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|Draft of research paper/persuasive essay on how to define success as a foster youth
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|Research Paper Draft--Martial Arts and Its Positive Impact on Mental and Physical Health in Adults
2 - You can make the writing stronger by offering a more intricate look into the history of martial arts and...
Research Papersa7mg11 - Mar 10, 2021 / Holt - Mar 10, 2021
|The Effects of Human Activity on Climate Change (Seeking criticism and main points of weakness)
2 - Remove the in-text citation in the first paragraph. The first paragraph is your thesis paragraph or introduction to the...
Research Papersleighannfraley - Mar 9, 2021 / Holt - Mar 9, 2021
|Research Essay: Politics: The Destructor of Relationships
2 - The opening paragraph takes too long to get to the thesis statement. You are over introducing the topic. Try...
Research Papersjdemara - Feb 26, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
|Peer Review for Cyber Bullying Research Project/Essay
2 - The essay feels like it is starting in the middle of the presentation due to the improper thesis paragraph...
Research PapersCantonJunkie - Feb 1, 2021 / Holt - Feb 2, 2021
|The Academic Institutions in The United States Should Take a More Holistic Approach to Education
2 - You can further extent the content of this essay if you spend more time expanding on your personal opinion...
Research PapersArizonaGrown - Jan 10, 2021 / Holt - Jan 11, 2021
|For the Low Price of "Free": Should Higher Education be Made Free For All?
2 - There is a lacking thesis presentation in this research paper. There is no introduction to the topic. You seem...
Research PapersBlueBlur997 - Jan 3, 2021 / Holt - Jan 3, 2021
|Antibiotic Resistance in Pediatric Patients
2 - The first paragraph should deliver a focused history of the use of antibiotics in children and the commonly known...
Research Papersdeemoss2043 - Dec 28, 2020 / Holt - Dec 28, 2020
|Colonizing Mars and the Death of Earth
2 - Do not open the presentation with a paraphrasing, direct quote, or reference to Elon Musk. You do not need...
Research PapersLaila_tatum - Dec 27, 2020 / Holt - Dec 28, 2020
|How Domesticated Animals Prolong One's Life (Research Paper by Abby Stovall)
Research Papersgoosegonecrazy - Dec 18, 2020 / goosegonecrazy - Dec 21, 2020
|Dress Responsibly: The Social and Environmental Downfalls of Fast Fashion.
2 - 1. In Dress Responsibly, there is no foundational statement that would explain what factors drive the people to dress...
Research Papersari2151690 - Dec 14, 2020 / Holt - Dec 15, 2020
|Exercise Is The Fountain Of Health
2 - So what is the clearly set out thesis statement for this essay? What is the point of your introduction?...
Research PapersSar2178243 - Dec 13, 2020 / Holt - Dec 13, 2020
|Abstinence-Only vs. A Well-Rounded Sex Education: The Right to Knowledge
2 - Your thesis presentation is misleading. You open the essay with a reference to sex in general. However, your actual...
Research PapersSaraRasmusson93 - Dec 9, 2020 / Holt - Dec 10, 2020
|Fight Against Added Sugar
Research Paperscan2018543 - Dec 5, 2020 / Holt - Dec 5, 2020
|Are felons worth less to society
3 - @Holt Thank you! Very valuable feedback. This is the rough draft and your feedback will allow me to submit...
Research PapersGmonroe - Dec 3, 2020 / Gmonroe - Dec 4, 2020
|Theme: Health and Fitness
2 - Are you sure you are writing a research paper? I believe you misunderstood the question and thought you had...
Research PapersPhuong2211 - Dec 2, 2020 / Holt - Dec 3, 2020
|Research paper about Geoengineering! Blessing or Curse?
2 - The entry presentation of your paper is sensationalist in presentation. Since this is an academic paper, sensationalist claims, such...
Research PapersBetancourt - Nov 29, 2020 / Holt - Nov 29, 2020
|The cultural background of someone suffering from substance abuse affects how he or she will respond
2 - You have to reverse the opening paragraph. The opening sentence should start with, "The United States is a country...
Research PapersBCrehan87 - Nov 23, 2020 / Holt - Nov 23, 2020
|Research papers writing with topic "Peer pressure" (Introduction)
2 - Your introduction is not effective. You need to be able to first introduce the meaning of peer pressure to...
Research Papersdieulinh267 - Nov 7, 2020 / Holt - Nov 17, 2020
|Three areas of weakness in my paper - American Policing and Racism: Then and Now
2 - One area of weakness in this presentation would be the lack of sub-sections in the presentation. Since you are...
