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|Healthcare costs in America - Peer Review research rough draft.
2 - Amy, the first paragraph should work as a summary of the content of the research/article you are reviewing. The...
Research Papersamc518 - Jan 12, 2020 / Holt - Jan 12, 2020
|"Healing from the Outside In: Veterans Helping Veterans in Nature" Thoughts appreciated
2 - The first 2 paragraphs should be combined to form the proper thesis statement for the research paper. You should...
Research Papersbcdeford83 - Jan 4, 2020 / Holt - Jan 11, 2020
|Gun Control Effectiveness - English 102 Paper. Look over sentence structure, organization and thesis
2 - Sarah, the essay does not have a proper thesis. The thesis needs to have a basis in the direction...
Research Paperssferencz - Dec 28, 2019 / Holt - Jan 10, 2020
|The importance of gun control. Answer these three questions (educational studies)
2 - @Jibarra Hello. Thanks for approaching the forum. I hope this feedback somehow helps you. Try to be more...
Research PapersJibarra - Dec 22, 2019 / Maria - Jan 2, 2020
|Point out three things I did well (Amazons effect on the business world)
2 - @Nix111 Hello. Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback gives you clarity on what you can do...
Research PapersNix111 - Dec 22, 2019 / Maria - Jan 2, 2020
|This is my ENG 102 research essay about Kickboxing
2 - @Joe1rou Hello. Welcome to the forum! Here is my feedback on your writing. When you're trying to use...
Research PapersJoe1rou - Dec 28, 2019 / Maria - Dec 28, 2019
|Why You Shouldn't Have An Epidural During Childbirth
2 - @DestinyNauticaT Welcome to the forum! Thanks for coming here. Here's my feedback on this writing. While I think...
Research PapersDestinyNauticaT - Dec 11, 2019 / Maria - Dec 13, 2019
|Improving Elderly Life Quality with Intergenerational Activities
2 - Hi Would like to share some insights on your paper. Firstly you conveyed your writing clearly. What...
Research Paperscblack79 - Dec 1, 2019 / XPROFF - Dec 1, 2019
|Importance of Mothers and Fathers and the Importance of Marriage-ENG102 Rio Salado Stanley M.
2 - @standrea425 Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback of mine gives you insight on how...
Research Papersstandrea425 - Nov 24, 2019 / Maria - Nov 26, 2019
|"The Culture" Research essay of police subculture
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Research Papersjoi2018 - Nov 24, 2019 / Maria - Nov 25, 2019
|Dog Breeds and their Aggression; A Nationwide problem with animal welfare and public health
2 - @rya2160098 Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I hope my feedback gives you insight on how to improve this...
Research Papersrya2160098 - Nov 20, 2019 / Maria - Nov 22, 2019
|Thesis: Sobriety and resources for Pima Woman in Salt River Pima Maricopa Indian Community.
2 - @Stepp29 HI there. Welcome to the forum! I hope my feedback gives you insight on how to improve your...
Research PapersStepp29 - Nov 18, 2019 / Maria - Nov 19, 2019
|Social Media correlation with Anxiety and Depression
2 - @kcohen Hi there. Welcome to the forum! Hopefully, my feedback will give you insight on how improve your writing....
Research Paperskcohen - Nov 3, 2019 / Maria - Nov 16, 2019
|Economical and Environmental Effects of Electric Cars
2 - @MAT2162764 Hi there. Welcome to the forum! Because you're new here, I hope that this feedback will help you...
Research PapersMAT2162764 - Nov 15, 2019 / Maria - Nov 16, 2019
|The Impacts of Science Fiction on Technology
2 - @Shiva_kh Hi there. Welcome to the forum! Hopefully, my feedback will give you insight on how to improve your...
Research PapersShiva_kh - Nov 11, 2019 / Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|Research essay on the topic of The Salem Witch Trials
2 - @hodaym89 Hi there. Thanks for being a part of the forum! Hopefully, this feedback will help you in the...
Research Papershodaym89 - Nov 7, 2019 / Maria - Nov 9, 2019
|Research writing assignment on influence of family and friends on teenagers
2 - @ngochong0258 Hi there. Welcome to the forum! Thanks for being around. I hope that the feedback you receive here...
Research Papersngochong0258 - Nov 6, 2019 / Maria - Nov 9, 2019
|Essay about the pro and cons of gun control
2 - @sherflohr Hi there! Welcome to the forum. Seeing as you are new here, I hope that my feedback gives...
Research Paperssherflohr - Nov 6, 2019 / Maria - Nov 9, 2019
|Fluidity help on Coffee research paper
2 - @jshepherd09 Hi. Welcome to the forum! Hopefully, my feedback is decent enough to give you insight on how to...
Research Papersjshepherd09 - Nov 5, 2019 / Maria - Nov 7, 2019
|The realities of domestic violence research essay
2 - @Mikkan Hi there. Welcome to the forum! Hopefully, my feedback will give you insight on how to improve your...
