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|Social Media's Impact on Mental Health Research Paper
2 - Writing the introduction of the research paper relies heavily on your opinion, point of view, and personal considerations. It...
Research Papershelenaperez27 - Mar 13, 2023 / Holt - Mar 14, 2023
|ENG 102: Lesson 12: increased screen time and playing video games leads to violent behaviors
2 - Since this is a first person point of view essay, you should restate your thesis statement to...
Research PapersElizabeth812 - Mar 11, 2023 / Holt - Mar 12, 2023
|Physical fitness and mental health.
2 - In - text citations are not properly referenced in this paper. While you are referencing other people and articles...
Research Papersazalieg - Feb 26, 2023 / Holt - Feb 27, 2023
|Vaping as an alternative to traditional smoking
2 - The introduction is simple enough and creates an interest on the part of the reader to learn more about...
Research Paperspranavanil47 - Feb 17, 2023 / Holt - Feb 17, 2023
|How Travel Nursing has changed Healthcare
2 - The first paragraph is an incomplete introduction as it does not present the thesis statement / purpose of...
Research PapersShannajones39 - Jan 1, 2023 / Holt - Jan 1, 2023
|Role of a mother in our lives
2 - The first problem this presentation has is the writing format. It is too compressed on the page, making it...
Research Paperstabinda78 - Dec 29, 2022 / Holt - Dec 30, 2022
|Essay about why Nuclear Power and why is Nuclear the Better Option?
2 - The writing comes across as very bad in sections where the writer does not use in-text citations to explain...
Research PapersIncognitouser - Nov 28, 2022 / Holt - Nov 28, 2022
|Psychological Effects of Clothing & Confidence
2 - While the writer does provide detailed research reports and interpretations, what is missing from these information is the personal...
Research Papersvrodriguez0889 - Nov 17, 2022 / Holt - Nov 17, 2022
|Are Parental relationships improved if fathers take time off work after the birth of a child?
2 - The concerns of women regarding dealing with problems after pregnancy are well documented. These are actually publicly discussed, rehashed,...
Research Papersarawondar - Nov 8, 2022 / Holt - Nov 8, 2022
|Combatting Cyberbullying, Depression, and Suicides - English 102 Lesson 11 Essay
2 - The first paragraph has too many rhetorical questions that lead to a misleading thesis statement. State facts rather than...
Research PapersBradleyQuinn17 - Nov 6, 2022 / Holt - Nov 6, 2022
|Does Mindfulness-based Mediation Ease Anxiety Symptoms?
2 - As a reader, I would need the writer to clarify the difference between basic meditation and mindful meditation. Are...
Research Paperspsteventurner - Nov 5, 2022 / Holt - Nov 6, 2022
|Binge Drinking: Is It Really Worth It?
2 - There is a big difference between alcohol and an alcoholic beverage. The writer should make sure to use terms...
Research Paperskellysw4 - Nov 4, 2022 / Holt - Nov 5, 2022
|Research Paper Rough Draft - Culpable Mentality
2 - The premise of the essay is lacking in terms of the background of culpable mentality. One can assume that...
Research PapersRChughes0408 - Nov 4, 2022 / Holt - Nov 5, 2022
|Essay about Deep Learning for Grad School Application
2 - There seems to be 2 thesis statement paragraphs in this essay when only one is needed. The first paragraph...
Research Papershoudini2518 - Oct 8, 2022 / Holt - Oct 9, 2022
|ENG102 draft review College students & insomnia
2 - The thesis statement in the first paragraph could be made clearer. There are 2 separate topics presented there; the...
Research Papersgloriaa - Oct 1, 2022 / Holt - Oct 2, 2022
|Research Proposal for Sociology Master Degree in Japan University
Research Papersjane_g - Aug 27, 2022 / jane_g - Aug 28, 2022
|Research Essay (Biometric Security issues and lack of government oversight)
2 - This is a research paper that is to be framed within a general reference point of view. The use...
Research Papersjos2248647 - Aug 13, 2022 / Holt - Aug 14, 2022
|Fighting against the Organ Shortage. (Peer review)
Research PapersCameron_rae97 - Jul 23, 2022 / Holt - Jul 23, 2022
|Research paper "Without a Father"
2 - Do not use the definition by the author to open this opinion paper. It is important that the professor...
Research Papersnesander - Jul 18, 2022 / Holt - Jul 18, 2022
|The Use of Nuclear Energy to Supplement Renewable Energy Sources (for peer review/edit)
2 - Rework the opening statement. It should center on the need for nuclear energy as a back up system to...
