|Home / Research Papers [1,101] - page 1 of 19|
|The Abstract of the research of the route direction
2 - I would suggest that you try to use formal language to help your essay become more structured. When you're...
Research Paperswashiguanyu - Apr 23, 2019 / Maria - Apr 23, 2019
|English 102 - Mobile IV Therapy: AZ IV Medics
2 - A couple of mistakes that I had noticed sporadically scattered throughout the essay: 1. Misuse of capitalization 2. Lengthy...
Research Papersmheistan - Apr 21, 2019 / Maria - Apr 21, 2019
|CBD: Better Than Prescripition Drugs
2 - Let's go through the technicalities. I suggest that you find a better transition word when you move from one...
Research Papersjazfox - Apr 5, 2019 / Maria - Apr 5, 2019
|Research Paper/Persuasive Essay on "The Many Sides of Veganism"
3 - Thank you for your feedback. I think it is very constructive and will help me to move forward in...
Research Papersshidagiggles - Apr 1, 2019 / shidagiggles - Apr 2, 2019
|Social media's negative affects on society
2 - There are a couple of things that I suggest you look into. On a technical level, I would look...
Research PapersHmcpherson5 - Mar 27, 2019 / Maria - Mar 27, 2019
|Research Essay Draft Titled "Protecting the Public Interest on Social Media Platforms"
Research PapersColinLooper - Mar 26, 2019 / ridhoswasta - Mar 27, 2019
|Is Medical radiation safe?
2 - Bframirez, On a technical level, I suggest that you review the usage of punctuation. There were a few sentences...
Research Papersbframirez91 - Mar 24, 2019 / Maria - Mar 24, 2019
|Mental Illnesses and The Causes
2 - Tyson, While your essay is sufficient in terms of expounding details, you should be wary of structuring your...
Research PapersWildmanty - Mar 23, 2019 / Maria - Mar 23, 2019
|Barriers of Discrimination for the Transgender and Gender Non-Conforming Community
Research Papershraye313 - Feb 16, 2019 / Holt - Feb 17, 2019
|Video Games And Violence - Research Paper : Eng 102
2 - Sarah, for starters, the thesis statement of your essay is not clear. It lacks a connected form of discussion...
Research Paperssarahrubin89 - Feb 2, 2019 / Holt - Feb 3, 2019
|Veterinary Technician Shortage: Do I stay or do I go?
2 - The immediate problem that can be seen in this research paper is the lack of in-text citations and proper...
Research Paperszuki2004 - Jan 31, 2019 / Holt - Feb 1, 2019
|Research Paper for ENG 102 on the effects of divorce on children
2 - Kelly, you must complete your reference to a thesis statement in your opening paragraph. That cannot be left for...
Research Paperskkriegel - Jan 2, 2019 / Holt - Jan 4, 2019
|Why Should Employers be Required to Provide Rest and Meal Breaks?
2 - Alicia, your essay has too much theoretical presentation and cited paraphrasing but not enough factual data presented. Convincing any...
Research Papersasheren - Dec 18, 2018 / Holt - Dec 18, 2018
|Mandatory Health or Individual Rights: Compulsory Vaccination in Society
2 - Jil,, I think that you can still clarify what the thesis statement of your essay is. Will this essay...
Research PapersJillith - Dec 15, 2018 / Holt - Dec 16, 2018
|SHORT REPORT ABOUT INTERIOR DESIGN
2 - 1. I believe that in the first sentence you skipped over the word room and said having a private...
Research PapersStevenTran - Nov 18, 2018 / GiuliVal - Nov 30, 2018
|Analysis of the Relationship between Education and Poverty
2 - @Otsuki Your wuoted information regarding the poverty rate in Japan is null and void for the discussion. The information...
Research PapersOtsuki - Nov 28, 2018 / Holt - Nov 29, 2018
|Border Security: The Border wall we Would Build, the wall that Would Collapse (Research Paper)
2 - Hello, there are some mistakes In the United States unfold in on 3.5 million immigrants where were estimated allowing...
Research PapersKimberly3350 - Nov 12, 2018 / nhancau12345 - Nov 24, 2018
|The effect of Physical Activity on individuals
2 - Melanie, you need to work up the first paragraph. You can't start it with "January first comes around and...
Research Papersmmuntean - Nov 14, 2018 / Holt - Nov 15, 2018
|Homelessness in America and potential Solutions
2 - Steven, I feel like the information that you have presented is incomplete. While you offer insights into some programs...
Research Paperssgconatser009 - Nov 5, 2018 / Holt - Nov 6, 2018
|The Rise of Obesity in Our Young Children - Research essay assistance.
2 - Michael, your essay is choppy in presentation. You need to add transition sentences and transition paragraphs between topic discussions...
