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|The Risk of the Younger Generation with Technology - Rough Draft for peer review
2 - You have provided a good introduction and thesis statement for your research paper. It has a clear thesis, proper...
Research Paperslluyis - Sep 23, 2020 / Holt - Sep 23, 2020
|Why now is the time for the U.S. to adopt universal health care legislation
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your feedback! I will make the suggested changes to the opening paragraph...
Research Papersmoncolj - Aug 30, 2020 / moncolj - Sep 5, 2020
|Is CBD Right for My Kid(s)
2 - You may want to consider creating a clearer thesis statement in the first paragraph. You are practically starting in...
Research PapersTuesdayW - Aug 29, 2020 / Holt - Aug 29, 2020
|Children In Third World Countries vs. Education
2 - The most common mistake in your presentation would be in your word presentations. Academic papers should never see the...
Research Papersjudyalvarez6 - Aug 18, 2020 / Holt - Aug 18, 2020
|Can Disney World Florida Protect Your Family and Remain "the happiest place on earth"?
3 - Although this essay seems to be in completed form already, there are 3 areas of weakness that can be...
Research PapersPeter1166 - Aug 6, 2020 / Holt - Aug 7, 2020
|Physical therapy can help enhance an individual's body, mobility, and health
3 - This does not sound like a properly researched and developed paper. It appears more to be like a series...
Research Papersdmaier - Jul 26, 2020 / Holt - Jul 26, 2020
|RESEARCH ESSAY (USING MAT TO TREAT OPIATE USE DISORDER)
3 - @Holt Thank you for your feedback! I'm trying to see where I could possibly go with adding a personal...
Research Papersstevensoursjr - Jul 8, 2020 / stevensoursjr - Jul 9, 2020
|Restraints in coffee exporting
3 - I am not sure why you chose to use the word argue in reference to defining what restraint means....
Research PapersChung Tran - Jun 27, 2020 / Holt - Jun 27, 2020
|How is racism influenced by the nurture or nature theory?
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for spending time to review my work. It's really helpful for me to do...
Research Papersleuyen0805 - Jun 18, 2020 / leuyen0805 - Jun 19, 2020
|Police brutality and the effect of the black community
2 - Let's start with the basics. Your thesis statement is not clear. Your covered topics are too broad and are...
Research Papersravenwa1 - Jun 10, 2020 / Holt - Jun 10, 2020
|Negative consequences of global warming are being felt in the economy.
2 - The main problem that I see with this essay is that there is no proper discussion outline presented in...
Research Papersmulembodeno - Jun 1, 2020 / Holt - Jun 2, 2020
|Analyzing the Future of NCAA Athlete Compensation
2 - Good start. The analysis makes sense. It has a solid foundation in terms of hypothetical discussion and your factual...
Research Paperskaimurphy - May 23, 2020 / Holt - May 23, 2020
|The High Renaissance - Leonardo da Vinci´s Mona Lisa. (Rough Draft)
Research PapersKasya - May 22, 2020 / Kasya - May 22, 2020
|ENG102: Tik Tok and The Younger Generation
2 - The essay is actually presenting separate thesis statements in the first few paragraphs instead of presenting a clear series...
Research Papersdanubento - May 5, 2020 / Holt - May 6, 2020
|Transcending Home Video - Rough Draft ( RESEARCH ESSAY)
2 - In the first part, you need to revise the part about the career. YouTube is the channel where the...
Research Papersswifro - May 3, 2020 / Holt - May 3, 2020
|The Mind and Mental Health
3 - The first thing I noticed in this research paper is the use of personal pronouns. Since this is a...
Research PapersAkellar - May 1, 2020 / Holt - May 2, 2020
|Research Paper - Transhumanism: The Inevitable Singularity
2 - When you have a comprehensive works cited page, you have to make sure that every citation listed is actually...
Research PapersUSAFAZ - Apr 30, 2020 / Holt - Apr 30, 2020
|Veganism: Humanity's Ascension
3 - @Holt Thank you for your advice. I will definitely remove the personal references and focus the first two introductory...
Research Papersmichaeldax - Apr 18, 2020 / michaeldax - Apr 22, 2020
|Lifestyle Diseases: Shifting the Burden of Responsibility (Rough Draft)
Research Papershkhatri2 - Apr 16, 2020 / hkhatri2 - Apr 16, 2020
|COVID-19 and the impact it has on climate change (rough draft)
2 - While the essay you wrote is informative, it can also be considered confusing to read. The reason behind my...
