001 - Aug 15, 2019
|The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money
2 - @KAURNAVI Hello. It's great to see how enthusiastic you have been with all of this. I hope you find...
Writing FeedbackKAURNAVI - Aug 14, 2019 / Maria - Aug 15, 2019
|IELTS TASK 1(GENERAL) an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes
2 - @KAURNAVI Hi. Thanks for returning here! I hope to provide you with writing feedback for your essay. The...
Writing FeedbackKAURNAVI - Aug 14, 2019 / Maria - Aug 15, 2019
|Writing IELTS TASK 1: World Meat Production, 1950-1990
Writing FeedbackGrahyta24 - Aug 12, 2019 / ahsan_daniyal - Aug 14, 2019
|Some people think that newspapers are the best way to learn news
Writing Feedbackluuly24052002 - Aug 14, 2019 / Trinh Duy Hung - Aug 14, 2019
|Task 2: Internet problems and needed solutions like more rigorous regulations
3 - @Maria Thank you for spending time with my essays and giving me feedbacks! I really appreciate it...
Writing FeedbackThangnguyen315 - Aug 13, 2019 / Thangnguyen315 - Aug 14, 2019
|(150 words) support the argument that secondary school students shouldn't play too much
2 - ... students are had not better not to waste their time ... There are tons of some undeniable...
Writing Feedbackieltsforbest - Aug 14, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 14, 2019
|More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country.
2 - In this globalization era, it can be seen that the number of students choosing to ... countries who study...
Writing Feedbackflinny_soll - Aug 14, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 14, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 The qualities and skills that a person requires to become successful
2 - You wrote the essay very good and also used uncommon words, such as triumphant, vehemently espouse, etc. I...
Writing FeedbackKAURNAVI - Aug 14, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 14, 2019
|The pictures illustrate how Meadowside Village and its neighbouring town Fonton have developed
Writing Feedbackmoon812 - Aug 13, 2019 / moon812 - Aug 14, 2019
|Food waste is one of the biggest problems facing mankind today
3 - @Maria Thank you for your feedback. I've tried replacing the second sentence of my first paragraph by:" There are...
Writing FeedbackAnthony VuNguyen - Aug 13, 2019 / Anthony VuNguyen - Aug 14, 2019
|What does matter more: teaching domestic or international history?
3 - @vulong79 Hello there. Seeing as you are new here, I welcome you to the forum! I hope you find...
Writing Feedbackvulong79 - Aug 13, 2019 / Maria - Aug 13, 2019
|Job satisfaction. Is it possible to achieve this by all employees?
2 - @min0822 Hi there. Welcome back here to the forum. I hope you find this feedback helpful for your writing...
Writing Feedbackmin0822 - Aug 13, 2019 / Maria - Aug 13, 2019
|Causes and Results of Rising Global Population
2 - @jocelyn wang Hello. I hope you're learning from the feedback you're gathering here. I'm here to provide you with...
Writing Feedbackjocelyn wang - Aug 11, 2019 / Maria - Aug 13, 2019
|IELTS2- READING BOOKS VS COMPUTER & TV
2 - I think you should focus more on why you agree that reading is better for children. The second paragraph...
Writing Feedbacks410377088 - Aug 13, 2019 / min0822 - Aug 13, 2019
|More physical education lessons in schools to control the obesity
Writing Feedbackhusimplicity - Aug 12, 2019 / husimplicity - Aug 13, 2019
|IELTS writing task 2- global warming - cause and solution
Writing FeedbackTienhjhjhj0201 - Aug 13, 2019 / Tienhjhjhj0201 - Aug 13, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Car ownership in Canada; how many citizens owns one car or more
Writing FeedbackA Jhaveri - Aug 11, 2019 / s410377088 - Aug 13, 2019
|IELTS task 1: sales of fairtrade-labeled coffee and bananas
3 - Try to post the picture on your article next time~ In your introduction, try to rephrase the sentence...
Writing Feedbackmin0822 - Aug 11, 2019 / s410377088 - Aug 13, 2019
|Solving traffic problems by taxing people who possess a car
2 - For the intro, you should: first, paraphrase the question. for example: Governments raise private car taxes and use the...
Writing Feedbacknguyenduc - Aug 12, 2019 / Grahyta24 - Aug 12, 2019
|The amount of goods transported in the UK from 1974 to 2002 included road, water, rail, pipeline
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