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calvinhmw 9 / 21  
Dec 28, 2010   #1
Hi all, I've just finished my resume in UMICH transfer supplement. Can anyone help me proofread it? Do I need to add anything else ? And is it necessary to add a statement of objective at the head ?

Thank you all in advance!!

Here it goes:

Mingwei Hu
xxxxxxxxxxxx
xxx-xxx-xxxx
xxx@gmail.com
________________________________________
Education
Hainan Guokeyuan Experimental Middle School, Haikou, China. 2003.09-2009.06
Class Rank: 5%
Southeast University, Nanjing, China. 2009.06-2010.07
Saint Louis University, Saint Louis,USA 2010.08-Present
GPA: 3.78

Extracurricular Activities
-Vice Minister of English Corner, Southeast University, 2010
Held school activities related to English learning.
-Member of Computer club, Southeast University, 2009
Attended activities such as C++ programming and Photoshop Contest
-Psychology Committee of Class #1, School of Civil Engineering, Southeast University,2010
Worked on helping classmates get rid of their Psychological vexation
-Member of Civil Engineering student club, Saint Louis University, 2010
-Organizer of "One dime" donation fair. 2009.12
-The host of singing competition "Musical Night" in Southeast University. 2010.05

Work / Volunteer Experience
-Physical Education instructor in Xingzhi Club, Southeast University. 2009.10-2010.01

Honors / Awards
-2010 Southeast University 3rd place in 2010 National English Contest for College Student
-2010 Southeast University 3rd place in 2010 National College English Test Band 4
- 2010.08-present: Saint Louis University, Jesuit Transfer Scholarship
-2006-2009: Hainan Guokeyuan Experimental Middle School, Full Scholarship

Skills
Knowledgeable in Microsoft Office(Word, Excel, Powerpoint) and Adobe Flash
Programming Skills in C, C++, Maple and MATLAB
Sketching Skills in AutoCAD
Speaks Chinese

Interests/Hobbies
Playing guitar(1 year)
Cooking (6 years)
Swimming (10 years)

Jen_rhymesw_Ten 4 / 11  
Dec 28, 2010   #2
Saint Louis University, Saint Louis, USA 2010.08-Present

Playing guitar (1 year)

Only minor mistakes! Good Job!
OP calvinhmw 9 / 21  
Dec 28, 2010   #3
Thank you so much Jennifer.

Does anyone else have any ideas whether I should state my objective in the resume ?
mundaka 4 / 8  
Jan 4, 2011   #4
descriptions are perfect, you should add an objective just a few brief sentences on your goal.
OP calvinhmw 9 / 21  
Jan 4, 2011   #5
Thank you for your advice mundaka!

Anyone else gives me comments ?

My question is how to write an objective how long it should be...
Also if you find any grammar errors please let me know, thanks !!! :)


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