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|From the given line graph: how much chicken, beef, lamb and fish were consumed, by grams per person
NEW - IELTS Task 1: The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European...
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|Task1: How much carbon dioxide an average person in four countries emitted into the environment
Writing FeedbackTantan7012 - 6 hrs ago / Tantan7012 - 1 hr ago
|IELTS Writing Task 1 - Line graph: Radio and TV audiences in UK October - December 1992
NEW - Summarise the information from the graph The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in...
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|WRITING TASK 1: how bottled and canned gas drink are produced
3 - This is my first time trying to write a diagram description essay so I find it quite hard. Anyway,...
Writing Feedbacktuanhntta2020 - 22 hrs ago / tuanhntta2020 - 2 hrs ago
|Staying at hotels when holidaying abroad is not the method to comprehend a nation and the people liv
2 - You need to develop a better way of paraphrasing. Aim to produce 3-5 sentences for that presentation. For this...
Writing FeedbackCarrious - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|Discussion - Environmental problems should be dealt at global or national level - for IELTS
2 - You are writing the wrong response for this essay. You are focusing on an international level when the prompt...
Writing FeedbackEabc - 1 day ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|IELTS 2: A significant decrease in the number of high street shops has been witnessed lately
Writing Feedbackbstntphu - 1 day ago / bstntphu - 1 day ago
|The chart shows IT components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000
3 - I'm confused with "despite being less influential" in your second paraphrase. Actually, service industry's contribution to the GDP grew,...
Writing FeedbackJerry_Watson - 1 day ago / LadyOfClockwork - 3 hrs ago
|Topic: Communicating online (advantages outweigh disadvantages?)
Writing Feedbackk1k1k3 - 2 days ago / k1k1k3 - 21 hrs ago
|Some people deem that children should be brought up in a rural area than the city
3 - Rather than saying that you partly agree, you should instead frame the response in the manner of an extent...
Writing FeedbackCarrious - 2 days ago / Holt - 2 days ago
|Health problems of developed world (put the cause and solution)
Writing Feedbackphuongthao48 - 2 days ago / Holt - 2 days ago
|The bar chart illustrates the number of people who decide on university subjects chosen in 2005
4 - It seems like your words are less than the requirement(150 words). by the way, I think that you ought...
Writing FeedbackHieu nguyen trog - Sep 16, 2020 / Carrious - 1 day ago
|It is said that in the civilized world, animal-based products are not in high demand anymore
3 - I highly appreciate your rigorous feedback. I will keep those in mind when writing.Because I have started approaching IELTS...
Writing Feedbacktinnguye00218 - Sep 16, 2020 / tinnguye00218 - 1 day ago
|Which is more important: Talent or hard work?
2 - I believe that you wrote this for an IELTS task 2 essay. The main problem though, is that you...
Writing Feedbackthanhtuyen - Sep 16, 2020 / Holt - 2 days ago
|These days, the percentage of older people in the population structure has been increasing rapidly
3 - I believe that you should put your opinion in the introduction, right after paraphasing the topic. The conclusion is...
Writing Feedbackthaolinh - Sep 16, 2020 / tuanhntta2020 - 2 hrs ago
|Changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers
3 - I see, thanks. For some reasons I haven't taken any IELTS test yet, but I'll take one next month....
Writing FeedbackLadyOfClockwork - Sep 16, 2020 / LadyOfClockwork - Sep 16, 2020
|Many women are choosing to have children later in life. Why? Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
3 - I think that you should try to divide the main points into separate paragraphs so that it can be...
Writing FeedbackHangPhan2708 - Sep 16, 2020 / tuanhntta2020 - Sep 16, 2020
|Writing task 2: Secondary education should be offered?
NEW - In countries where there is high unemployment, most pupils should be offered only primary education. There is no point...
Writing FeedbackDiepVu99 - Sep 16, 2020 / — -
|Ielts writing task 2 - Most people nowadays work just for a living
2 - There are four reasons why this essay will not gt a passing band score in an actual test. The...
Writing FeedbackAne Linah - Sep 15, 2020 / Holt - Sep 16, 2020
|IELTS Task 2 - Opinion Essay - Language extinction
2 - @veenajayant in my experience for IELTS, you must need more spesific and dont use firstly or secondly Its my...
Writing Feedbackveenajayant - Sep 15, 2020 / JPM21 - 34 mins ago
|Ielts writing task 2 - Animal extinction - Reasons and Solution
3 - hi, When using "First of all" I think you need to show more than two thesises, so "Firstly" is...
