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|Streamer - A new job in my country
NEW - the potential of live stream In many country, live stream already became an activity that you can earn...
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|Home work has disadvantages, but it's helpful for students
2 - This is unfortunately a bad essay. The first sentence for example; the reader doesn't understand what you are trying...
Writing FeedbackCamVan2411 - 5 hrs ago / Patryk0206 - 5 hrs ago
|IELTS2 - Changes in family structures and family roles; fewer household members and working parents
Writing FeedbackPatryk0206 - 8 hrs ago / Patryk0206 - 6 hrs ago
|Childhood obesity: causes, consequences and possible solutions
NEW - the traumatic problem It is true that childhood obesity is a traumatic problem with human.Although there will undoubtedly...
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|The widespread use of the internet has affected people life in mostly positive way.
NEW - Please help me to evaluate this essay. Kindly give your comment and feedback about this essay in this thread....
Writing Feedbackmartinasp - 12 hrs ago / — -
|Advantages of reading online - cheapness, convenience, and portability
2 - Hello @tranphuongnhi After reading your essay, i found out that this sentence is confusing. "e-readers can be convenient and...
Writing Feedbacktranphuongnhi - 14 hrs ago / martinasp - 12 hrs ago
|People have little understanding of the importance of the natural world, what measures can be taken?
2 - Hello vital the natural surroundings are of many causes, and there are several actions that ... I have some...
Writing Feedbackkimmy2105 - 1 day ago / tranphuongnhi - 14 hrs ago
|Whoever controls the media, have the power to control people. IELTS WRITING TASK 2
Writing Feedbackjocelyn wang - 1 day ago / jocelyn wang - 5 hrs ago
|The two bar charts divulge the amount of marriages and divorces from 1970 to 2000 - IELTS
Writing Feedbackttttiffanyyyy - 1 day ago / ttttiffanyyyy - 10 hrs ago
|IELTS1:THE CHART SHOWS THE PERCENTAGE OF MALE AND FEMALE WHO WERE OVERWEIGHT IN AUSTRALIA 1980, 2010
2 - @tinapakshad1 Hi there. I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. Overall, your writing is put-together. I would...
Writing Feedbacktinapakshad1 - 1 day ago / Maria - 1 day ago
|Diagrams illustrate how an island developed during some period of time
2 - @thanhtra22 Hello there. Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with writing feedback that I hope will be somewhat...
Writing Feedbackthanhtra22 - 1 day ago / Maria - 1 day ago
|IELTs Writing Task 2 - would life be simpler with just few languages in the world?
Writing FeedbackYHLin - 1 day ago / YHLin - 15 hrs ago
|Home ownership and renting comparison for 1991 and 2007, in percentage term in the UK.
2 - @tuan26816 Hello there. Welcome to the forum. Next time, it would be helpful to provide the charts or graphs...
Writing Feedbacktuan26816 - 1 day ago / Maria - 1 day ago
|Water heating and greenhouse gas - IELTS chart
Writing Feedbackshellawillyam - 1 day ago / shellawillyam - 17 hrs ago
|Different amount of holiday entitlement
2 - But, I believe we need to ...--> I think we should use however, instead of but. which is based...
Writing Feedbacksolivagant - 2 days ago / tralamdinh - 1 day ago
|IETLS WRITING TASK 1: Overweight Australian men and Women
Writing Feedbackkimmy2105 - 2 days ago / kimmy2105 - 1 day ago
|Study individually or in group - IELTS taks 2 : discuss both view
NEW - i'm learning IELTS at home and i'm bad at writing skill. I really appropriate that you give me feedback....
Writing Feedbackdnlinh - 2 days ago / — -
|The obesity of people rises and their health condition is getting worse
3 - Hi, it's just my suggestion to help your essay better. In the Body, +"Firstly, modern citizens tend to ..."...
Writing Feedbacklinhchin - 2 days ago / kimmy2105 - 2 days ago
|Economic growth as a solution for poverty and hunger? What about environment degradation?
3 - Hi, just my opinion and suggestion to better your essay. In the Introduction, it should be " due to...
Writing FeedbackNmnhucam98 - 2 days ago / kimmy2105 - 2 days ago
|IELTS: Discuss both advantages and disadvantages of the Internet - information online
2 - hi, personally, I think your essay is off topic. The task asks you to discuss the statement : ......
Writing Feedbacklichien0422 - 2 days ago / linhchin - 2 days ago
|IELTS task 2 Different between online news and paper based news
4 - hi I think it is not allowed to start task 2 essays with questions since it sounds more journalistic...
