What do you think, Life Poem - Trying a new style
Trying a new style here...
Life
Tired.
Confused.
Lost.
Found.
For now.
Overload.
Monotony.
Change.
When.
Now.
Infinity.
Love.
Hate.
Perspective.
Subjective.
Seconds.
Decades.
Is it worth it?
Is what worth it?
I really like this! You might add a little drama by adding a question mark after the word "when". At the end, it seems like the person whose life it was, became senile, asking, "Is WHAT worth it?" Nice job!
:)
Something important about this style is that it causes the reader to move quickly downward in a vertical line, and the shape taken by the line forme by the right side of the lines is significant. It has a particular effect. In that way, this kind of poem has an important visual aspect.
I like it. But personally, I feel like this style of poetry does not give the reader enough 'meat' (if you will) to interpret.
I do love the last line though. Very clever. :)
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