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Social Media's Impact on Mental Health Research Paper

2 - Writing the introduction of the research paper relies heavily on your opinion, point of view, and personal considerations. It...

Research Papershelenaperez27 - Mar 13, 2023 / Holt - Mar 14, 2023
ENG 102: Lesson 12: increased screen time and playing video games leads to violent behaviors

2 - Since this is a first person point of view essay, you should restate your thesis statement to...

Research PapersElizabeth812 - Mar 11, 2023 / Holt - Mar 12, 2023
Physical fitness and mental health.

2 - In - text citations are not properly referenced in this paper. While you are referencing other people and articles...

Research Papersazalieg - Feb 26, 2023 / Holt - Feb 27, 2023
Vaping as an alternative to traditional smoking

2 - The introduction is simple enough and creates an interest on the part of the reader to learn more about...

Research Paperspranavanil47 - Feb 17, 2023 / Holt - Feb 17, 2023
How Travel Nursing has changed Healthcare

2 - The first paragraph is an incomplete introduction as it does not present the thesis statement / purpose of...

Research PapersShannajones39 - Jan 1, 2023 / Holt - Jan 1, 2023
Role of a mother in our lives

2 - The first problem this presentation has is the writing format. It is too compressed on the page, making it...

Research Paperstabinda78 - Dec 29, 2022 / Holt - Dec 30, 2022
Essay about why Nuclear Power and why is Nuclear the Better Option?

2 - The writing comes across as very bad in sections where the writer does not use in-text citations to explain...

Research PapersIncognitouser - Nov 28, 2022 / Holt - Nov 28, 2022
Psychological Effects of Clothing & Confidence

2 - While the writer does provide detailed research reports and interpretations, what is missing from these information is the personal...

Research Papersvrodriguez0889 - Nov 17, 2022 / Holt - Nov 17, 2022
Are Parental relationships improved if fathers take time off work after the birth of a child?

2 - The concerns of women regarding dealing with problems after pregnancy are well documented. These are actually publicly discussed, rehashed,...

Research Papersarawondar - Nov 8, 2022 / Holt - Nov 8, 2022
Combatting Cyberbullying, Depression, and Suicides - English 102 Lesson 11 Essay

2 - The first paragraph has too many rhetorical questions that lead to a misleading thesis statement. State facts rather than...

Research PapersBradleyQuinn17 - Nov 6, 2022 / Holt - Nov 6, 2022
Does Mindfulness-based Mediation Ease Anxiety Symptoms?

2 - As a reader, I would need the writer to clarify the difference between basic meditation and mindful meditation. Are...

Research Paperspsteventurner - Nov 5, 2022 / Holt - Nov 6, 2022
Binge Drinking: Is It Really Worth It?

2 - There is a big difference between alcohol and an alcoholic beverage. The writer should make sure to use terms...

Research Paperskellysw4 - Nov 4, 2022 / Holt - Nov 5, 2022
Research Paper Rough Draft - Culpable Mentality

2 - The premise of the essay is lacking in terms of the background of culpable mentality. One can assume that...

Research PapersRChughes0408 - Nov 4, 2022 / Holt - Nov 5, 2022
Essay about Deep Learning for Grad School Application

2 - There seems to be 2 thesis statement paragraphs in this essay when only one is needed. The first paragraph...

Research Papershoudini2518 - Oct 8, 2022 / Holt - Oct 9, 2022
ENG102 draft review College students & insomnia

2 - The thesis statement in the first paragraph could be made clearer. There are 2 separate topics presented there; the...

Research Papersgloriaa - Oct 1, 2022 / Holt - Oct 2, 2022
Research Proposal for Sociology Master Degree in Japan University

3 - @Holt Thanks for your suggestion, it's really helpful to me to notice some critical point....

Research Papersjane_g - Aug 27, 2022 / jane_g - Aug 28, 2022
Research Essay (Biometric Security issues and lack of government oversight)

2 - This is a research paper that is to be framed within a general reference point of view. The use...

Research Papersjos2248647 - Aug 13, 2022 / Holt - Aug 14, 2022
Fighting against the Organ Shortage. (Peer review)

2 - No need for the parenthesis over the n. A word that starts with a vowel uses an indefinite...

Research PapersCameron_rae97 - Jul 23, 2022 / Holt - Jul 23, 2022
Research paper "Without a Father"

2 - Do not use the definition by the author to open this opinion paper. It is important that the professor...

Research Papersnesander - Jul 18, 2022 / Holt - Jul 18, 2022
The Use of Nuclear Energy to Supplement Renewable Energy Sources (for peer review/edit)

2 - Rework the opening statement. It should center on the need for nuclear energy as a back up system to...

