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a poem of the senses + an acrostic poem - assignment on poems


missy 1 / 2  
Jun 17, 2010   #1
hi there need some help with a assignment

a poem of the senses 100 words needed

an acrostic poem 100 words

can anyone give me any ideas plez

colourful rainbows in the sky shinning brightly
our world is a wonderful place to live in
under the dark sky i like to lay me head
roger rabbit loves to eat his carrots
to many children playing in the park
no one likes to be alone in the dark
everybody likes to be with there family at christmas
yellow canaries sitting on a purch

tulalipangel 1 / 2  
Jun 18, 2010   #2
This poem of the senses should not be too hard. I would discuss an event that would require all of your senses and just make it flow.

Example:

discuss a rain storm...see clouds...feel rain...taste the rain..hear thunder..smell fresh air
or a day at the park...see children...feel sunshine...hear laughter...smell flowers...taste what is in the picnic basket

Just take this concept and expand on the details or maybe apply two examples of what you see,hear, smell, taste, and touch. Plus, make sure it flows with rythme.

I hope this helps a little.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,334 129  
Jun 18, 2010   #3
Spelling: too many children playing in the park
I like this line: no one likes to be alone in the dark

Spelling: everybody likes to be with their family at Christmas

yellow canaries sitting on a purch.---- good image!

Oh, I see that you used it to spell your name... very cool. It might be more meaningful, though, if you spell a meaningful message -- a word that expresses the theme of the poem.

:-)
OP missy 1 / 2  
Jun 18, 2010   #4
THANK YOU VERY MUCH
OP missy 1 / 2  
Jun 19, 2010   #5
hi there this is what i have come up with

this one is my acrostic poem my name

C is for CARING, CREATIVE AND CO OPERATIVE with your peers at school.
O is for OUTGOING, OUTSTANDING and an adventures girl.
U is for UNDERSTANDING, UNIQUE and thoughtful for your friend's feelings.
R is for RADIANT, RESOURCEFUL and nothing is impossible to achieve if you set your mind to it.
T is for TERRIFIC, TALANTED and TRUSTING and a TREASURE to have found.
N is for NATURAL, NOBLE and NICE and a delight to have around.
E is for ENERGETIC and ENJOYING a party at the park with your friends and family.
Y is for YOUNG, YOUTHFUL and full of energy as you race to the finish line and come first.
let me know what you think thanks again for everyones help
EF_Kevin 8 / 13,334 129  
Jun 20, 2010   #6
Too simple!!
Easy for me to say when I don't have to write it.
Let me be honest, though, and say it seems
Like a lesson for little kids as you say what each letter is for.

As an alternative...

Subtlety is what you need.
Each line can play a role in explaining a particular concept.
Concepts are hard to explain, so we rely on the reader.
Readers embrace the concept more when you make them work.
Effort to understand is what the reader contributes.
Tell the reader something she or he will work to understand.


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