Research Papersgfinke1019 - Apr 15, 2020 / Holt - Apr 15, 2020
|Essay on private schools vs public school- review
2 - The first sentence of this essay is not really making any point. Additionally, you address people as those having...
Research Paperssarahcasto - Apr 11, 2020 / Holt - Apr 12, 2020
|Research Paper on an effective method for treating child obesity
2 - The paper is overwhelmed with in-text citations without supporting explanations. Most of the citations are located at the end...
Research Papersnanz1984 - Apr 6, 2020 / Holt - Apr 6, 2020
|All Americans should be afforded the right to counsel
2 - Remove the reference to quoted information in the thesis paragraph. There is no need to quote information there yet...
Research PapersSnSSjS - Apr 5, 2020 / Holt - Apr 5, 2020
|Drug Addiction: Choice vs Disease
2 - The paper needs to lean towards a particular outcome. What exactly to you want to say with this paper?...
Research PapersLUC2145464 - Apr 3, 2020 / Holt - Apr 4, 2020
|The Wounded Knee Occupation: Reviving Culture and Reclaiming Lost Voices
2 - You may want to revise the essay by adding some content to it. Since not all the readers will...
Research Papersmichellewalker - Apr 1, 2020 / Holt - Apr 1, 2020
|The Art of Streaming - Research Paper - Intro, Conclusion and MLA Citations review
2 - The first part of the essay requires more proper in-text citation. You are referring to Flynn and others in...
Research Paperskatieschaaf - Mar 30, 2020 / Holt - Mar 31, 2020
|Mental Health Disorders and their Causes
3 - @Daniirish2804 OK, some grammar error: 1- forty six => forty-six It appears that you are missing a hyphen with...
Research PapersDaniirish2804 - Mar 29, 2020 / phong3baotap - Mar 30, 2020
|Taking a rest: Do you notice that mobile phone is killing you?
3 - Since this is a research paper, you have to avoid using a personal point of view in the presentation....
Research Papersdeerhunt - Mar 29, 2020 / Holt - Mar 29, 2020
|Resurrecting the Extinct, Detracting from Evolution
2 - What is the point of the discussion? You do not have a clear thesis statement at the start of...
Research Papersjoeypanz443 - Mar 26, 2020 / Holt - Mar 27, 2020
|Research Paper Draft Review on Dissection into the Life of the Intersex, (Hermaphrodite) Gender.
3 - I really appreciate your candor. I will revise my work to show more of my personal feeling on the...
Research Papersluvrite - Mar 24, 2020 / luvrite - Mar 24, 2020
|Write a proposal to raise students' awareness about corona virus outbreak.
Research Paperslittledinosaur - Feb 26, 2020 / littledinosaur - Feb 27, 2020
|Moderation – turning the page on health? - Rhetorical Analysis
2 - The analysis is strong. It offers a clear understanding of the article you had read. You point out several...
Research Paperskleosmom73 - Feb 23, 2020 / Holt - Feb 24, 2020
|Essay about the link between correctional healthcare & public health in the United States
2 - In the first paragraph, that is your thesis paragraph so you should not be using any quotations or references...
Research Paperswallaby1992 - Feb 17, 2020 / Holt - Feb 17, 2020
|Essay "Chronic Traumatic Encephalopathy and the Improved Safety in Football"
2 - Regarding the way that you wrote the essay, it is important that you focus the information on a singular...
Research Papersste2131604 - Feb 13, 2020 / Holt - Feb 13, 2020
|I need commentary. My essay is about the justification of college vs its alternatives.
3 - To provide a stronger foundation for your argument that college is not always the best option for students, you...
Research Paperssch212 - Feb 9, 2020 / Holt - Feb 10, 2020
|Peer Review Research paper titled: When are people more likely to dream?
2 - The first weakness that I see in this essay is the age of the literature being used. In order...
Research Paperstatalynese24 - Feb 3, 2020 / Holt - Feb 4, 2020
|Cashew apple juice concentrate quality. OUTLINE OF PROPOSED RESEARCH TOPIC AND OBJECTIVES
Research PapersUromi - Jan 29, 2020 / Uromi - Jan 29, 2020
|Peer review needed - Research title "The Role of Developmental Psychology on Children's Personality"
Research Papersrusulalnuaimi - Jan 26, 2020 / Holt - Jan 26, 2020
|Solitary Confinement Essay
2 - This presentation is trying to cover too much information regarding solitary confinement. There is no clearly presented motivation for...
