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|Sticky: [WRITING TASK 1] The average on cell phone, national fixed line amd international fixed line service
4 - @Hannah Robjn Thanks for your feedback. Maybe i typed too fast so i made a lot unexpected mistakes. I...
Writing Feedbackelliemiller - Oct 13, 2020 / elliemiller - Oct 14, 2020
|Agree or not: Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child's success at school.
NEW - Task: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Classmates are a more important influence than parents on...
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|All education (primary, secondary and further education) should be free to all people
NEW - It is argued that the authority should subsidize all tuition fees for students and manage the education system from...
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|The Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types. Can you help me on this IELTS 1?
NEW - The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009. Summarize...
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|IELTS writing practice test review - enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office
Writing Feedbackdaydreamer - 22 hrs ago / Holt - 22 hrs ago
|It is often said that that songs help to connect others around the world. Do you agree?
3 - First of all, you should check your writing thoroughly so that you won't lose marks on Grammatical Range and...
Writing FeedbackThao Nhi - 1 day ago / phatdanghocielts - 15 hrs ago
|Writing Task 2 - Climate change and individuals responsibility
2 - Good response and thesis statement but, it is still missing the element of the measured response (to what...
Writing Feedbackmikengo - 1 day ago / Holt - 23 hrs ago
|The rate of crime committed by teenagers is increasing throughout the world. Reasons and solutions.
2 - What made you use the word " remarked" ? That word is used incorrectly in this presentation along...
Writing Feedbackyuca - 1 day ago / Holt - 23 hrs ago
|Printed media will be a thing of the past. Others say that these forms of media will never disappear
2 - Avoid exaggerations. This not controversial but definitely concerning. Learn to think in English and write in...
Writing Feedbackhoaxdrikimaru - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|Essay about the environmental responsibility of governments and civilians
2 - Provide at least 3 sentences for the prompt restatement. Avoid using long sentences that combine 2 ideas in one....
Writing Feedbacklinhpro - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|TASK 2: An increasing number of people are choosing to watch international television shows and ...
2 - Your restatement should have stopped at this point. she next part of this sentence is notpout of the...
Writing FeedbackCuteLove - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|People's opinions vary as to whether team study is more useful than individual study for pupils
2 - 220 words written out of the 250 minimum requirement. It is not right for you the start the essay...
Writing Feedbackimhabo - 2 days ago / Holt - 2 days ago
|TASK 2 IELTS: You don't need special talent to become a good sportsperson or music player
3 - @Holt Thanks a lot for your valuable feedbacks. I will rewrite my essay and correct the format of it...
Writing Feedbacklexuanhoa123 - 2 days ago / lexuanhoa123 - 1 day ago
|Task2: In the present time in some nations, ownership of a house is more important than renting
2 - The prompt restatement is lacking. Where is the reasoning sentence? That would be a response to the question, "...
Writing FeedbackThanh Dat - May 15, 2021 / Holt - 2 days ago
|Essay about comparison between teenager life and adult life.
2 - You have not met the discussion requirements. Out of the 3 required topic discussions, you only discussed 2 presentation...
Writing Feedbackphatdanghocielts - May 15, 2021 / Holt - 1 day ago
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Describe a chart about average annual GDP growth
2 - *Please be advised that the reviews and advice given here will be alternate to advice given by the book...
Writing Feedbackhuy11804 - May 15, 2021 / Holt - May 15, 2021
|Should people accept the bad situations or try to improve it?
Writing FeedbackJohnlee94 - May 14, 2021 / Johnlee94 - May 15, 2021
|The landscape of an island when it was still a wilderness and its changes after development
NEW - The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities The given...
Writing FeedbackQuang Nhat - May 14, 2021 / — -
|IELTS essay on the pros and cons of exploring new land.
2 - Lack of word equivalent usage. You cannot use the same words as the original as these would be...
Writing Feedbackheyima - May 14, 2021 / Holt - May 15, 2021
|Task 1 - The proportion of families owning and renting houses in England and Wales (1918 - 2011)
2 - Using what charting method? Linear? Bar ? Identify the typeof chart ownage provided. Ldon't just rely on the...
Writing Feedbackhalun1682 - May 14, 2021 / Holt - May 15, 2021
|IELTS WRITNG TASK 2 - ONLINE EDUCATION PROS AND CONS
2 - So what?What is the point of telling me this if you cannot identify an advantage and disadvantage as...
