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Essay for ENG102 - The Present Dangers of AI: Causing More Harm Than Good

3 - @Holt Thank you for you for reading my paper and for your feedback! However, I wanted to correct your...

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Ethnic studies - College Essay (MLA)

NEW - Essay Topic: Write a 5-6 page research essay arguing your position on whether ethnic studies should be required in...

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Challenges & Learnings from Running a Small Museum in Virginia

2 - I had a sense that this essay was AI generated, I ran it through a few tests and was...

Writing Feedbackrixcy - Apr 2, 2026 / Holt - Apr 3, 2026
Unconscious Bias in the Maternal Health Care - Undergraduate Essay

2 - I think that the first thing you should do is fix the format of the paper. It is not...

Writing Feedbackdedee79 - Mar 27, 2026 / Holt - Mar 29, 2026
Limiting Cruise Ship Tourism to Protect Coastal Communities

2 - The content of this essay is not human written. It is coming across as 95 % AI generated. It...

Writing FeedbackNicajah05 - Mar 27, 2026 / Holt - Mar 29, 2026
ENG 102- Teaching Religion in Public Schools: Is it rude to speak of Religion and Politics?

2 - This is a well written essay that focuses properly on the discussion of religion in relation to upbringing, morality,...

Writing Feedbacksmithjarod325 - Mar 27, 2026 / Holt - Mar 29, 2026
Mental health awareness in schools

2 - The format of the paper is very AI generated. You kept the bullet points intact, which is a dead...

Writing FeedbackGflun5 - Mar 26, 2026 / Holt - Mar 27, 2026
Lesson 11: Drafting and Peer Review Why is the world so interested in serial killers?

2 - This paper was taken directly from an Ai generated presentation and contains AI hallucinations throughout that indicate the student...

Writing Feedbackunwell - Mar 24, 2026 / Holt - Mar 25, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Some think that young people should be free to choose any career they like

2 - You have to understand that I cannot help you improve your writing skills for as long as you use...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Mar 9, 2026 / Holt - Mar 13, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - In many workplaces online communication has overtaken face to face meetings

2 - Come on, stop fooling yourself. You cannot ask me to assess an essay that is 100% AI generated in...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Mar 2, 2026 / Holt - Mar 2, 2026
Healthcare Worker Burnout Research paper (ENG102)

2 - I am not going to respond to your questions when you are asking me to review a research paper...

Writing Feedbackdysonsam - Feb 26, 2026 / Holt - Feb 28, 2026
Talking to a restaurant business owner - IELTS General Writing Task 1

2 - This letter could have been better formatted. You could have opened with the reminder to Mr. John about how...

Writing Feedbackskatare100 - Feb 25, 2026 / Holt - Feb 27, 2026
The Effect of Social Media on the Mental Health of College Students

2 - This is one of the better, I would say 50-50 split, AI and human writing papers that has been...

Writing Feedbackdhwani - Feb 21, 2026 / Holt - Feb 21, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - More and more people participate in extreme sports

2 - The prompt restatement is well done. It does not deviate from the original topic and the writer's opinion shows...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Feb 16, 2026 / Holt - Feb 16, 2026
IELTS Writing task 2 - Agree & Disagree - Topic Transport (Cyclists should pass a test)

2 - A suggestion is different from an argument. This shows a lack of English vocabulary skills on your part. by...

Writing FeedbackMon4615 - Feb 15, 2026 / Holt - Feb 16, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Many museums charge for admission while others are free

2 - Your prompt restatement is inaccurate and will receive a failing TA score. You are referencing reasons as a part...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Feb 9, 2026 / Holt - Feb 9, 2026
Clean water. Free or charged?

2 - It is incorrect for you to make a presumptive statement in the prompt restatement section. You are to...

Writing Feedbackquasal - Feb 7, 2026 / Holt - Feb 8, 2026
Rising prevalence of travelling.

2 - While the essay comes in at more than the minimum word requirement, it does not fully allow the examiner...

Writing Feedbackquasal - Feb 6, 2026 / Holt - Feb 8, 2026
Technology regarding relationship. Positive or negative?

2 - The essay is well developed and written in a highly coherent manner. It successfully transitions within sentences, for the...

Writing Feedbackquasal - Feb 6, 2026 / Holt - Feb 8, 2026
IELTS TASK 2: Younger people replacing older people at work

2 - You need to learn how to properly allot your time when writing the task 2 essay. The more common...

Writing Feedbackquasal - Feb 5, 2026 / Holt - Feb 6, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Newspapers have a significant influence on people's ideas and opinions

2 - The essay shows a good thought process coming from you. You obviously brainstormed the content of the essay prior...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Feb 2, 2026 / Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Wirting Ielts part 2: Pros & Cons remote natural

2 - The essay counts only 246 words in the total writing, which means this essay would receive an automatic failing...

