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|The different issues that illegal immigration has brought to America
3 - Kekoa, the topic you have chosen to discuss is quite broad in coverage while your synopsis or thesis statement...
Research Paperskkubli3246 - Jan 18, 2017 / Holt - Jan 18, 2017
|Violence and Video Games correlation - A research paper
2 - Bryan, the main problem with your paper is that it is composed solely of quoted information from other sources....
Research PapersWillis1313 - Jan 16, 2017 / Holt - Jan 17, 2017
|Essay about motivation letter for German's university scholarship. How to make aroused letter?
3 - Dewa, in terms of presentation, your letter is confused. You have accidentally mixed the content of a letter of...
Research Papersdewakresna - Jan 12, 2017 / Holt - Jan 12, 2017
|Creationism over Evolutionism
3 - I am not a moderator or an experienced essay writer, so take my opinion with a grain of salt....
Research Paperstolliky - Jan 11, 2017 / TRaw98 - Jan 12, 2017
|The Ethical Pitfalls of Orphanage Tourism
2 - George, your discussion regarding "Orphanage Tourism" is very one sided. It does not deliver a balanced discussion because you...
Research Papersgeo2149457 - Jan 11, 2017 / Holt - Jan 11, 2017
|Different forms of Diabetes Mellitus that a person can be affected by.
3 - Will, a peer reviewed article such as this still requires the same information be placed in it as a...
Research Papersshamus7555 - Jan 10, 2017 / Holt - Jan 10, 2017
|Seeking Peer Review - The development and application of animal assisted therapy in human mental
2 - Shi, you need to revise your opening statement in order to present your thesis statement somewhere within that. Your...
Research PapersShi Lyu - Jan 4, 2017 / Holt - Jan 4, 2017
|Small firms, R&D, technology and innovation
5 - @Holt Dear Holt, thank you for your feed back, the text is not yet finished, i post here just...
Research PapersVirak kong - Dec 29, 2016 / Virak kong - Dec 30, 2016
|An Unhealthy Generation: Childhood Obesity
2 - Victoria, your first paragraph should be divided into two because you are discussing 2 different topics in one paragraph....
Research Papersvjb - Dec 24, 2016 / Holt - Dec 24, 2016
|Forensic Accounting Is Important in Financial Investigations
2 - Wendy, lets get started with your thesis statement. It doesn't really tell me what you are going to be...
Research Paperswen2066281 - Dec 24, 2016 / Holt - Dec 24, 2016
|Essay on the acknowledgement of bullying in society-
3 - Lexi, you need to outline your discussion for this research paper before you write it. There is a clear...
Research PapersLexLex - Dec 24, 2016 / Holt - Dec 24, 2016
|LSM Portfolio: English Legal System Seminars and Reflection Question
2 - Jeremy, where is the copy of the seminar questions that you were supposed to respond to? You provided the...
Research PapersJeremy Newcastl - Dec 15, 2016 / Holt - Dec 15, 2016
|Comparing Foreign Ownership, Return Volatility, Volume, and Risk Among ASEAN Countries
4 - How about this miss, Revision #1 The finance research regarding the stock is interesting to explore, especially...
Research Papersahmadmaulinnaufa - Dec 12, 2016 / ahmadmaulinnaufa - Dec 13, 2016
|ENGLISH 102 RESEARCH PAPER ROUGH DRAFT (Will Our Roads be Safe With Legal Weed?)
2 - Hi Ally, try not to present an actual information as part of your thesis statement. This paragraph is supposed...
Research Papersanc64 - Dec 11, 2016 / Holt - Dec 11, 2016
|The debate on making Marijuana legal - the fight has begun
3 - There are a lot of simple sentences that could be combined, as well as transitional words or lists that...
Research Papersangiereneen - Dec 10, 2016 / nerdella - Dec 10, 2016
|"Dead fish", "Vung An", "Formosa", "Chinese steel factory"; Polluted environment in my country essay
5 - @Thaomy your presentation's subject seems to be confused me...
Research PapersThaomy - Dec 10, 2016 / voivua1993 - Dec 10, 2016
|Night Essay- add or suggest what I should expand upon for in text analysis and other issues.
2 - Steven, I think that the reason your professor indicated a need for more analysis within the text is because...
Research Papersstevenmassie22 - Dec 9, 2016 / Holt - Dec 10, 2016
|The Cult Status of the Laestadian Lutheran Church
3 - Ava, in the opening statement, you should focus on presenting the fact that the church is considered a cult...
Research Papersrousua - Dec 9, 2016 / Holt - Dec 9, 2016
|Negative connotation of feminism and reasonings of why women today do not identify with the movement
3 - @ratoberry I appreciate the stance you took at the beginning of this essay. You started as a person...
Research Papersratoberry - Dec 7, 2016 / Mehzah - Dec 8, 2016
|All life on earth is dependent on the weather. Global Climate Change
2 - Hi BJ, you have your work cut out for you in this research paper. While it is quite informative...
