'your advertisement for a weekend job' - Improve my letter

You have seen an advertisement for a weekend job as a local tour guide showing visitors around your city.
Write a letter of application to the tourism office. In the letter:
- give your reasons for wanting the job
- explain why you think you can do the job
- describe any relevant experience you have
(at least 150 words)

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have just seen your advertisement for a weekend job as local tour guide. I feel I am right for this job as I have been always been interested in local history, cultural sites, famous scenery and even as a chid I have started to read many books about our glorious history. Your agency has a good reputation and it be my pleasure if I were part of it.

As you have already seen in the first section of this application, I have all qualifications relevant to this job and I have just received a diploma in Travel and Tourism. In addition, I used to work as a volunteer guide in tourist guides club of my university.

Due to all the above reason, I think I would done this work well. I am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely,

Isabella

My writing skill is very very bad. And this is the first time I've post a thread in this forum. Hope that you can help me. Many thanks :)

First of all your essay contains 138 words, while you must write at least 150 words.


u can use this statement :"I am writing with reference to your advertisement...". In order to make the letter more realistic you can mention the name of the newspaper at which u have seen the advertisement.




elaborate on this part. What is the name of your university? What was your responsibility? Talk more about your experience.


----> suggestion:"I am eagerly waiting for your kind reply and really appreciate your time and concern

ah_zafari
Really thank you :). It's very helpful for me. :D

Great essay... Couldn't find out much mistakes as I'm just 13!! HEHE :D...
Anyways, u didn't mention your name, and it should be Due to all the above reason, I think I can do this work very well. I am looking forward to or (reply) your reply.

HOPE THIS WORK'S :P