Writing Feedbacknguyenhanh7802 - May 14, 2021 / Holt - May 15, 2021
|IELTS Cambridge 13 Writing Task 1 Test 1 - Compare the Maps of City Hospital
Writing Feedbackhaonguyenx - May 14, 2021 / haonguyenx - 1 day ago
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 - Problems posed by cities population and measures that government may take
Writing Feedbackhieuhocnlp - May 14, 2021 / hieuhocnlp - 2 days ago
|Many believe that the young had better pay more attention to cultural activities instead of sport
2 - Use synonyms. Avoid keeping any original keywords to help increase, rather than decrease your L R score. ...
Writing FeedbackSpiderBap - May 13, 2021 / Holt - May 14, 2021
|The trend of city dwellers living alone or in the nuclear family
2 - The discussion instruction is quite clear. Discuss a single point of view based on the opinion that you support....
Writing Feedbackyuhle3786 - May 13, 2021 / Holt - May 14, 2021
|IETLS WRTING TASK 2: IS IT INHUMANE TO KEEP ANIMALS IN ZOOS? WHY?
3 - overall, your essay has met the requirements for Task Achievement - discussing both view without giving your opinions. You...
Writing Feedbacknnkimngan - May 13, 2021 / phatdanghocielts - May 14, 2021
|The diagrams show how the bee makes honey, and the stages in the production of honey.
2 - You are short by almost 10 words of the 150 word minimum. Signifying a lack of proper summary presentation...
Writing Feedbackeliza00472 - May 12, 2021 / Holt - May 13, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Living by themselves
3 - you should state your point of views rather than rephrasing the instruction in the opening by saying I believe...
Writing FeedbackTuss - May 12, 2021 / phatdanghocielts - May 14, 2021
|iELTS essay about genders and work
Writing Feedbackhoquanghuy - May 12, 2021 / hoquanghuy - May 14, 2021
|How many people paid a visit to Ashdown Museum
2 - 245 words is only 5 words short of minimum word count forthe task 2 essay, which is written in...
Writing Feedbackanhnta2004 - May 12, 2021 / Holt - May 12, 2021
|Some educators believe that the most important trait a teacher can have is self-acceptance.
2 - How does this relate to the teacher discussion? The reference point in the original discussion is in relation...
Writing FeedbackNavpreet - May 11, 2021 / Holt - May 12, 2021
|English (talk about The Guardian's view on Australia Day: Change the date )
2 - The history of the event is difficult to understand and follow. The ESL presentation will not even pass as...
Writing FeedbackKim555 - May 11, 2021 / Holt - May 12, 2021
|Individual and governmental action should be taken to inhibit vast tracts of forests from vanishing
2 - The essay is only 221 words. I am afraid that the wordcount deduction will be difficult for your work...
Writing Feedbackphuongphamviet - May 11, 2021 / Holt - May 12, 2021
|IELTS Writing task 1 check my passage on real estate
5 - If I were you, I would change a little bit for the introduction like: The figure illustrates the different...
Writing Feedbackjosh_550442 - May 11, 2021 / Johnlee94 - May 14, 2021
|Writing task 1 process: the production of bricks
Writing Feedbackngocmainguyen - May 11, 2021 / gonzforever - May 11, 2021
|The diagram below shows the lifecycle of the butterfly.
2 - What kind of chart? You call it a life-cycle chart, a development chart, or even a process chart....
Writing Feedbackhoangthutrang - May 11, 2021 / Holt - May 11, 2021
|Whether would you think is more important, the book or the cover?
Writing Feedbackjenniep - May 10, 2021 / Holt - May 11, 2021
|Stop gambling around! (essay for an exam in Netherlands)
2 - What is the exam you will be taking ? What are the discussion requirements? The lack of writing instructions...
Writing Feedbackbaai - May 10, 2021 / Holt - May 11, 2021
|IELTS TASK 2: It is possible to live a normal life as others after releasing from prison
Writing FeedbackLinh_Nguyen - May 9, 2021 / Linh_Nguyen - May 10, 2021
|[IELTS Mock Test 2021] January Writing 1 - students in Australia
2 - There are only 144 words in this presentation. You missed the word requirement by 6 words. Percentage deductions to...
Writing FeedbackThi Nguyen - May 9, 2021 / Holt - May 10, 2021
|The line graph compares figures for daily travel of employee by three different transports in UK
2 - Where is the image? It will be hard to assess the accuracy and quality of your work without it....