Research PapersMikkan - Nov 5, 2019 / Maria - Nov 7, 2019
|Should children attend preschool?
2 - @ALI2162205 Welcome to the forum! I hope you're doing good. I'm here to give you feedback on your writing....
Research PapersALI2162205 - Oct 13, 2019 / Maria - Oct 18, 2019
|Abstract - Socio – ecological resilience of mangrove-shrimp models under salinity intrusion
2 - @dungtran Welcome to the forum. I'm here to give feedback on this abstract of yours. Generally, there is...
Research Papersdungtran - Oct 11, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|Cultural Differences Between America and Japan
Research Paperskatsue - Sep 26, 2019 / Spark00eh - Sep 26, 2019
|Effects on Recycling Essay - Review Request
2 - @niss Hey, welcome. We're happy to have you here. Please do check out this post for the feedback of...
Research Papersniss - Sep 23, 2019 / Maria - Sep 24, 2019
|IGNORANCE OF THE LAW EXCUSES NO ONE: AN OFFICIAL EXPOSE
2 - @REXLEGISSTANLEY Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback serves you well in the future. If...
Research PapersREXLEGISSTANLEY - Sep 17, 2019 / Maria - Sep 18, 2019
|ENGL102 - Visual Analysis Paper (Twin Adventurers)
3 - The paper's assignment was a Descriptive Analysis project on two pictures. We could use paintings, photographs, or digital images....
Research Papersdiopbel - Aug 29, 2019 / diopbel - Sep 18, 2019
|Is reading at the age of 3 beneficial? A trend to push children to start reading early on.
2 - @tkeyhani Hi, dear! Welcome to the forum. I hope this feedback becomes beneficial for your writing endeavors. If it...
Research Paperstkeyhani - Sep 15, 2019 / Maria - Sep 16, 2019
|My paper about the Vietnamese grammar
2 - @Phamly Hi there. Welcome to the forum! Whatever your intentions are, I hope that this forum satiates you in...
Research PapersPhamly - Sep 5, 2019 / Maria - Sep 11, 2019
|"Childhood Education: Starting them off Right on the Right Foot"
2 - @EMM2156872 Hi there. Welcome to the forum. Whatever your initial purpose of joining is, I hope that you find...
Research PapersEMM2156872 - Sep 1, 2019 / Maria - Sep 7, 2019
|Animal Cruelty and Human Violence - English 102: Section 11432
3 - vincec, sorry for the late reply, back to the essay: I really think your first paragraph is not catchy...
Research Papersvincec - Aug 30, 2019 / phlorem - Sep 6, 2019
|Effects of social media addiction on people
2 - Hi Your essay is really good except a few grammatical errors or choice of words. First of all,there...
Research Papersedw2189851 - Aug 20, 2019 / ahsan_daniyal - Aug 22, 2019
|Debate research paper on abortion (I'm pro-choice)
2 - Some of your arguments are weak or childish. For example, you talk about animal hunting or buying a gun...
Research PapersCassiehern - Aug 17, 2019 / Rich Monte - Aug 18, 2019
|Research essay on drug addiction and treatment
Research Papersadrimarie21 - Aug 14, 2019 / adrimarie21 - Aug 15, 2019
|ENG 108 Final Paper - Should we live together before marriage?
3 - This is a mind captivating article. Cohabitation is still being observed today especially in the universities. This write-up...
Research PapersPetra Shih - Aug 3, 2019 / Vickspring - Aug 8, 2019
|Americans should not have the right to end their own life
2 - Very interesting topic. Good job. Didnt know this was happening. Paper flows nicely and well written. It is written...
Research PapersJCrismon - Aug 3, 2019 / Readerlover2 - Aug 5, 2019
|Media's Hidden Effects for ENG 102
2 - @nickENG102 Hello. Welcome to the forum. I'll be providing you with writing feedback on this specific essay. I hope...
Research PapersnickENG102 - Aug 1, 2019 / Maria - Aug 2, 2019
|Psychology self analysis - first research paper ive ever written.
2 - @jessiemkay Hello there! I see that you're new here. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find this platform...
Research Papersjessiemkay - Jul 29, 2019 / Maria - Jul 29, 2019
|Help peer review my essay titled, "Major League Baseball and the Effect on Foreign Policy"
2 - @BSmith1209 Hello there. Welcome to the forum! I'll provide you with writing feedback on your essay. I hope you...
Research PapersBSmith1209 - Jul 27, 2019 / Maria - Jul 29, 2019
|What is the Sino-US trade war and their effect on the economy?
2 - @SylviaFong Hello there! I see that you're new here. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find this feedback...
Research PapersSylviaFong - Jul 27, 2019 / Maria - Jul 27, 2019
|Does America have a Gun Problem - Rio Salado
2 - @ewamunds Hello there. I see that you're new here - welcome to the forum! I hope you find this...
Research Papersewamunds - Jul 26, 2019 / Maria - Jul 26, 2019
|Draft Essay about "E-waste solutions for a growing environmental challenge" - Peer Review
2 - @JAM2076547 Hello there. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find the feedback you gather here to be beneficial...