Research Paperstannsmart - Jul 16, 2022 / Holt - Jul 17, 2022
|Draft Peer Review "Students need a voice"
2 - Proofread the content of the essay. There is no "mist amendment". Even as a draft the essay must contain...
Research Paperscyber serpent - Jul 9, 2022 / Holt - Jul 10, 2022
|Impact of Climate Change and Deforestation within ecosystems Research
2 - There should be a narrowed down discussion focus in the paper. The writer is over-reaching by trying to cover...
Research PapersNsjordan25 - Jul 2, 2022 / Holt - Jul 3, 2022
|Education and the Correlation to the Crime Rate
Research Paperskashcroft05 - May 16, 2022 / Holt - May 17, 2022
|Implications of employee diversity on American organizations' productivity
2 - For the introduction, the author should reverse the presentation by making the current second paragraph first, and the current...
Research Papersyuehua - May 10, 2022 / Holt - May 11, 2022
|Cerebral Palsy in infants
2 - The work has too many in-text citations from the very beginning. The writer relies heavily on the other person...
Research PapersAlmashi - Apr 18, 2022 / Holt - Apr 19, 2022
|Importance of Universal Health (UHC) Coverage in the US and Modern World
2 - The introduction is less of an original thesis presentation as it is composed mostly of cited material from the...
Research PapersCSheppard13 - Apr 16, 2022 / Holt - Apr 17, 2022
|Cold Cookies and Culturalism: AP Research paper on cultural upbringing and biology
2 - Ease the reader into the sugar and temperature focus. Use cultural and food history elements to accomplish there entry...
Research Paperssiyeonish - Apr 16, 2022 / Holt - Apr 16, 2022
|Endocrine Disruptors and Micro Plastics: Or How I Learned To Love The Homosexual Frogs
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for the input! I definitely felt like i had built towards a bit Doom'y...
Research Papersjaubuchon28 - Mar 25, 2022 / jaubuchon28 - Mar 25, 2022
|New Hope for Depression Sufferers: a rough draft
2 - The first problem that this essay has is related to the number of in-text citations that each paragraph contains....
Research Papersnimna - Mar 24, 2022 / Holt - Mar 25, 2022
|The Link Between ADHD and Eating Disorders: A rough draft
2 - The research will benefit from around 3 more paragraphs placed at the start of the essay. The writer should...
Research Papersbromero1987 - Mar 4, 2022 / Holt - Mar 5, 2022
|Don't Throw That Away - Recycle It! - Draft Research Paper
Research PapersRaiderRob - Feb 19, 2022 / Holt - Feb 20, 2022
|Does getting a college degree guarantee you will have the career you love?
3 - Never. I got a degree in English language and Literature and work in a completely different field. I like...
Research Papersale2050315 - Feb 9, 2022 / LLIMITT - Feb 16, 2022
|Because a patient's life can be more unpleasant than death, they should have a right to choose
3 - Personally, I opt for euthanasia and support your point of view, but you have to find a few more...
Research PapersCsbryant11 - Feb 13, 2022 / LLIMITT - Feb 14, 2022
|Mental Health and the Preemie Parent
2 - Good work on the creation of the discussion premise. The backgrounder and topic statements are quite solid and clearly...
Research PapersSharonH - Jan 8, 2022 / Holt - Jan 8, 2022
|Social Media Affect on Mental Health
2 - Focus the research on data relating only to teen use of social media and and the resulting effects on...
Research Papersellakay - Dec 24, 2021 / Holt - Dec 25, 2021
|The Constitutionality of Capital Punishment - research paper
2 - Since the first paragraph is nothing but a series of citations from other sources that do not directly relate...
Research PapersTyNeadik - Dec 23, 2021 / Holt - Dec 23, 2021
|Wage Gap Among Black Women in America
2 - Make sure to keep the focus on the African American woman. This reference suddenly points to a generic...
Research PapersNa3 - Dec 20, 2021 / Holt - Dec 20, 2021
|Conditions of Mental Illness: How Capitalism is Responsible for the Mental Health Crisis
2 - You are still trying to establish your thesis statement. As such, a general discussion of the cost of...
Research PapersBuggy - Dec 18, 2021 / Holt - Dec 18, 2021
|Exploring options for holding corporations accountable - DuPont and PFOA contamination
2 - The hook will be more effective if told through a narration of historical events, without any reference citations. That...
Research Paperssunnyhart - Dec 18, 2021 / Holt - Dec 18, 2021
|Benefits of Legalizing Marijuana in Arizona
Research Papersstewartray - Dec 10, 2021 / stewartray - Dec 14, 2021
|Research Paper on Universal Healthcare. Need three indications of a weakness within essay.