Writing FeedbackDevon Cheng - 2 days ago / linhchin - 2 days ago
|IELTS task2: Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups.
3 - Hi @tinapakshad1! I will try to provide you with a helpful feedback. First, you used some words and phrases...
Writing Feedbacktinapakshad1 - Jul 14, 2019 / solivagant - 2 days ago
|Some argue that history is is of great importance in school, others vote for science and technology.
Writing FeedbackHadiep - Jul 14, 2019 / lichien0422 - 1 day ago
|IELTS writing task 2: All jobs will be done by artificial intelligent robots eventually
Writing Feedbacklichien0422 - Jul 13, 2019 / tinapakshad1 - Jul 14, 2019
|HAS INTERNET AFFECTED PEOPLE NEGATIVELY?
2 - @Annie Kristin Hello there. Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with feedback to assist you in your writing....
Writing FeedbackAnnie Kristin - Jul 13, 2019 / Maria - Jul 13, 2019
|Get exercise - The growing number of overweight people and health care system.
3 - Hi I like the idea you wrote here. However, you have to be careful of several verb/grammar choices....
Writing Feedbackcsesaswati - Jul 12, 2019 / lichien0422 - Jul 13, 2019
|Housework sharing between women and men
2 - @solivagant Hello there. Your overall writing style has improved tremendously over the past weeks. Great job! You had a...
Writing Feedbacksolivagant - Jul 12, 2019 / Maria - Jul 12, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2 : Hobbies need to be difficult?
2 - @linhchin Hello there. Try to maximize the space in your essay by omitting unnecessary lines and words. If...
Writing Feedbacklinhchin - Jul 12, 2019 / Maria - Jul 12, 2019
|IELTS Task 2：Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed,rather than to work for a company
2 - @sodagreensmile Hello there. Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with writing feedback to assist you in this. ...
Writing Feedbacksodagreensmile - Jul 12, 2019 / Maria - Jul 12, 2019
|IELTS: Cause and solution to the over-all happiness of the youth
4 - @lichien0422 Hello there. I'll provide you with writing feedback. I find that, in general, your writing is well-composed...
Writing Feedbacklichien0422 - Jul 12, 2019 / Maria - Jul 13, 2019
|Providing the community service by school students
Writing FeedbackCherry may - Jul 11, 2019 / Cherry may - Jul 13, 2019
|The provided maps illustrate several changes of facilities on a tourist destination.
2 - @minhkhue Hello. It would be helpful to provide the aforementioned map to help us create a more meaningful...
Writing Feedbackminhkhue - Jul 11, 2019 / Maria - Jul 12, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: Advertising in Human Life
2 - in my opinion, you are writing unnecessarily complex sentences, which are difficult to understand. moreover, you are focusing too...
Writing Feedbackhuyhihung10A - Jul 11, 2019 / linhchin - Jul 12, 2019
|Money spent on a variety of social spheres by local authorities in Someland in three years
Writing Feedbackbuianhhong - Jul 11, 2019 / buianhhong - Jul 13, 2019
|Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve the poverty problem
4 - @thaivo Hello there. I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. Firstly, try to use more technically appropriate...
Writing Feedbackthaivo - Jul 11, 2019 / Maria - Jul 13, 2019
|Evaluating the opinion that increasing petrol's price would solve traffic and pollution problems
4 - @linhchin Hello there. I'll provide you with writing feedback. I find that, overall, your language is quite put...
Writing Feedbacklinhchin - Jul 11, 2019 / Maria - Jul 13, 2019
|The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.
2 - Hi @Kalina1110! I'll try my best to help you. Firstly, you made several mistakes when describing the data. It...
Writing FeedbackKalina1110 - Jul 11, 2019 / solivagant - Jul 12, 2019
|Responsibility of the Clean and tidy streets
2 - @Jipsa Jadwani Hello there. I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. First and foremost, try to not...
Writing FeedbackJipsa Jadwani - Jul 10, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|IELTS TASK 2: IDEAS ABOUT MESEUMS
2 - @huyhihung10A Hello! I'll provide you with writing feedback. Firstly, be cautious of the formatting of your words....
Writing Feedbackhuyhihung10A - Jul 10, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|The advantages of eating food produced in other regions outweigh the disadvantages
2 - @Krystal318 Hi there. I hope you are doing well with your writing. Let me provide you with feedback...
Writing FeedbackKrystal318 - Jul 10, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Teachers' influence on children bigger than impact of parents?
