I'm a student applying for colleges in USA, and my English Teacher wrote a recommendation for me. She wrote it in another language, however, since English is our second language, so I had to translate it into English . My teacher was not sure whether it was properly translated, and she wanted me to find help from others. I hope someone can help me with the gramma& logical problems in it!! Thnx a lot!! BTW, I cannot change the original meaning of my teacher, right? So just grammar mistakes!
PART OF THE RECOMMENDATION GOES AS FOLLOWS:
I have also discovered her to be passionate and perseverant in extracurricular activities. Impressed by her enthusiastic manner, I chose her as the hostess of the First English Speaking Contest of our school, and Miss XX proved to be the best for this work. Her fluent speaking and witty manner, gained by constant practice and improvements, enabled her to perform well as the hostess. And I appreciate it very much that though it was the first time she tried to take such a job, she was able to manage it perfectly. In the past high school years, she has enthusiastically taken part in many other students activities, such as the School English Drama Festival, the Student's Company Activity, etc, which has also seen her versatility by serving quite a few positions.
PART OF THE RECOMMENDATION GOES AS FOLLOWS:
I have also discovered her to be passionate and perseverant in extracurricular activities. Impressed by her enthusiastic manner, I chose her as the hostess of the First English Speaking Contest of our school, and Miss XX proved to be the best for this work. Her fluent speaking and witty manner, gained by constant practice and improvements, enabled her to perform well as the hostess. And I appreciate it very much that though it was the first time she tried to take such a job, she was able to manage it perfectly. In the past high school years, she has enthusiastically taken part in many other students activities, such as the School English Drama Festival, the Student's Company Activity, etc, which has also seen her versatility by serving quite a few positions.