Research Papersbjjefferson - Dec 4, 2016 / Holt - Dec 4, 2016
|How to Prevent Diabetes. Measures That Can Be Used To Prevent this disease.
2 - Jacqueline, I know that you have the thesis statement in the "How to Prevent Diabetes" section of your research,...
Research PapersJackieG - Dec 4, 2016 / Holt - Dec 4, 2016
|Why Deaf Culture Should Gain More Recognition
2 - Geoffrey, I am not sure if your teacher has told you this but you have not properly presented your...
Research Papersgs83phx - Dec 3, 2016 / Holt - Dec 3, 2016
|Science fiction presence in our life
2 - Siboney, there are one too many problems with this paper of yours. The format of the paper alone, the...
Research PapersSiboney - Dec 2, 2016 / Holt - Dec 2, 2016
|Research Paper: Research Question- Is Marijuana Safer than Alcohol?
2 - David, this type of research paper must be delicately balanced between the good and bad effects of both alcohol...
Research Papersdavidbow31 - Nov 30, 2016 / Holt - Nov 30, 2016
|Safer Streets Include Guns
2 - hello @tvanmierlo97. this is my suggestion for your writing.. hopefully it can help you.. ... but keep society...
Research Paperstvanmierlo97 - Nov 27, 2016 / Pramudia27 - Nov 28, 2016
|Fire Prevention Laws, how far is too far?
3 - Hi Daniel, Welcome to EssayForum :) I have some experience in writing some research projects but this type...
Research Papersdgrindl - Nov 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 27, 2016
|Cannabis and Epileptic Seizures Research Paper
2 - Courtney, let's start with your opening paragraph. As far as the inclusion of your thesis statement in the first...
Research PapersCShea1008 - Nov 18, 2016 / Holt - Nov 18, 2016
|Marijuana Controversy and research paper
2 - Sean, the essay is good. However, it seems to be lacking a representation of suggested solutions to the problem...
Research PapersSEA2144743 - Nov 15, 2016 / Holt - Nov 16, 2016
|Modeling And Optimization Of Swelling, Drug Loading And Release From Natural Polymer Hydrogels
2 - @Polymeryounis It is good article and you have to take some points into your consideration....
Research PapersPolymeryounis - Nov 13, 2016 / london1988 - Nov 13, 2016
|Artificial blood replacing donated blood, goverment involvement research and religious views
2 - Juan, for starters, if you are writing a paper regarding a medical topic, make sure that all of the...
Research Papersjuedas8181 - Nov 13, 2016 / Holt - Nov 13, 2016
|HELP ME WITH RECOGNIZING THREE FAILINGS OF MY PAPER ON THE COLIN KAEPERNICK EFFECT.
2 - Nate, the first problem that you have to address in your paper is the fact that the topic you...
Research Papersnateshepherd - Nov 12, 2016 / Holt - Nov 13, 2016
|A Revised version of Obama Giving Away the ICANN Administration
2 - Ashley, when I read your essay, the first thing I thought was that you had chosen a very interesting...
Research Papersashleymary1022 - Nov 12, 2016 / Holt - Nov 13, 2016
|Letting the Media Have an Upper Hand
2 - Harleyann, your opening statement is supposed to accomplish a number of things for your essay. First, it should present...
Research Papershjwolf - Nov 12, 2016 / Holt - Nov 12, 2016
|How can our teenagers obtain information on sexually transmitted disease? Rough draft essay
2 - Cris, when you revise your thesis statement, it would be best if you pose the full list of questions...
Research Paperscris0829 - Nov 11, 2016 / Holt - Nov 11, 2016
|The translation Strategies in product promotion
2 - Dear Amanda, here are my advices for your writing, feel free to correct my responds, - you...
Research Papersamanda du - Nov 9, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Nov 9, 2016
|Review Research paper over Police in the Schools
2 - Fhallon, when you present the facts behind your discussion try to balance the discussion by offering solid evidence regarding...
Research Papersneifertf - Nov 7, 2016 / Holt - Nov 8, 2016
|Essay about Campaign Finance and its harms on the political process
2 - Babiker, when you are working on a research paper such as this, it is important to properly introduce the...
Research PapersBabiker - Nov 7, 2016 / Holt - Nov 7, 2016
|HELPING TO SAVE LIVES WITH VACCINES
2 - I suggest: There have been lots of conversations about vaccines in Vaccines are a buzz topic nowadays. ...
Research Papersheidson - Nov 5, 2016 / Summertime - Nov 7, 2016
|The Most Costly Bowl of Soup in the World - Peer Review My Essay about Shark Finning
2 - Tom, the essay covers a good topic. However, I find it wanting in some aspects of information. For example....
Research Paperstomkeav - Nov 6, 2016 / Holt - Nov 7, 2016
|Attention-Deficit Hyperactive Disorder. Rough Draft on ADHD in Children
3 - Dyllan, academic rules dictate that your opening statement should never contain any sort of citation. That is because the...
Research Papersdjsk8r - Nov 6, 2016 / Holt - Nov 7, 2016
|This paper is about the nutrition importance in school meal programs.
