Hello,
I am writing an expository essay for English for academic purposes about soil erosion and I must begin with a thesis statement and an outline. Please review and say whether I am on the right track, thanks.
Thesis Statement:
Soil erosion is a slow process, which continues to persist in the Caribbean because of the different agents such as, water, wind and tillage.
Topic: Water
Topic sentence
First, in the Caribbean, soil erosion by water is due to direct and indirect factors that detaches and transports vulnerable soil.
Topic: Wind
Topic sentence
Secondly, soil erosion by wind in the Caribbean occurs, because of various aspects that enable very fine particles to be lifted and moved great distances.
Topic: Tillage
Topic sentence
Lastly, soil erosion by tillage creates poor agricultural soil for crop production because of exposed and eroded subsoil.
I am writing an expository essay for English for academic purposes about soil erosion and I must begin with a thesis statement and an outline. Please review and say whether I am on the right track, thanks.
Thesis Statement:
Soil erosion is a slow process, which continues to persist in the Caribbean because of the different agents such as, water, wind and tillage.
Topic: Water
Topic sentence
First, in the Caribbean, soil erosion by water is due to direct and indirect factors that detaches and transports vulnerable soil.
Topic: Wind
Topic sentence
Secondly, soil erosion by wind in the Caribbean occurs, because of various aspects that enable very fine particles to be lifted and moved great distances.
Topic: Tillage
Topic sentence
Lastly, soil erosion by tillage creates poor agricultural soil for crop production because of exposed and eroded subsoil.