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Application essay for Msc in critical care



Lobaba 1 / -  
1 day ago   #1
I remember the exact moment I told myself that I wanted to become a doctor, specifically an ICU specialist. That moment came when I witnessed the fear and despair of relatives and family members whenever someone was admitted to the intensive care unit. In most cases, they completely lost hope. This reaction was understandable, as I grew up in a small village in northern Sudan where there was no access to ICU services. Patients had to be transferred to the nearest specialized hospital, which was more than 50 kilometers away, and sometimes they were forced to travel even farther to the capital.
Seeing this reality deeply affected me and motivated me to make a change. I wanted not only to save lives but also to change the community's perception of the ICU-from a place associated with hopelessness to one of recovery and advanced care. This determination led me to pursue a Bachelor's degree in Medicine and Surgery.
After graduation, I took Part One of the local medical board examination in Anesthesiology and Intensive Care and achieved a high score of 75. This success further strengthened my interest in critical care medicine and confirmed that I was on the right path. Currently, while completing my residency training in Sudan, I am eager to deepen my knowledge and clinical skills through a structured academic program.
Pursuing a Master's degree in Critical Care at the University of Denver represents a crucial step toward achieving my professional goals. This program will provide me with advanced theoretical knowledge, evidence-based practice, and exposure to modern critical care standards. Gaining this expertise will enable me to deliver better patient care and contribute to improving critical care services in resource-limited settings.
Ultimately, my goal is to serve my community by enhancing ICU care, supporting patients and families during critical moments, and changing the overall concept and expectations surrounding intensive care in Sudan. This program will empower me to transform my long-standing aspiration into meaningful impact.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15990  
1 hr ago   #2
I am not sure what sort of essay you are supposed to be writing since you did not mention it in the description. Is this a personal statement, a motivation letter, plan of study, or an open letter to the admissions committee? I am unsure about how to help you due to the lack of proper information about this essay.

As you know, Pres. Trump has cracked down on international visa applications, specifically from Sudan and other African countries. So if you hope to gain admission into a US university and gain a US visa, you need to have a sparkling application essay. This letter fails to achieve that. The content sounds more like a college admissions essay and lacks the proper references to academic accomplishments and notable professional experiences that might make you a stand out masters student. This is bearing in mind the difficulties that people from your country will encounter when applying for the student visa, which will also make it difficult for you to gain admittance into a US university for masters studies.


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