Research Papersmmonaghan09 - Nov 4, 2018 / Holt - Nov 4, 2018
|The Dangers of Geoengineering research paper
2 - Hi Darianne. I believe that you have written a solid essay that requires only a few tweaks and some...
Research PapersDwight86 - Nov 1, 2018 / Holt - Nov 2, 2018
|Know When to Stop Before You Start The Gambling Addiction
3 - Thank you for the assistance, My research paper is to be in MLA style. I will continue to work...
Research Papersspelkey - Oct 30, 2018 / spelkey - Nov 1, 2018
|THE FINAL STRAW - research paper (advocate role)
2 - ... focused on the now, is present a better word choice? ... paying little mind to the planet...
Research Papersmarbda22 - Oct 13, 2018 / daniel6shin - Oct 18, 2018
|Controlling Safety Risk - ESSAY
2 - Jared, save for a part in the essay where you indicated "I believe..." the overall essay is an excellent...
Research Papersjmvaught - Oct 1, 2018 / Holt - Oct 1, 2018
|Child Abuse and the Need for Social Change - Request
2 - Marcus, the essay is not going to be well received by your teacher in my opinion. That is because...
Research PapersMarcush287 - Sep 30, 2018 / Holt - Oct 1, 2018
|Is the Brain a Product of Consciousness? - comment on 3 major weaknesses in paper
2 - @Razumikhin2018 "When different states of consciousness are experience" - Grammatical error " He identifies as a" ??, I believe...
Research PapersRazumikhin2018 - Sep 16, 2018 / Hetav Pandya - Sep 28, 2018
|Vaccinations play an extremely important role in keeping people healthy - research paper
Research PapersKingtustin - Sep 17, 2018 / Kingtustin - Sep 22, 2018
|Being able to design your baby completely. Designer Babies Research Paper
NEW - Jesus Soto Enriquez Professor James Palazzolo English 102 9 September 2018 Designer Babies Imagine being able to design your...
Research PapersJesusSoto - Sep 10, 2018 / — -
|Pesticide contaminated foods - Research Paper
2 - Deborah, paragraph number 3 is not working well in combination with the first 2 paragraphs that you wrote. If...
Research PapersSaintcyr1 - Sep 8, 2018 / Holt - Sep 9, 2018
|Early Intervention for Children dealing with abnormal Anxiety is an effective Treatment
2 - Deanna, you may want to revise the opening paragraph. As a thesis statement, you are not advised to immediately...
Research Papersdgb621 - Aug 30, 2018 / Holt - Sep 1, 2018
|A university education makes people more moral, intellectual or rational. Agree or disagree. Reasons
Research PapersTracytrinh1998 - Aug 22, 2018 / Tracytrinh1998 - Aug 23, 2018
|Researching expanding of life expectancy - paper
3 - In general, your grammar is good, your supporting points is good too, But In my opinion, I think you...
Research Papersjerryhoang1991 - Aug 20, 2018 / Tracytrinh1998 - Aug 22, 2018
|This is what happens when you over estimate your time constraints - ENG101 Research Paper Draft
2 - Hi Martin. Don't be so hard on yourself. You worked hard on this paper, no matter how it turned...
Research Papersak101 - Aug 12, 2018 / Holt - Aug 13, 2018
|Putting A Stop to Gun Violence in Our Schools
Research PapersJK2010 - Aug 11, 2018 / Holt - Aug 12, 2018
|Bipolar disorder assistance. Research Paper for Rio Salado ENG102
2 - Thomas, excellent presentation. I was enlightened and truly informed about how bipolar men should take responsibility not only for...
Research PapersTommydeck1988 - Jul 16, 2018 / Holt - Jul 17, 2018
|Insomnia: It's Effect on the Quality of Life
2 - Rubi, there are several instances of redundancies in this research paper. For example, you used the same definition of...
Research Papersrubisoto92 - Jul 15, 2018 / Holt - Jul 16, 2018
|Persuasive Research Paper on utilizing GMOs
2 - Rachel, your opening anecdote is nice but not really informative. It would be an improvement in your presentation if...
Research Papersrachhcavaletto - Jul 15, 2018 / Holt - Jul 16, 2018
|Overexposure. Research Paper on Teens and Social Media
2 - Kerinda, you can better balance the information in your research paper if you revise it to have a more...
Research Papersdbacksbabe25 - Jul 15, 2018 / Holt - Jul 15, 2018
|Fighting Physical and Mental Illness with Yoga
2 - Nocholas, it would be better for your essay if you start it from the very start with a reference...
Research Papersnickliaci1 - Jul 14, 2018 / Holt - Jul 15, 2018
|Persuasive Essay On Violent Video Games
3 - Thank you for your feedback. I was thinking my essay was missing something just could not figure out what...
Research Papersjsmith0513 - Jul 13, 2018 / jsmith0513 - Jul 15, 2018
|Skins of Social Media - Paper on social media addiction
3 - Vijaya, there are simply too many missing aspects in this paper for it to be considered a completely developed...