Research Paperstannsmart - Jul 16, 2022 / Holt - Jul 17, 2022
Draft Peer Review "Students need a voice"

2 - Proofread the content of the essay. There is no "mist amendment". Even as a draft the essay must contain...

Research Paperscyber serpent - Jul 9, 2022 / Holt - Jul 10, 2022
Impact of Climate Change and Deforestation within ecosystems Research

2 - There should be a narrowed down discussion focus in the paper. The writer is over-reaching by trying to cover...

Research PapersNsjordan25 - Jul 2, 2022 / Holt - Jul 3, 2022
Education and the Correlation to the Crime Rate

2 - The writer has clearly given a lot of thought to the content of this essay and has done his...

Research Paperskashcroft05 - May 16, 2022 / Holt - May 17, 2022
Implications of employee diversity on American organizations' productivity

2 - For the introduction, the author should reverse the presentation by making the current second paragraph first, and the current...

Research Papersyuehua - May 10, 2022 / Holt - May 11, 2022
Cerebral Palsy in infants

2 - The work has too many in-text citations from the very beginning. The writer relies heavily on the other person...

Research PapersAlmashi - Apr 18, 2022 / Holt - Apr 19, 2022
Importance of Universal Health (UHC) Coverage in the US and Modern World

2 - The introduction is less of an original thesis presentation as it is composed mostly of cited material from the...

Research PapersCSheppard13 - Apr 16, 2022 / Holt - Apr 17, 2022
Cold Cookies and Culturalism: AP Research paper on cultural upbringing and biology

2 - Ease the reader into the sugar and temperature focus. Use cultural and food history elements to accomplish there entry...

Research Paperssiyeonish - Apr 16, 2022 / Holt - Apr 16, 2022
Endocrine Disruptors and Micro Plastics: Or How I Learned To Love The Homosexual Frogs

3 - @Holt Thank you very much for the input! I definitely felt like i had built towards a bit Doom'y...

Research Papersjaubuchon28 - Mar 25, 2022 / jaubuchon28 - Mar 25, 2022
New Hope for Depression Sufferers: a rough draft

2 - The first problem that this essay has is related to the number of in-text citations that each paragraph contains....

Research Papersnimna - Mar 24, 2022 / Holt - Mar 25, 2022
The Link Between ADHD and Eating Disorders: A rough draft

2 - The research will benefit from around 3 more paragraphs placed at the start of the essay. The writer should...

Research Papersbromero1987 - Mar 4, 2022 / Holt - Mar 5, 2022
Don't Throw That Away - Recycle It! - Draft Research Paper

2 - This is more of a sub topic title than a subject sentence in this case. Have you considered...

Research PapersRaiderRob - Feb 19, 2022 / Holt - Feb 20, 2022
Does getting a college degree guarantee you will have the career you love?

3 - Never. I got a degree in English language and Literature and work in a completely different field. I like...

Research Papersale2050315 - Feb 9, 2022 / LLIMITT - Feb 16, 2022
Because a patient's life can be more unpleasant than death, they should have a right to choose

3 - Personally, I opt for euthanasia and support your point of view, but you have to find a few more...

Research PapersCsbryant11 - Feb 13, 2022 / LLIMITT - Feb 14, 2022
Mental Health and the Preemie Parent

2 - Good work on the creation of the discussion premise. The backgrounder and topic statements are quite solid and clearly...

Research PapersSharonH - Jan 8, 2022 / Holt - Jan 8, 2022
Social Media Affect on Mental Health

2 - Focus the research on data relating only to teen use of social media and and the resulting effects on...

Research Papersellakay - Dec 24, 2021 / Holt - Dec 25, 2021
The Constitutionality of Capital Punishment - research paper

2 - Since the first paragraph is nothing but a series of citations from other sources that do not directly relate...

Research PapersTyNeadik - Dec 23, 2021 / Holt - Dec 23, 2021
Wage Gap Among Black Women in America

2 - Make sure to keep the focus on the African American woman. This reference suddenly points to a generic...

Research PapersNa3 - Dec 20, 2021 / Holt - Dec 20, 2021
Conditions of Mental Illness: How Capitalism is Responsible for the Mental Health Crisis

2 - You are still trying to establish your thesis statement. As such, a general discussion of the cost of...

Research PapersBuggy - Dec 18, 2021 / Holt - Dec 18, 2021
Exploring options for holding corporations accountable - DuPont and PFOA contamination

2 - The hook will be more effective if told through a narration of historical events, without any reference citations. That...

Research Paperssunnyhart - Dec 18, 2021 / Holt - Dec 18, 2021
Benefits of Legalizing Marijuana in Arizona

3 - Marijuana is a commonly used and widely distributed substance in the United States....

Research Papersstewartray - Dec 10, 2021 / stewartray - Dec 14, 2021
Research Paper on Universal Healthcare. Need three indications of a weakness within essay.