Writing Feedbacknimbus2k2 - Jul 10, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 12, 2019
|IELTS Task2 - Friends through social networks and internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion
5 - Hi, I am a little it skeptical about some sentences like: "those who do not favor ... are concerned"...
Writing Feedbacksmahajan74 - Jul 9, 2019 / huyhihung10A - Jul 10, 2019
|(exchange program application) Successful youth ambassadors and their characteristics
2 - @EstellePhillips Hello there. Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with writing feedback. I think that the entirety...
Writing FeedbackEstellePhillips - Jul 9, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|Elite Training - [IELTS TASK2] - young people should be required to stay in full-time education?
6 - @Maria Could you tell me some grammar mistake that is my weakness part in my essay. Thanks for your...
Writing Feedbackluminous - Jul 9, 2019 / luminous - Jul 11, 2019
|Deforestation caused by human activity has serious results for the environment
3 - @ChristineNguyen Hi there! I'll provide you with writing feedback. I agree on what was previously aforementioned here....
Writing FeedbackChristineNguyen - Jul 8, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|Equal Distribution; there should be same chances for both genders to get post-graduate studies
3 - @tinapakshad1 Hello there. Welcome to the forum. I'll try my best to provide you with writing feedback. Firstly,...
Writing Feedbacktinapakshad1 - Jul 8, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|IELTS WRITING STRIVING: COMPUTER GAMES AND HOW THEY AFFECT CHILDREN
4 - @huyhihung10A Hi there. Let me try to provide you with beneficial feedback on your writing. You have...
Writing Feedbackhuyhihung10A - Jul 8, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|The chart below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US.
5 - @Maria Hello There. Thank you for your information! I will improve my writing skill, day by day. Because I...
Writing Feedbacktruong123456 - Jul 8, 2019 / truong123456 - 14 hrs ago
|Two different attitudes towards old people
4 - @solivagant Hello. I'll do my best to provide you with writing feedback that would hopefully help you. I...
Writing Feedbacksolivagant - Jul 7, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|[IELTS task 2] Males and Females should have an Equal Education Opportunity
5 - Hi, I have some suggestions in the hope of helping you guys I think the introduction you should paraphrase...
Writing Feedbackkhoaminh - Jul 7, 2019 / huyhihung10A - Jul 11, 2019
|Fan Bing Bing have to pay huge taxes and fines
2 - @giangkodo Hi there. Welcome to the forum. I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. First and foremost,...
Writing Feedbackgiangkodo - Jul 7, 2019 / Maria - Jul 10, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 1: Types of pollution
Writing Feedbacknimbus2k2 - Jul 7, 2019 / nimbus2k2 - Jul 12, 2019
|Computers are usually claimed to be the most significant device invented by human
Writing FeedbackVCSA - Jul 6, 2019 / hinguyn - Jul 7, 2019
|DO YOU THINK THE ADVANTAGES OF CHARGING PEOPLE FOR ADMISSION TO MUSEUMS OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES?
Writing FeedbackKarry Wang - Jul 6, 2019 / Karry Wang - Jul 7, 2019
|WRITTING TEST PART 2 - TECHNOLOGICAL DEVELOPMENTS
3 - @Maria Hi Maria, I give you many thanks for helping me with this. Hope I can receive your feedback...
Writing Feedbackhoanghuuhuan248 - Jul 5, 2019 / hoanghuuhuan248 - Jul 7, 2019
|Ielts writing task 2: Hosting Olympic Games - is it good for the country?
3 - @Maria Thank you for your constructive comments. I'll be having my Ielts exam in this september and I hope...
Writing Feedbackbubbles117 - Jul 5, 2019 / bubbles117 - Jul 7, 2019
|People disagree with a school policy which forces children to learn new language. IELTS2
5 - @wyzbui Hi there! Here's some feedback on your writing. Firstly, you have unnecessarily long sentences that take...
Writing Feedbackwyzbui - Jul 5, 2019 / Maria - Jul 6, 2019
|ielts writing: explain some of the way in which humans are damaging the environment and solutions
Writing Feedbackhinguyn - Jul 5, 2019 / hinguyn - Jul 7, 2019
|IELTS Writing Task 2: Is it good to increase the life expectancy?
2 - @Katherine_Tu1101 Hi there! I'll provide you with feedback on your writing. First and foremost, the structure of...
Writing FeedbackKatherine_Tu1101 - Jul 5, 2019 / Maria - Jul 6, 2019
|Ielts writing task 2: Opinion on extra classes; one of the most challenging issues in education
Writing Feedbackbubbles117 - Jul 4, 2019 / bubbles117 - Jul 7, 2019
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