Writing Feedbackthaolinh - Sep 15, 2020 / Carrious - 1 day ago
|The consumption of fast food by Australian teenagers: pizza, fish and chips, and hamburgers
2 - In the summary overview, indicate the measurement type. You cannot jump to the time frame without first indicating the...
Writing Feedbacktodoroki - Sep 15, 2020 / Holt - Sep 15, 2020
|Ielts task 2:What do you think were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small community
2 - Scoring is not part of the free review service. For scoring and advanced review services, you may opt for...
Writing FeedbackMLwithLove - Sep 15, 2020 / Holt - Sep 15, 2020
|Information technology is changing our lives and dominates our home, leisure, and work activities
2 - Okay. the discussion question is "To what extent..." which means you have to provide a measured response to this...
Writing FeedbackCius - Sep 15, 2020 / Holt - Sep 15, 2020
|People tend to waste food in shops and restaurants. Why? What can be done to reduce this problem?
2 - Where does it say in the original prompt that there is a debate about the topic? Examiners frown upon...
Writing Feedbackk1k1k3 - Sep 15, 2020 / Holt - Sep 15, 2020
|Information technology is giving people a variety of new paths to experience the daily life
Writing FeedbackAnhgubkin - Sep 14, 2020 / Anhgubkin - 2 days ago
|WRITING TASK 1/ THE MAPS BELOW SHOW THE VILLAGE OF STOKEFORD IN 1930 AND IN 2010
Writing Feedbacktuanhntta2020 - Sep 14, 2020 / tuanhntta2020 - Sep 15, 2020
|IELTS Writing task 2: Discussion essay about "wild animals"
Writing Feedbacklegendark - Sep 14, 2020 / legendark - Sep 16, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Newspapers and books in the future
3 - You have misunderstood the question and written wrong introductuon. I think that this mistake can be quite serious when...
Writing FeedbackEpi101 - Sep 14, 2020 / tuanhntta2020 - Sep 16, 2020
|Services like education, health, social security should be provided by private groups in community
4 - Your essay is only 226/250 words. So definitely expect to lose points for not meeting the word requirement. The...
Writing FeedbackCATNIP - Sep 14, 2020 / Holt - Sep 15, 2020
|Hobbie show trends and fashions that indicate what individuals really want to do in their spare time
2 - For starters, you need to write more than 239 words. The minimum is 250 words. Writing less than that...
Writing Feedbackminecrafthtc - Sep 14, 2020 / Holt - Sep 14, 2020
|IELTS WRITING TASK 2 :People in the 21st century have better quality of lives (agree or not)
3 - @DiepVu99 Thank you for your comments <3 I am totally agree with the idea that I lack of evidence...
Writing Feedbackhuyhoangnk01 - Sep 13, 2020 / huyhoangnk01 - Sep 14, 2020
|IELTS Writing task 2: Animal testing is morally wrong or not?
2 - In my point of view, your logical thinking is good, which is showed via how you use vocabulary and...
Writing FeedbackAnn Lee - Sep 13, 2020 / DiepVu99 - Sep 14, 2020
|Nowadays, advertisement has bombarded people with various images and videos on technological devices
3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice. I really appreciate it and I will pay attention next time. But I...
Writing Feedbackthaolinh - Sep 13, 2020 / thaolinh - Sep 14, 2020
|IELTS Writing Task 2 - Owning a home is more important than renting
6 - @thaolinh Thank you very much! I already found the first book yiu recommended (15 days practice for the IELTS...
Writing FeedbackEpi101 - Sep 13, 2020 / Epi101 - Sep 15, 2020
|It is said that the way we use electronic media affects negatively our relationships in real life
Writing Feedbacktranminh14032003 - Sep 13, 2020 / huyhoangnk01 - Sep 13, 2020
|Imagine and write one bad thing that happened yesterday
3 - I believe that you are writing this for a creative writing class. So you should be writing at least...
Writing Feedbacknhidangiu2612 - Sep 13, 2020 / Holt - Sep 13, 2020
|The graph gives data on the amount of fish, lamb, beef, chicken consumed over a period of 15 years
Writing Feedbackqdark - Sep 12, 2020 / LadyOfClockwork - 2 days ago
|Share experience about intercultural encounters.
NEW - the ways, in which we have contact with the world I had not travelled to anywhere before although...
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|What are the benefits of bilingualism or multilingualism?
2 - There are 2 possible exam representations for this topic. It can be a Task 2 or Task 1 essay....
Writing Feedbackchucnanana - Sep 11, 2020 / Holt - Sep 12, 2020
|Childhood obesity is becoming a serious problem in many countries. What are the causes of this?