2 - Offer a reason for this reasoning presentation. Not everyone will agree with you regarding the connection of personal...

Research Papersjcannon22 - Dec 13, 2021 / Holt - Dec 13, 2021
Research paper on why serial killers choose to commit multiple murders

2 - The opening statement lacks impact. Try to come up with a more interesting hook for your presentation. For impact,...

Research Paperselilucero13 - Nov 27, 2021 / Holt - Nov 28, 2021
Why are vaccines important?

2 - Kindly review your in-text citations. You have not seperated it from the actual text, making the paragraphs highly confusing...

Research Paperslyssamariet - Nov 14, 2021 / Holt - Nov 15, 2021
Rough draft peer review on why play is important for children

2 - The opening statement and the introduction were placed in reverse in the presentation. The second paragraph makes for an...

Research Paperstabithasenff123 - Nov 12, 2021 / Holt - Nov 13, 2021
Grammar/Writing Techniques Cultural Competence in Healthcare as it Relates to the LGBTQ+ Community

NEW - Cultural Competence in Healthcare as it Relates to the LGBT Community For editing, content, and formatting needs please...

Research Papersjengg90301 - Nov 7, 2021 / — -
The effect of college debt on the future life choices of students

2 - The paper definitely needs professional editing and proof-reading. Most paragraphs require a content clean-up that is not covered by...

Research PapersMckennarichards - Oct 13, 2021 / Holt - Oct 13, 2021
Essay - peer review America Under Siege: Combatting the Opioid Epidemic

2 - Try to establish how the "under siege" aspect happened. Why is this the perception? What does your paper...

Research Papersmikecaz - Sep 18, 2021 / Holt - Sep 19, 2021
Navy SEAL Impact Research Paper

2 - You can do away with this portion. It only repeats the last half of the introduction. Find another...

Research Paperscasenstowe - Sep 17, 2021 / Holt - Sep 18, 2021
Does Meat cause cancer, how and why? What can be done to eat meat safely?

2 - It appears the writer forgot to upload the complete research paper. The discussion is presented but there is no...

Research Papersmedicmike83 - Aug 11, 2021 / Holt - Aug 12, 2021
United States Decrease in Population Growth

2 - The essay does not have a proper topic introduction and thesis statement. The first paragraph is directly informative and...

Research Paperspeanut04 - Aug 8, 2021 / Holt - Aug 10, 2021
The Effects of Physical Activity on Mental Health in Adolescents

2 - The first paragraph needs to clarify where the civil unrest in taking place and how that relates to mental...

Research Papersmmoore598 - Jul 30, 2021 / Holt - Jul 31, 2021
Universal Background Checks

2 - I am not sure if it will be acceptable to you professor to have you writing this paper from...

Research Papersmhallums02 - Jun 21, 2021 / Holt - Jun 22, 2021
Research Essay advising individuals on how to help their loved ones to stop smoking - review

2 - Do not open with information sources. she prompt summary does not negate the need for a proper topic introduction...

Research PapersJordania - Jun 16, 2021 / Holt - Jun 17, 2021
Positive work environment and how it influences your work result

2 - Since this is your thesis statement, you cannot use an in-text citation for it. Rather, it would be...

Research Papersasha1310 - Jun 2, 2021 / Holt - Jun 2, 2021
Single-payer Healthcare System and Why it should be Implemented in the U.S

2 - The second sentence of the first paragraph is confusing to read. It feels like itis overloaded with information, which...

Research PapersAshUndead - May 23, 2021 / Holt - May 24, 2021
Benefits of Early Childhood Education. Essay for ENG 102 Rio Salado

2 - What is the discussion focus of this essay ? There is a lack of concerning topics at the start...

Research PapersTiffanylane7 - May 16, 2021 / Holt - May 16, 2021
A Look at Animal Agriculture from an Environmental Perspective

2 - Define and differentiate. These 2 are usually seen as connected but yeseparate environmental topics. Educate the people who...

Research Papersfruitfulfaerie - May 9, 2021 / Holt - May 9, 2021
Reducing Social Determinants of Health on the Navajo Nation

2 - Consider providing a historical perspective of how the Navajo healthcare system came to be at the start of the...

Research Papersjahasteen - May 1, 2021 / Holt - May 2, 2021
Looking for Review of My Essay on Maker Communities and Technology

2 - Please provide more clarity in this particular sentence. The sentence structure is incorrect and therefore does not make...

Research Papersmmvinson - Apr 29, 2021 / Holt - Apr 30, 2021
How can military mental health services improve?

2 - Move the citation that is at the very opening of this essay to the second paragraph. It is never...

Research Papersmarqvivi - Apr 29, 2021 / Holt - Apr 29, 2021

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