2 - Offer a reason for this reasoning presentation. Not everyone will agree with you regarding the connection of personal...
Research Papersjcannon22 - Dec 13, 2021 / Holt - Dec 13, 2021
|Research paper on why serial killers choose to commit multiple murders
2 - The opening statement lacks impact. Try to come up with a more interesting hook for your presentation. For impact,...
Research Paperselilucero13 - Nov 27, 2021 / Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|Why are vaccines important?
2 - Kindly review your in-text citations. You have not seperated it from the actual text, making the paragraphs highly confusing...
Research Paperslyssamariet - Nov 14, 2021 / Holt - Nov 15, 2021
|Rough draft peer review on why play is important for children
2 - The opening statement and the introduction were placed in reverse in the presentation. The second paragraph makes for an...
Research Paperstabithasenff123 - Nov 12, 2021 / Holt - Nov 13, 2021
|Grammar/Writing Techniques Cultural Competence in Healthcare as it Relates to the LGBTQ+ Community
NEW - Cultural Competence in Healthcare as it Relates to the LGBT Community For editing, content, and formatting needs please...
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|The effect of college debt on the future life choices of students
2 - The paper definitely needs professional editing and proof-reading. Most paragraphs require a content clean-up that is not covered by...
Research PapersMckennarichards - Oct 13, 2021 / Holt - Oct 13, 2021
|Essay - peer review America Under Siege: Combatting the Opioid Epidemic
2 - Try to establish how the "under siege" aspect happened. Why is this the perception? What does your paper...
Research Papersmikecaz - Sep 18, 2021 / Holt - Sep 19, 2021
|Navy SEAL Impact Research Paper
2 - You can do away with this portion. It only repeats the last half of the introduction. Find another...
Research Paperscasenstowe - Sep 17, 2021 / Holt - Sep 18, 2021
|Does Meat cause cancer, how and why? What can be done to eat meat safely?
2 - It appears the writer forgot to upload the complete research paper. The discussion is presented but there is no...
Research Papersmedicmike83 - Aug 11, 2021 / Holt - Aug 12, 2021
|United States Decrease in Population Growth
2 - The essay does not have a proper topic introduction and thesis statement. The first paragraph is directly informative and...
Research Paperspeanut04 - Aug 8, 2021 / Holt - Aug 10, 2021
|The Effects of Physical Activity on Mental Health in Adolescents
2 - The first paragraph needs to clarify where the civil unrest in taking place and how that relates to mental...
Research Papersmmoore598 - Jul 30, 2021 / Holt - Jul 31, 2021
|Universal Background Checks
Research Papersmhallums02 - Jun 21, 2021 / Holt - Jun 22, 2021
|Research Essay advising individuals on how to help their loved ones to stop smoking - review
2 - Do not open with information sources. she prompt summary does not negate the need for a proper topic introduction...
Research PapersJordania - Jun 16, 2021 / Holt - Jun 17, 2021
|Positive work environment and how it influences your work result
2 - Since this is your thesis statement, you cannot use an in-text citation for it. Rather, it would be...
Research Papersasha1310 - Jun 2, 2021 / Holt - Jun 2, 2021
|Single-payer Healthcare System and Why it should be Implemented in the U.S
2 - The second sentence of the first paragraph is confusing to read. It feels like itis overloaded with information, which...
Research PapersAshUndead - May 23, 2021 / Holt - May 24, 2021
|Benefits of Early Childhood Education. Essay for ENG 102 Rio Salado
2 - What is the discussion focus of this essay ? There is a lack of concerning topics at the start...
Research PapersTiffanylane7 - May 16, 2021 / Holt - May 16, 2021
|A Look at Animal Agriculture from an Environmental Perspective
2 - Define and differentiate. These 2 are usually seen as connected but yeseparate environmental topics. Educate the people who...
Research Papersfruitfulfaerie - May 9, 2021 / Holt - May 9, 2021
|Reducing Social Determinants of Health on the Navajo Nation
2 - Consider providing a historical perspective of how the Navajo healthcare system came to be at the start of the...
Research Papersjahasteen - May 1, 2021 / Holt - May 2, 2021
|Looking for Review of My Essay on Maker Communities and Technology
2 - Please provide more clarity in this particular sentence. The sentence structure is incorrect and therefore does not make...
Research Papersmmvinson - Apr 29, 2021 / Holt - Apr 30, 2021
|How can military mental health services improve?
2 - Move the citation that is at the very opening of this essay to the second paragraph. It is never...
Research Papersmarqvivi - Apr 29, 2021 / Holt - Apr 29, 2021
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