Task1- You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant.

You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.

Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.

In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe what went wrong with the meal and service
suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear,...

Dear Mr. Petrova,

I am writing as an assistant director of forbest ltd to provide the feedback for our unexpected recent-experience at your hotel. Being the regular customer of your hotel, we have already been treated with good enough service and tasty food but our recent experience was a little unpleasant.

Let me explain the situation, we had an usual fine experience throughout the morning meeting until the lunch started. A number of team-members complained about the soup being salty and the bread accompanying stale. Not only this, some also pointed out to the half-cooked meat, which was totally unexpected and displeasing.

Since we already had superb experiences in the past, I believe, the issue that we faced recently should be a result of carelessness or absence of staff, which should be tackled easily. As an customer, I can only recommend you to ask your cook to use less salt, serve fresher bread and cook the meat well. This should be enough to tackle all our complaints and I am sure our group would be more than willing to return.

I look forward for your response.

Yours Sincerely,

Younel Snuk

You did not capitalize the proper nouns referring to the name of the company you represented (Forbest Ltd.). The content of the letter is also incorrect. The instructions provided ask you to write a letter regarding a meal you had during a meeting at the restaurant. So that indicates there was a single meal taken by the group at the location. The meal had could have been breakfast, lunch, snacks, or dinner. Only one of the meals should have been indicated in the letter. Your presentation however, indicates a conference type set up, where several meals were served. This is incorrect. Review the instruction, only one meal reference was required in a meeting setting, not a conference setting.

The essay also suffers from several other errors with regards to spelling, grammar, and conciseness issues. Unfortunately, I will not be able to point these errors out to you without rewriting your whole letter. As that is an advanced service, you may want to consider hiring our private writing service or making this thread URGENT to get advanced review services.