stair case to no where....5 senses

i don't know where i stand,i look around,
all the same to me , night is day
and day is night,without you it all looks the same
i can smell the single most perfect rose you gave me back then
if it only didnt have sharp thorns
i can taste sour milk, so sour in my mouth
no one to add some sweet sugar,
specially not you
i miss how warm you used to make me feel
like a little kid and how his blanket makes him feel
i feel so cold without my blanket
i hear a loud crowed going wild, cant think,cant move on
all the staircase leads to no where

plzzz help its due tomorrow, i noe its not even one bit good,spelling is sooo bad i noe...hahahah help plzzz??

I get that you cover the 5 senses with what precedes the last two lines. But it leaves me lost:
-Did you mean a loud CROW (black bird)?
-Who can't think or move on? The crow?
-All the staircase does not make sense: "the staircase leads no where" would be more correct.
But then this also is inconclusive (leads no where...)

Well, spelling is not a problem! Do you have microsoft word or any program with a spell checker? You have a writing style that is captivating. The simile you used, about kid with his blanket, is really touching.

Use apostrophes in "can't"
Spell crowd with no e
put an e in especially

Don't be so critical of your writing. Poetry is an echo of your stream of consciousness, the sound of your mind. It is not supposed to be perfect, but it has absolute value, same as you. I hope it is a big success!