Research Papersvbayana - Jul 7, 2018 / Holt - Jul 8, 2018
|The Stigma of Drug Abuse- Course research essay
2 - Simone, this is a very well researched paper that is only weakened by its reliance on too many in-text...
Research Paperssimone47 - Jun 30, 2018 / Holt - Jul 1, 2018
|Advantages of Electric Vehicles - English 102 class
2 - Brian, why do you keep saying "reviled" which means to criticize in an abusive or angrily insulting manner? I...
Research Papersbbrinkley - Jun 28, 2018 / Holt - Jun 29, 2018
|Maslow's Hierarchy of Needs: Applicable in to education at all levels
2 - Dhonsjurae , I find this essay to be highly informative and contemplative in content. The reader is definitely left...
Research PapersDhonsjurae - Jun 21, 2018 / Holt - Jun 22, 2018
|Does the Ketogenic diet decrease the risks associated with getting a cardiovascular disease
NEW - Effects of Ketogenic Diets on Cardiovascular Risk Factors My essay is a research paper discussing how the ketogenic...
Research Papersgaruda0214 - Jun 17, 2018 / — -
|Traffic jam elimination -high rise multi storey bus with moving 'clamping' (or anchor) for stability
2 - Arafat, what exactly is the point of this writing? There is no proper thesis statement, there is no clear...
Research Paperslast invention - Jun 11, 2018 / Holt - Jun 12, 2018
|Electrocardiographic Criteria vs Anatomic Criteria In LVH
2 - Tyler. the first sentence in the first paragraph is superfluous. The statement does not connect directly with the chosen...
Research Paperstylerdoak04 - Apr 29, 2018 / Holt - Apr 30, 2018
|"What do we know about the immune system?" Lesson 11 draft
2 - Marnie, this essay is very disorganized in presentation. You do not have a clear thesis statement, you are presenting...
Research PapersMarnie - Apr 28, 2018 / Holt - Apr 29, 2018
|St. John's Wort's Effectiveness in Treating Postpartum Depression
3 - Lisa, there are several elements that can be incorporated into this version of the essay to make it more...
Research Paperslshamroukh79 - Apr 28, 2018 / Holt - Apr 29, 2018
|Teachers Being Armed in School
3 - @eliassasha98 I agree with the previous poster that you should perhaps offer a counterpoint in favor of teachers carrying...
Research Paperseliassasha98 - Apr 15, 2018 / rmueller - Apr 21, 2018
|Peer review needed on the vital roles midwives play in today's society
2 - Lauren, this is a pretty good draft. I would have liked to have read more discussion on a comparative...
Research Paperslegelin90 - Apr 14, 2018 / Holt - Apr 15, 2018
|Women in Law Enforcement- research paper for ENG102
2 - Maquel, in order to create a more authoritative stance on the role of women in the police force, you...
Research Papersmaquelpaterno - Apr 13, 2018 / Holt - Apr 15, 2018
|English rough draft regarding pregorexia disorder
Research Paperslmjmontgomery - Apr 11, 2018 / Holt - Apr 15, 2018
|Marijuana: a drug, or a cure? Respond with three weakness' in my paper
2 - Sam, you have to revise the essay to be more fluid in presentation. Consider the use of transition sentences...
Research Paperssamfernann - Apr 11, 2018 / Holt - Apr 14, 2018
|Save the Kids: Buy a Flip Phone
2 - Hi heather, the first thing that I noticed upon finishing the first paragraph of your research paper is that...
Research Papershlautz - Apr 10, 2018 / Holt - Apr 13, 2018
|Essay about analysis an online article on how use of social media relates to anxiety
2 - Jiaje, this is supposed to be an analytical essay, That means that your perspective of the information provided should...
Research Papersjiajie - Apr 3, 2018 / Holt - Apr 9, 2018
|Review on the essay "Your Kids Phone is Not Like a Cigarette" in the New York Times by Anya Kamanetz
2 - Matt, for an article review of a New York Times article, there is almost no reference to the article...
Research PapersMatthendler - Apr 3, 2018 / Holt - Apr 6, 2018
|Organic Foods vs. Processed Foods (Rough Draft)
2 - Lorraine, the opening paragraph of your presentation is interesting. However, it does not provide a clear thesis statement for...
Research Papersloryzoe - Mar 31, 2018 / Holt - Apr 1, 2018
|AURLS：An Active Defense Solution for Web Applications Based on URL Shifting
Research Paperszjstone - Feb 4, 2018 / Holt - Feb 7, 2018
|Research paper for human papillomavirus
2 - Esther, I'm not sure if you posted your complete research for review. It feels like this is only a...
Research Papersesther026 - Jan 23, 2018 / Holt - Jan 23, 2018
|Home / Research Papers|