Writing Feedbackkieoanh - May 9, 2021 / Holt - May 9, 2021
|My topic is about migrating drawbacks and how to improve urban life for all citizens
2 - Your restatement needs work. There was a point in the first sentence when you began to deviate from the...
Writing Feedbackladybirdteddddd - May 9, 2021 / Holt - May 9, 2021
|The graph below shows changes in the distribution of average household income between 1965 and 2015.
2 - The lack of image will prevent me from giving your work a full review. Provide an image next lime...
Writing FeedbackDieuanh111 - May 8, 2021 / Holt - May 9, 2021
|What are the reasons for world poverty? The main factors of this phenomenon and possible solutions
2 - The essay is below the required minimum word count. The word percentage deductions tells me that you either did...
Writing Feedbackhoaithuong03 - May 8, 2021 / Holt - May 9, 2021
|Waste is not treated efficiently so the authority should pass laws to promote adequate actions
3 - Hi Karlie, I have some comments for your writing. I find the two most significant things you need to...
Writing Feedbackkarlie - May 8, 2021 / Johnlee94 - May 9, 2021
|Should there be any restriction on how many years an educator may teach the same subject or grade
2 - Use the descriptive term "educators" rather than - "professors". The more generic reference allows you to generally discuss...
Writing FeedbackLetty134 - May 7, 2021 / Holt - May 8, 2021
|Island map - summaries the information and make comparisons where relevant
2 - The task 1 essay does not require an analysis nor a conclusion. Therefore, the reference to safety standards should...
Writing Feedbackvukhoa - May 7, 2021 / Holt - May 8, 2021
|IELTS 1 - The graph compares twelve countries in terms of the amount of Olympic medals they have won
2 - This paper doesn't have a good chance of receiving a passing score since the word count is only 130...
Writing Feedbackinterestlinh - May 7, 2021 / Holt - May 7, 2021
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Health and Life Habits
2 - The prompt paraphrase contains information not included in the original presentation which resulted in an over writing in your...
Writing FeedbackNguyen Nhat Huy - May 7, 2021 / Holt - May 7, 2021
|The percentage of people who are sixty five and older in the USA, Sweden, and Japan
Writing Feedbackleonfermi - May 6, 2021 / leonfermi - May 10, 2021
|An increasing tendency to stay alone rather than be engaged in any relationship
3 - Thank you so much for your time and your comments. I will pay more attention to the conclusion...
Writing FeedbackLinh_Nguyen - May 6, 2021 / Linh_Nguyen - May 9, 2021
|Task 1- Consumer's on cell phone, national and international phones in America
Writing FeedbackHangPhan0202 - May 6, 2021 / HangPhan0202 - May 6, 2021
|TASK 1 - the figure for households getting access to different kind of up-to-date home appliances
2 - The task 1 essay requires to summarize the information using less than 200 words. Representing the summarized and analyzed...
Writing Feedbackminhthu31051998 - May 6, 2021 / Holt - May 6, 2021
|Research essay - Are older people wiser than younger people?
2 - Explain how this is a mental/brain development and how it applies to maturity. You are writing...
Writing FeedbackRickyG - May 5, 2021 / Holt - May 6, 2021
|The proportion of online sales in four types of products and services in Canada
2 - Actually, these are comparative sales based on half a decade sales presentations. Mention the comparison years early in...
Writing FeedbackHimyfr - May 5, 2021 / Holt - May 6, 2021
|Essay about the sports sponsorships
2 - Make sure that you use a timer when you practice these writing test essays. Set it for 40 minutes...
Writing FeedbackJanyjane - May 4, 2021 / Holt - May 5, 2021
|What factors contribute to teaching job satisfaction? Financial wellness and work atmosphere
2 - Kindly specify if you are reviewing for the IELTS test or just general English language writing to receive more...
Writing FeedbackJakzy - May 4, 2021 / Holt - May 4, 2021
|How ethanol fuel is produced by corn
2 - Complete your image reference in relation to the diagram.There are several types of diagrams you could have referred to....
Writing FeedbackHienle1210 - May 3, 2021 / Holt - May 4, 2021
|Ielts task 1. In chart: male and female, part-time and full-time education - ielts test exercise
Writing FeedbackJuly2004 - May 3, 2021 / Holt - May 4, 2021
|How many enquiries received in three different ways - Summarize the information
2 - It appears that you have written too many words for this essay based an the time allotment of 20...
Writing FeedbackKuang Fui - May 2, 2021 / Holt - May 3, 2021
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