3 - Feedback?...
Research PapersSummerV - Nov 3, 2016 / SummerV - Nov 6, 2016
|Vegetarian leads the way to better health
2 - This was very good. I would appreciate your feedback on my research paper. It is not near up to...
Research PapersKev2178303 - Nov 5, 2016 / SummerV - Nov 6, 2016
|Article review on paper "Effect of value-enhanced texturized soy protein on the sensory and cooking"
2 - @lyy2268768 Hi lyy, In order to assist you in reviewing your article, I need to understand if...
Research Paperslyy2268768 - Oct 31, 2016 / okorobiadimma14 - Oct 31, 2016
|Leadership use case for a management assignment for college
2 - Hey, kamel. The overall structure of your essay seems fine, but I noticed a few grammatical errors here and...
Research Paperskamel2016 - Oct 26, 2016 / abhavsar - Oct 30, 2016
|70 American scientists who won the Nobel Prize wrote an open letter backing Hillary
2 - Dear Ledat, here are some advices for your writing, feel free to correct me, a letter of 70...
Research Papersledat1985 - Oct 27, 2016 / fadhilmd25 - Oct 27, 2016
|Zero Carbon Architecture: A unique research topic in this area
2 - Ofor, I think that one of the fields you can research would be the creation of zero carbon homes....
Research Paperschee_gor - Oct 24, 2016 / Holt - Oct 25, 2016
|I am testing out this forum and also would like some suggestions on my tentative research paper.
2 - Hi Peter, Welcome to EF team! Here's my analysis of your research paper. I hope you can follow...
Research PapersPBERRIOS - Oct 2, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Oct 3, 2016
|Research topics on data mining - suggestions?
13 - Reasearch Topics in Data mining i need a some Research Topics in Data Mining with Security please anyone...
Research PapersAnjana Devi - Apr 11, 2012 / mundrusuresh - Sep 30, 2016
|Mass Incarceration in America: The Economic & Social Impacts on the African-American Community
2 - Hi Jozia, I would like to say welcome to EssayForum :) We are here to help you sharing...
Research PapersJoziaG - Sep 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Sep 29, 2016
|Justified Homicide or Murder? The Use of Deadly Force by Law Enforcement.
3 - hello wlocito, your topic was totally good for us especially for Law student because they can get a lot...
Research Paperswlucito - Sep 9, 2016 / mem77 - Sep 14, 2016
|The use of cannabis in the United States is rising - public perception of legal weed. English 102.
2 - Hi, I think your writing quality is pretty good, but this essay is very hard to follow. For one...
Research Paperskauffman142 - Sep 8, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 8, 2016
|The effects of animal captivity - research essay!
2 - Hi, your essay was pretty good, but I didn't really like the short, choppy paragraphs. Has your professor given...
Research Papersshawna926 - Sep 3, 2016 / TJLuschen - Sep 4, 2016
|Wealthy People and Crimes they get away with
2 - Hi SamSew2010 There are many suggestions for you. I hope it will develop your writing skill. Take a...
Research PapersSamSew2010 - Aug 25, 2016 / tyar32 - Aug 26, 2016
|Rough draft - Abortion , by: Mohammed Alhajri
4 - HI, Mohammed ... illegal aspects of abortion (Tooley). ... avoid the illegal abortion (Thomson). ...
Research PapersMoh2147049 - Jul 25, 2016 / stephwithlegal1 - Aug 26, 2016
|The Decline of the U.S. Economics
2 - Hi, I think you use "in which" many times. Here are my some suggestions. When you view the...
Research Papersstephwithlegal1 - Aug 25, 2016 / Angela Nang - Aug 25, 2016
|Sudden Infant Death Syndrome. SIDS research paper, needing proofreading or general comments
3 - hi... Sudden Infant Death Syndrome, or SIDS, is an unexplained death of an infant the death syndrome that...
Research Paperskhdivall7 - Aug 13, 2016 / Fadhilahumar91 - Aug 15, 2016
|Study on English-Chinese Translation of JANE EYRE Based on Juliane House's TQA Model
3 - Hi Galaxy, first of all, WELCOME to the Essay Forum Team, we hope that you find this website credible...
Research PapersSWMGalaxy - Jul 22, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 25, 2016
|Draft Essay: Undertstanding the Average Teenager
3 - Hi Esmi, I hope my insights are not too late. First of all, once again, WELCOME to the team!...
Research Papersesmi_10 - Jul 8, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 21, 2016
|Research paper about declawing - why declawing cats is detrimental to their health and well-being.
4 - Hi Mary, first stop, when it comes to editing or deleting your post or review on someone else's essay,...
Research Papersmdirilo - Jul 14, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 19, 2016
|Thying to solve and look for solutions, on the immigration issue.
3 - Hi Carlos, first of all, immigration is really a very complex topic to write about, it's one of those...
Research Paperscane1985 - Jul 17, 2016 / justivy03 - Jul 18, 2016
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