Research Papersltaylor - Jan 25, 2020 / Holt - Jan 25, 2020
|Healthcare costs in America - Peer Review research rough draft.
2 - Amy, the first paragraph should work as a summary of the content of the research/article you are reviewing. The...
Research Papersamc518 - Jan 12, 2020 / Holt - Jan 12, 2020
|"Healing from the Outside In: Veterans Helping Veterans in Nature" Thoughts appreciated
2 - The first 2 paragraphs should be combined to form the proper thesis statement for the research paper. You should...
Research Papersbcdeford83 - Jan 4, 2020 / Holt - Jan 11, 2020
|Gun Control Effectiveness - English 102 Paper. Look over sentence structure, organization and thesis
2 - Sarah, the essay does not have a proper thesis. The thesis needs to have a basis in the direction...
Research Paperssferencz - Dec 28, 2019 / Holt - Jan 10, 2020
|The importance of gun control. Answer these three questions (educational studies)
2 - @Jibarra Hello. Thanks for approaching the forum. I hope this feedback somehow helps you. Try to be more...
Research PapersJibarra - Dec 22, 2019 / Maria - Jan 2, 2020
|Point out three things I did well (Amazons effect on the business world)
2 - @Nix111 Hello. Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback gives you clarity on what you can do...
Research PapersNix111 - Dec 22, 2019 / Maria - Jan 2, 2020
|This is my ENG 102 research essay about Kickboxing
2 - @Joe1rou Hello. Welcome to the forum! Here is my feedback on your writing. When you're trying to use...
Research PapersJoe1rou - Dec 28, 2019 / Maria - Dec 28, 2019
|Why You Shouldn't Have An Epidural During Childbirth
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Research PapersDestinyNauticaT - Dec 11, 2019 / Maria - Dec 13, 2019
|Improving Elderly Life Quality with Intergenerational Activities
2 - Hi Would like to share some insights on your paper. Firstly you conveyed your writing clearly. What...
Research Paperscblack79 - Dec 1, 2019 / XPROFF - Dec 1, 2019
|Importance of Mothers and Fathers and the Importance of Marriage-ENG102 Rio Salado Stanley M.
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Research Papersstandrea425 - Nov 24, 2019 / Maria - Nov 26, 2019
|"The Culture" Research essay of police subculture
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Research Papersjoi2018 - Nov 24, 2019 / Maria - Nov 25, 2019
|Dog Breeds and their Aggression; A Nationwide problem with animal welfare and public health
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Research Papersrya2160098 - Nov 20, 2019 / Maria - Nov 22, 2019
|Thesis: Sobriety and resources for Pima Woman in Salt River Pima Maricopa Indian Community.
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Research PapersStepp29 - Nov 18, 2019 / Maria - Nov 19, 2019
|Social Media correlation with Anxiety and Depression
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Research Paperskcohen - Nov 3, 2019 / Maria - Nov 16, 2019
|Economical and Environmental Effects of Electric Cars
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Research PapersMAT2162764 - Nov 15, 2019 / Maria - Nov 16, 2019
|The Impacts of Science Fiction on Technology
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Research PapersShiva_kh - Nov 11, 2019 / Maria - Nov 13, 2019
|Research essay on the topic of The Salem Witch Trials
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Research Papershodaym89 - Nov 7, 2019 / Maria - Nov 9, 2019
|Research writing assignment on influence of family and friends on teenagers
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Research Papersngochong0258 - Nov 6, 2019 / Maria - Nov 9, 2019
|Essay about the pro and cons of gun control
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Research Paperssherflohr - Nov 6, 2019 / Maria - Nov 9, 2019
|Fluidity help on Coffee research paper
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Research Papersjshepherd09 - Nov 5, 2019 / Maria - Nov 7, 2019
|The realities of domestic violence research essay
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Research PapersMikkan - Nov 5, 2019 / Maria - Nov 7, 2019
|Should children attend preschool?
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Research PapersALI2162205 - Oct 13, 2019 / Maria - Oct 18, 2019
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