Writing FeedbackHelenNguyen712 - Feb 1, 2026 / Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Procrastination is a Primary Cause of Low-Quality Academic Work - English 102

2 - The paper is badly missing an effective thesis statement at the start. This can easily be remedied by combining...

Writing Feedbackecelaya - Feb 1, 2026 / Holt - Feb 2, 2026
Writing Part 2 - Discuss and give opinion about Television

2 - This statement will make the restatenebt+ writer's opinion paragraph fail. The lack of your opinion statement, which would...

Writing Feedbackthebenjamin - Jan 29, 2026 / Holt - Jan 31, 2026
The Government Should Provide Free Public Libraries - IELTS WRITING TASK 2

2 - The topic restatement will not pass the plagiarism check of the test. You have used almost 80 of the...

Writing Feedbackdatmt333 - Jan 28, 2026 / Holt - Jan 31, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Many countries are experiencing population growth and need to build more home

2 - While this is an acceptable presentation that will receive a fair scoring consideration, it is not totally within the...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Jan 26, 2026 / Holt - Jan 27, 2026
Some people think that a job provides not only an income but also a social life.

2 - You need not repeat the discussion instruction to the examiner. You will receive point deductions for not meeting...

Writing Feedbackdanh123 - Jan 23, 2026 / Holt - Jan 24, 2026
People In Developed Countries living Alone Or In Small Family Units - IELTS WRITING TASK 2

3 - @Holt Thank you so much for your feedback to my essay. You're absolutely right! I spent nearly 50...

Writing Feedbackdatmt333 - Jan 19, 2026 / datmt333 - Jan 21, 2026
Australia physical activity - For ESL

2 - The first error in the presentation can be found in the summary overview. You did not completely identify the...

Writing Feedbackplaxnew - Jan 18, 2026 / Holt - Jan 19, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - The best way to reduce traffic accidents is to raise the age limit

2 - There is a discussion disconnection in this essay. Although the restatement and writer's opinion is very well presented and...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Jan 16, 2026 / Holt - Jan 17, 2026
In some countries today, many people are having their first child at an older age.

2 - Okay, if you write a task 2 essay at almost 500 words with a time allotment of 40 minutes,...

Writing Feedbackadadeee - Jan 15, 2026 / Holt - Jan 17, 2026
Some people think that governments should change the way individuals live

2 - There exists a faulty parallesim in this presentation. There are 2 contrasting clauses that require a proper parallel structure...

Writing Feedbackthaianhiuiu - Jan 14, 2026 / Holt - Jan 15, 2026
The charts below give information about the weather for Glasgow, a city in Scotland.

2 - The essay shows a highly limited English vocabulary on your part. The redundant use of "number", instead of more...

Writing Feedbackwanthyu - Jan 13, 2026 / Holt - Jan 14, 2026
Should the U.S. Government Forgive All Federal Student Loan Debt?

2 - The student did not even bother to try and humanize the writing of this paper. It is almost fully...

Writing Feedbackjonnycal14 - Jan 12, 2026 / Holt - Jan 13, 2026
Private equity in hospitals and healthcare systems Eng102

2 - This is a well thought out and properly presented research and opinion paper. You have given great thought to...

Writing FeedbackZarecka - Jan 8, 2026 / Holt - Jan 10, 2026
Ambition in Society - IELTS TASK 2

2 - The essay is being written from your personal point of view and therefore, should reflect an "I" statement in...

Writing Feedbackdatmt333 - Jan 5, 2026 / Holt - Jan 7, 2026
The graph - common activities of children of different ages

2 - This essay is not one that can be completed withing 20 minutes during the actual test. The 1 hour...

Writing FeedbackHuypham - Jan 5, 2026 / Holt - Jan 7, 2026
[IELTS TASK2]celebrities complain the way the media publicize their private lives.(AGREE DISAGREE)

2 - This is an over discussed essay that cannot be completed within the alloted 40 minutes of actual test writing...

Writing Feedbacktrangtrangsigmaa - Jan 5, 2026 / Holt - Jan 7, 2026
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Nowadays many people choose ready-made food and refuse to cook at home

2 - The discussion is well developed. The prompt restatement is accurate and the writer's opinion is based upon valid thesis...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Jan 5, 2026 / Holt - Jan 7, 2026
IELTS WRITING - Transportation of products and people cause the most pollution worldwide

2 - I have a problem with reviewing this essay because the prompt that has been provided is confusing. It is...

Writing Feedbackbonguyen - Dec 31, 2025 / Holt - Jan 1, 2026
How Fashion Reflects Personality and Confidence

2 - I will applaud you for the good writing that you have presented in these 2 paragraphs. While there are...