Research PapersJAM2076547 - Jul 26, 2019 / Maria - Jul 26, 2019
|Argumentive essay, obesity in children/ Unhealthy foods
3 - @KelseyWhite Hi there! Welcome to the forum. Let me do my best to provide you with an analysis...
Research PapersKelseyWhite - Jun 30, 2019 / Maria - Jun 30, 2019
|Cobalt Mining Research Essay Evaluation
2 - @Coralea95 Hello there! Welcome to the forum. Let me try my best to provide you with feedback on...
Research PapersCoralea95 - Jun 29, 2019 / Maria - Jun 29, 2019
|Spanking: Effects and Traumas - Help with this short college paper.
2 - @ishmealruffin Hi there! Welcome to the forum. First and foremost, work on the manner in which you...
Research Papersishmealruffin - Jun 17, 2019 / Maria - Jun 18, 2019
|CHILDHOOD OBESITY AND WHO TO BLAME - Parents, Education, Prevention
2 - @BEA2160470 Hello there! Welcome to the forum. I'll do my best to assist you in providing a feedback....
Research PapersBEA2160470 - Jun 14, 2019 / Maria - Jun 15, 2019
|How did the Industrial Revolution paly int o the rise of modern architecture
2 - @Rachel Cai When you said: ..., in my opinion need some changes like: ... brought a profound impact...
Research PapersRachel Cai - Jun 13, 2019 / malenitass - Jun 14, 2019
|De-Stigmatizing The Gap Year
2 - @thatonemoroccan Hello there! Welcome to the forum. Don't be afraid to approach us the next time you have...
Research Papersthatonemoroccan - Jun 8, 2019 / Maria - Jun 8, 2019
|Pension system, cross-culture, differences between Chinese and American aging conditions and so on
2 - @Alyssa Liu Hello there! Firstly, be cautious of the structure of your sentences. Notice how you have a...
Research PapersAlyssa Liu - Jun 2, 2019 / Maria - Jun 3, 2019
|Research paper on the use of CBD oil to treat mental illness in children
2 - @cmurphy1182 Hi there! Welcome to the forum. First and foremost, I think it is great that you are...
Research Paperscmurphy1182 - Jun 1, 2019 / Maria - Jun 1, 2019
|Protecting people with Autism During Police Encounters: Research paper
2 - @Mastapluck Hi there! First and foremost, I think that you should focus on compressing your thoughts into smaller...
Research PapersMastapluck - May 28, 2019 / Maria - May 29, 2019
|Is Organic Farming Worth the Cost?
2 - @juliannabond59 Hi there! Evade being repetitive when it comes toy our words. Doing this will enable you to...
Research Papersjuliannabond59 - May 22, 2019 / Maria - May 23, 2019
|Research Paper on stress, burnout and depression.
3 - @kay2158231 Hi there! Seems like you already have a general idea how you can improve your essay. Let's...
Research Paperskay2158231 - May 22, 2019 / Maria - May 22, 2019
|Dissociative Identity Disorder: Something Real or an Act
2 - @MarieJurado18 Hi there! First and foremost, be cautious of the structure of your sentences. I have noticed that...
Research PapersMarieJurado18 - May 19, 2019 / Maria - May 20, 2019
|HOW VIDEO GAMES POSITIVELY INFLUENCE TO STUDENTS' LIVES
2 - I would suggest revising your introductory line to something along the lines of: There have been discussions on the...
Research PapersNATNg13 - May 3, 2019 / Maria - May 3, 2019
|How Lauryn Hill's Album Defines What It Means To Be Human
2 - Citations should always be placed at the end of sentences, not in the middle. This is applicable to all...
Research Paperscrl17b - Apr 28, 2019 / Maria - Apr 29, 2019
|Impacts of Depression and Its Effects on People. Second greatest reason for disability in the world
Research Paperssarah0912 - Apr 27, 2019 / sarah0912 - Apr 29, 2019
|The Abstract of the research of the route direction
2 - I would suggest that you try to use formal language to help your essay become more structured. When you're...
Research Paperswashiguanyu - Apr 23, 2019 / Maria - Apr 23, 2019
|ENG102 - Taking a Stand Against Bullying
2 - I can't quite pinpoint what type of citation format you are using. From what I can see, it's supposed...
Research Papershorriblewriter1 - Apr 22, 2019 / Maria - Apr 22, 2019
|English 102 - Mobile IV Therapy: AZ IV Medics
2 - A couple of mistakes that I had noticed sporadically scattered throughout the essay: 1. Misuse of capitalization 2. Lengthy...
Research Papersmheistan - Apr 21, 2019 / Maria - Apr 21, 2019
|CBD: Better Than Prescripition Drugs
2 - Let's go through the technicalities. I suggest that you find a better transition word when you move from one...
Research Papersjazfox - Apr 5, 2019 / Maria - Apr 5, 2019
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