until now I still remember a friend of mine that let me explore my potentials and capabilities. His way of thinking and reasoning was really amazing , as he made me change my view of seeing things many times . Unfortunately, he left the school after the death of his father, and had to work as a food seller to feed himself and the family. But later he picked up his studies and became a very successful professional. His advice to me was set high goals, I never forgot it and try to live with it every day.
A friend of mine had a significant influence on me
please help , anyone ?
chalumeau /
Mar 30, 2012 #3
What is the essay prompt. Word limit?
Your paragraph does not include much detail.
It would be better to include more about what advice
was given to you. Why it became important in your life?
Your paragraph does not include much detail.
It would be better to include more about what advice
was given to you. Why it became important in your life?
Providing more detail would benefit your essay and help grab your reader's attention.
thank you very much chalumeau, mariesista1989,
word limit : less than < 100
I will try to include details ,
word limit : less than < 100
I will try to include details ,