Writing Feedbackannhu - Sep 11, 2020 / Ann Lee - Sep 13, 2020
|A line graph shows in percentage terms the changing patterns of domestic access to modern technology
Writing FeedbackSinee - Sep 11, 2020 / todoroki - Sep 12, 2020
|A comparison between man and women with respect to the number of books read
3 - You cannot indicate that both genders numbers showed steady growth when you also say that at a certain point,...
Writing Feedbackameetgill - Sep 10, 2020 / Holt - Sep 11, 2020
|An increasing number of people in many nations are opting to live alone
Writing Feedbacknguyenlong123 - Sep 10, 2020 / nguyenlong123 - Sep 11, 2020
|Opinion on whether or not children should be sent to school with tons of need-to-complete homework
2 - This is an academic essay. Everyday English slang does not have any place in it. Do not refer to...
Writing Feedbackthuynt1402 - Sep 10, 2020 / Holt - Sep 10, 2020
|[Writing task 2 - IELTS] Many high street shops have gone out of business in recent years.
2 - You did a good job in delivering the reasons why you think high street shops have gone out of...
Writing FeedbackLisa_1807 - Sep 10, 2020 / Holt - Sep 10, 2020
|Writing task 2: procedure of getting a driving license
2 - Great job with your transitional words, I like how your essay is straight to the point. I'm impressed you...
Writing FeedbackDiepVu99 - Sep 10, 2020 / mbotchway - Sep 10, 2020
|Some people say in modern society, we should not use animal products like clothing, food or medicine
Writing Feedbackalways12 - Sep 10, 2020 / Holt - Sep 10, 2020
|The line graph displays how much acid rain was emitted by four different sectors in the UK
Writing Feedbackjackjixam13 - Sep 10, 2020 / Holt - Sep 10, 2020
|IELTS TASK 2 : Problems of living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language
Writing FeedbackAnn Lee - Sep 9, 2020 / Ann Lee - Sep 11, 2020
|IELTS writing task 2. Problems caused by action movies and solutions.
2 - Regardless of whether you are taking the CBT or pencil test, you cannot write 357 words perfectly within 40...
Writing FeedbackHoangDuong049 - Sep 9, 2020 / Holt - Sep 10, 2020
|Benefits and drawbacks of studying overseas
Writing Feedbackphuongthaonguyen - Sep 9, 2020 / Holt - Sep 10, 2020
|IELTS task 1 - Foreign languages spoken by British students
5 - I'd love to make some recommendations for you. 1)" who were multilingual ..." I think that it would...
Writing Feedbacktwinkle_star - Sep 9, 2020 / LadyOfClockwork - Sep 15, 2020
|Ielts task 1: Line graph - Oil consumption of four main consumers
2 - The reason you are being asked to deliver the image report is because the professional you are reporting to...
Writing Feedbackkngocph - Sep 9, 2020 / Holt - Sep 10, 2020
|Discussion essay : Is playing video games and watching TV can be beneficial to children.
2 - Your prompt paraphrase was almost correct. The problem came in the last sentence, where there should have been 2...
Writing FeedbackPTHN - Sep 9, 2020 / Holt - Sep 9, 2020
|A new job; formal qualifications more important than life experience or personal qualities?
3 - ...... first-hand experiences and personal traits. ... caused by a plethora of reasons just a suggestion that many examiners...
Writing Feedbacklinhngan118 - Sep 8, 2020 / twinkle_star - Sep 9, 2020
|Most people do not care enough about environmental issues .Do you agree or disagree? Reasons?
3 - Your essay is only analyzing reasons for the discussion. You forgot to respond to the question which is "To...
Writing Feedbackngocngoc - Sep 8, 2020 / Holt - Sep 9, 2020
|Task 2: Private and public area in carrying out scientific research
2 - You cannot have a partial opinion for this essay. There is no "extent" reference in the original prompt so...
Writing Feedbackhttlinh - Sep 8, 2020 / Holt - Sep 8, 2020
|TASK 2: A rise in the standard of living in a coutry
3 - When you write the paraphrase of the topic, avoid using information that is not presented in the original prompt....
Writing FeedbackLee Mine - Sep 8, 2020 / Holt - Sep 8, 2020
|Sodium, saturated fat and added sugar - Writing task 1 - Cambridge 14
3 - There are 3 different pie charts provided, so when you mentioned them, you should make it clear what each...
Writing FeedbackTranthtrang - Sep 8, 2020 / Holan - Sep 11, 2020
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