Research Papersoni4u2 - Nov 7, 2020 / Holt - Nov 8, 2020
|The First Punic War - Research Paper
2 - What exactly was the purpose of your research paper? Isn't there a way by which you could connect the...
Research Papersahartq - Nov 3, 2020 / Holt - Nov 3, 2020
|Research paper on water quality and types of water suppliers. Which is better for our health?
2 - The presentation feels like you are starting in the middle of the paper instead of at the beginning. Do...
Research Paperslourene13 - Oct 25, 2020 / Holt - Oct 25, 2020
|A New Era For e-Commerce - research paper
2 - Separate the introduction of Chris Walton. You have to first give his background, as a professional, what are his...
Research Paperstavogodoy - Oct 14, 2020 / Holt - Oct 15, 2020
|The Safety of Workers at Nuclear Power Plants
2 - The opening paragraph is a bit confusing to read. You should open that by focusing on the increasing demand...
Research Papersslande41 - Oct 14, 2020 / Holt - Oct 15, 2020
|Rough Draft on Climate Change - we have short time to react.
3 - You are making a hyperbolic claim in the first paragraph without first establishing the foundation for the claim. Where...
Research PapersKeeg - Oct 3, 2020 / Holt - Oct 4, 2020
|The Risk of the Younger Generation with Technology - Rough Draft for peer review
2 - You have provided a good introduction and thesis statement for your research paper. It has a clear thesis, proper...
Research Paperslluyis - Sep 23, 2020 / Holt - Sep 23, 2020
|Why now is the time for the U.S. to adopt universal health care legislation
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your feedback! I will make the suggested changes to the opening paragraph...
Research Papersmoncolj - Aug 30, 2020 / moncolj - Sep 5, 2020
|Is CBD Right for My Kid(s)
2 - You may want to consider creating a clearer thesis statement in the first paragraph. You are practically starting in...
Research PapersTuesdayW - Aug 29, 2020 / Holt - Aug 29, 2020
|Children In Third World Countries vs. Education
2 - The most common mistake in your presentation would be in your word presentations. Academic papers should never see the...
Research Papersjudyalvarez6 - Aug 18, 2020 / Holt - Aug 18, 2020
|Can Disney World Florida Protect Your Family and Remain "the happiest place on earth"?
3 - Although this essay seems to be in completed form already, there are 3 areas of weakness that can be...
Research PapersPeter1166 - Aug 6, 2020 / Holt - Aug 7, 2020
|Physical therapy can help enhance an individual's body, mobility, and health
3 - This does not sound like a properly researched and developed paper. It appears more to be like a series...
Research Papersdmaier - Jul 26, 2020 / Holt - Jul 26, 2020
|RESEARCH ESSAY (USING MAT TO TREAT OPIATE USE DISORDER)
3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback! I'm trying to see where I could possibly go with adding a personal...
Research Papersstevensoursjr - Jul 8, 2020 / stevensoursjr - Jul 9, 2020
|Restraints in coffee exporting
3 - I am not sure why you chose to use the word argue in reference to defining what restraint means....
Research PapersChung Tran - Jun 27, 2020 / Holt - Jun 27, 2020
|How is racism influenced by the nurture or nature theory?
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for spending time to review my work. It's really helpful for me to do...
Research Papersleuyen0805 - Jun 18, 2020 / leuyen0805 - Jun 19, 2020
|Police brutality and the effect of the black community
2 - Let's start with the basics. Your thesis statement is not clear. Your covered topics are too broad and are...
Research Papersravenwa1 - Jun 10, 2020 / Holt - Jun 10, 2020
|Negative consequences of global warming are being felt in the economy.
2 - The main problem that I see with this essay is that there is no proper discussion outline presented in...
Research Papersmulembodeno - Jun 1, 2020 / Holt - Jun 2, 2020
|Analyzing the Future of NCAA Athlete Compensation
2 - Good start. The analysis makes sense. It has a solid foundation in terms of hypothetical discussion and your factual...
Research Paperskaimurphy - May 23, 2020 / Holt - May 23, 2020
|The High Renaissance - Leonardo da Vinci´s Mona Lisa. (Rough Draft)
Research PapersKasya - May 22, 2020 / Kasya - May 22, 2020
|ENG102: Tik Tok and The Younger Generation
2 - The essay is actually presenting separate thesis statements in the first few paragraphs instead of presenting a clear series...
Research Papersdanubento - May 5, 2020 / Holt - May 6, 2020
|Transcending Home Video - Rough Draft ( RESEARCH ESSAY)
2 - In the first part, you need to revise the part about the career. YouTube is the channel where the...