Writing FeedbackLeonn - Dec 29, 2025 / Holt - Dec 29, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 sample about success and the drivers behind it

2 - You immediately misinterpreted the speakers / point of view as provided in the original prompt within your first sentence....

Writing Feedbackquocnguyen - Dec 29, 2025 / Holt - Dec 29, 2025
The gender distribution of educators in the UK - BAR CHART - IELTS WRITING TASK 1 REPORT

2 - The summary overview is too short and does not meet the required sentence requirement. You have to present at...

Writing FeedbackAnnaDao - Dec 27, 2025 / Holt - Dec 29, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 Employers should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday

3 - Thanks for your advice...

Writing Feedbackbonguyen - Dec 27, 2025 / bonguyen - Dec 31, 2025
Do you think public transportation should be free for everyone

2 - The prompt paraphrase is acceptable. The thesis statement is well developed. However, you should have directly responded to the...

Writing Feedbackpnq1982009 - Dec 23, 2025 / Holt - Dec 27, 2025
Essay on Revenue Sharing in College Athletics:Why Fair Compensation for Athletes Is Overdue

2 - Clarify that this is to be revenue sharing with the university. Since the university earns from ticket sales,...

Writing Feedbackmelissarivas0126 - Dec 21, 2025 / Holt - Dec 21, 2025
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Some people think it is better for children to grown up in the city

2 - The first paragraph contains 2 problems: 1. The first sentence is a run-on. The 2 differing opinions must...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Dec 19, 2025 / Holt - Dec 20, 2025
more students should be encouraged to go to vocational schools. do you agree or disagree

2 - There are several grammar problems with this essay that need to be addressed, along with the incorrect response format....

Writing FeedbackPhamms - Dec 13, 2025 / Holt - Dec 13, 2025
IELTS Writing Task 2 - In some countries people spend long hours at work. Why does this happen?

2 - Your prompt restatement omits important aspects of the original topic and does not properly respond to the guide questions....

Writing Feedbacktramvivianvu - Dec 12, 2025 / Holt - Dec 13, 2025
IELTS Writing Task 1 - housing owned and rented in the UK

2 - This is an automatic failing score Task 1 essay because it does not meet the minimum word count requirement...

Writing Feedbacktramvivianvu - Dec 12, 2025 / Holt - Dec 13, 2025
IELTS Writing Task 2 - Some people believe that the best way to solve environmental problems

2 - The discussion is only 259 words. That number does not maximize the full scoring potential of the essay. The...

Writing Feedbackanuse25 - Dec 10, 2025 / Holt - Dec 11, 2025
Argument Essay: Should Universities Do Away with Greek Life?

2 - Your presentation of the need to improve the Greek Life is one that is very interesting to read about....

Writing Feedbackjaimesev123 - Dec 7, 2025 / Holt - Dec 8, 2025
IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Explain the benefits and shortcomings of online classes and traditional class

2 - Is this essay supposed to be a response to a Task 2 IELTS writing exercise? If so, then you...

Writing FeedbackfaiqaFARHEEN - Nov 29, 2025 / Holt - Nov 30, 2025
Real traveling vs reading books - discuss one reason and why you agree or disagree.

2 - I am not sure if you are writing this as a part of an English writing exercise or if...

Writing Feedbackcogaithang11 - Nov 25, 2025 / Holt - Nov 26, 2025
Some people say that " "The busier the city is, the more unhappy its people are." Agree or disagree?

3 - Your essay shows strong vocabulary and excellent command of grammar. However, in the 1st paragraph, you may consider removing...

Writing Feedbackpvy31211 - Nov 23, 2025 / tksyou - Nov 28, 2025
Decreasing Gun Violence and Death - weakness in this essay

2 - The first and second paragraph should be merged into one. A proper first paragraph successfully introduces the topic, something...

Writing FeedbackSean B - Nov 21, 2025 / Holt - Nov 21, 2025
Why is Juvenile Crime Increasing? Exploring essay rough draft

2 - Get to the point. Use the 12 year old reference. There is no need to get creative in...

Writing Feedbackthreeonetwo - Nov 10, 2025 / Holt - Nov 10, 2025
What do you think about Quitting Social Media

2 - Kindly proofread your work. You have a wrong word usage in this case, incorrect capitalization usage, and a...

Writing FeedbackSantanaWhite78 - Nov 9, 2025 / Holt - Nov 10, 2025
English Say no to gun violence

2 - I am confused by this sentence. What exactly are you trying to say? Your thought process and idea...

Writing FeedbackQwentin1234 - Nov 9, 2025 / Holt - Nov 10, 2025
The Value of Trade Jobs - High school Eng 102 Essay

2 - Since this is the introduction of the topic, all references and discussions in the first paragraph must be...

Writing FeedbackPAT2256896 - Nov 9, 2025 / Holt - Nov 9, 2025

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