Research Papersswifro - May 3, 2020 / Holt - May 3, 2020
|The Mind and Mental Health
3 - The first thing I noticed in this research paper is the use of personal pronouns. Since this is a...
Research PapersAkellar - May 1, 2020 / Holt - May 2, 2020
|Research Paper - Transhumanism: The Inevitable Singularity
2 - When you have a comprehensive works cited page, you have to make sure that every citation listed is actually...
Research PapersUSAFAZ - Apr 30, 2020 / Holt - Apr 30, 2020
|Veganism: Humanity's Ascension
3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice. I will definitely remove the personal references and focus the first two introductory...
Research Papersmichaeldax - Apr 18, 2020 / michaeldax - Apr 22, 2020
|Lifestyle Diseases: Shifting the Burden of Responsibility (Rough Draft)
Research Papershkhatri2 - Apr 16, 2020 / hkhatri2 - Apr 16, 2020
|COVID-19 and the impact it has on climate change (rough draft)
2 - While the essay you wrote is informative, it can also be considered confusing to read. The reason behind my...
Research Papersgfinke1019 - Apr 15, 2020 / Holt - Apr 15, 2020
|Essay on private schools vs public school- review
2 - The first sentence of this essay is not really making any point. Additionally, you address people as those having...
Research Paperssarahcasto - Apr 11, 2020 / Holt - Apr 12, 2020
|Research Paper on an effective method for treating child obesity
2 - The paper is overwhelmed with in-text citations without supporting explanations. Most of the citations are located at the end...
Research Papersnanz1984 - Apr 6, 2020 / Holt - Apr 6, 2020
|All Americans should be afforded the right to counsel
2 - Remove the reference to quoted information in the thesis paragraph. There is no need to quote information there yet...
Research PapersSnSSjS - Apr 5, 2020 / Holt - Apr 5, 2020
|Drug Addiction: Choice vs Disease
2 - The paper needs to lean towards a particular outcome. What exactly to you want to say with this paper?...
Research PapersLUC2145464 - Apr 3, 2020 / Holt - Apr 4, 2020
|The Wounded Knee Occupation: Reviving Culture and Reclaiming Lost Voices
2 - You may want to revise the essay by adding some content to it. Since not all the readers will...
Research Papersmichellewalker - Apr 1, 2020 / Holt - Apr 1, 2020
|The Art of Streaming - Research Paper - Intro, Conclusion and MLA Citations review
2 - The first part of the essay requires more proper in-text citation. You are referring to Flynn and others in...
Research Paperskatieschaaf - Mar 30, 2020 / Holt - Mar 31, 2020
|Mental Health Disorders and their Causes
3 - @Daniirish2804 OK, some grammar error: 1- forty six => forty-six It appears that you are missing a hyphen with...
Research PapersDaniirish2804 - Mar 29, 2020 / phong3baotap - Mar 30, 2020
|Taking a rest: Do you notice that mobile phone is killing you?
3 - Since this is a research paper, you have to avoid using a personal point of view in the presentation....
Research Papersdeerhunt - Mar 29, 2020 / Holt - Mar 29, 2020
|Resurrecting the Extinct, Detracting from Evolution
2 - What is the point of the discussion? You do not have a clear thesis statement at the start of...
Research Papersjoeypanz443 - Mar 26, 2020 / Holt - Mar 27, 2020
|Research Paper Draft Review on Dissection into the Life of the Intersex, (Hermaphrodite) Gender.
3 - I really appreciate your candor. I will revise my work to show more of my personal feeling on the...
Research Papersluvrite - Mar 24, 2020 / luvrite - Mar 24, 2020
|Write a proposal to raise students' awareness about corona virus outbreak.
Research Paperslittledinosaur - Feb 26, 2020 / littledinosaur - Feb 27, 2020
|Moderation – turning the page on health? - Rhetorical Analysis
2 - The analysis is strong. It offers a clear understanding of the article you had read. You point out several...
Research Paperskleosmom73 - Feb 23, 2020 / Holt - Feb 24, 2020
|Essay about the link between correctional healthcare & public health in the United States
2 - In the first paragraph, that is your thesis paragraph so you should not be using any quotations or references...
Research Paperswallaby1992 - Feb 17, 2020 / Holt - Feb 17, 2020
|Essay "Chronic Traumatic Encephalopathy and the Improved Safety in Football"
2 - Regarding the way that you wrote the essay, it is important that you focus the information on a singular...
Research Papersste2131604 - Feb 13, 2020 / Holt - Feb 13, 2020
|I need commentary. My essay is about the justification of college vs its alternatives.
3 - To provide a stronger foundation for your argument that college is not always the best option for students, you...
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