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|Memory Essay: Interference between auditory and visual memory
2 - Not being an expert in this field, I feel that you have somehow, managed to educate me about a...
Research PapersRdunn07 - 2 days ago / Holt - 1 day ago
|Title: Why should people pay more attention to protect forest? - Introduction
6 - Hi @tieuvohonghan, It is unfinished essay, right? Actually, I like the way you introduce the prompt, you have a...
Research Paperstieuvohonghan - Apr 23, 2017 / Anhy chan - 1 day ago
|Data mining for fake account detection by content analysis
3 - No,i mean something else. I concluded that for my senior thesis, work in the field of Detect fake...
Research Paperswave525 - Apr 21, 2017 / wave525 - 1 day ago
|Compare/Contrast Research Paper, help with grammar/conventions, only present tense and no 1st person
2 - Caitlin, you need to change up the use of the word "perpetrator" and "abuse" in your essay. Get a...
Research Paperscntoniazzo - Apr 17, 2017 / Holt - Apr 19, 2017
|Introduction - The influence of celebrity worship on college students
2 - Vanessa. the thesis statement and purpose of the study is not really clear in the opening statement. What is...
Research Papersvanessaaleung - Apr 17, 2017 / Holt - Apr 19, 2017
|Research on Ethics of Cloning (Wooly Mammoth)
2 - John, you are trying to discuss too many topics all at once, without giving yourself the benefit of a...
Research PapersJoSmoBoBo - Apr 16, 2017 / Holt - Apr 16, 2017
|How to Deal With Angry People Essay
2 - Melissa, this paper is a bit confusing to read. At the start, it sounds like you are writing an...
Research Papersmelluvsuu - Apr 15, 2017 / Holt - Apr 16, 2017
|The Evolution of Board Games and Their Future in Society
5 - Maybe in the conclusion you should add some personal opinion (could be written in a passive voice) whether it's...
Research PapersKKearney - Apr 14, 2017 / Rich Monte - Apr 15, 2017
|Essay for English: Legalization of Marijuana: The Future is here
2 - Kory your essay is composed of more than 30 percent of quotes. This is something that poses a problem...
Research Papersbballkid19 - Apr 13, 2017 / Holt - Apr 14, 2017
|The influence of gory games for behaviour of gamers in reality. Research on Video Games and Violence
2 - Estevan, when writing a research paper, you must do so from a third person point of view. In order...
Research Papersestgilvid - Apr 12, 2017 / Holt - Apr 13, 2017
|Understanding your credit and how it affects your life. "NEED" Peer Review
2 - Joshua, this essay is really difficult to read. The premise is unclear, the point of the discussion needs to...
Research Papersdeckerjnohatin - Apr 11, 2017 / Holt - Apr 11, 2017
|Some solutions aimed at increasing students' attendance
3 - Chu, this research paper is severely flawed. The most well developed portion needs to be the thesis statement. That...
Research Papersngocanh_97hanu - Apr 10, 2017 / Holt - Apr 10, 2017
|The Struggles Women Face Entering or Rentering College
3 - @miana13 Hi Miana, this research paper is very informative and well prepared. My only suggestion is for you to...
Research Papersmiana13 - Apr 9, 2017 / Strikeracad30 - Apr 10, 2017
|Plato and Aristotle on today, in the 21st century... Peer review
2 - Joel, the title of your essay does not match the research that you have presented. The thesis statement should...
Research Papersrungejm - Apr 8, 2017 / Holt - Apr 9, 2017
|Breastfeeding: Maternal Benefits & Support.......Motivation to keep going!
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the feedback. Your response is exactly what was missing, but I couldn't figure...
Research Papersjaldrich - Apr 7, 2017 / jaldrich - Apr 8, 2017
|How are turbo-chargers more effective than superchargers?
2 - Eric, in reference to your second paragraph. Do not make any statement that already makes an indirect choice for...
Research Papersesoriano - Apr 6, 2017 / Holt - Apr 7, 2017
|Causes and effects of child obesity - Rough Draft
2 - Analeza, your essay needs to be revised in order to meet specific requirements. Start with the introduction. There is...
Research Papersanalezaclark3 - Apr 6, 2017 / Holt - Apr 6, 2017
|How to write a Draft Research Paper on Cyber Security and Privacy Issues?
3 - @Holt Hello Holt, I appreciate your honest and educated feedback, and for your time. Best, Yvonne...
Research Papersymedina - Mar 31, 2017 / ymedina - Apr 1, 2017
|Film reception theory: The Interview Questions
Research Papersdaolena - Mar 27, 2017 / daolena - Mar 28, 2017
|Pressure on Teenagers to Go to College - Research Essay Draft
2 - Ashley, the main problem with your research paper at this point is that it is composed of more than...
Research PapersAsh2146362 - Mar 27, 2017 / Holt - Mar 27, 2017
|Facebook usage among undergraduate students - research study introduction
Research Paperskalivu - Mar 24, 2017 / kalivu - Mar 26, 2017
|Caffeine: Friend or Foe? In the perspective of the child, the adult, and the elderly.
2 - Amber, I firmly believe that your thesis statement in the first paragraph needs more work. Try to find a...
Research PapersAMB2174945 - Mar 25, 2017 / Holt - Mar 26, 2017
|Research topics on data mining - suggestions?
33 - I made that suggestion but your presentation to your supervisor is wrong. Which is why I did not understand...
Research PapersAnjana Devi - Apr 11, 2012 / Holt - Mar 1, 2017
|What are your plans when you finish your studies - essay for Master Degree in TESOL
10 - Hi @Holt, thanks for the revision. I'll use it with minor adjustment in my essay. Thank you for the...
Research Papersd2ny - Feb 12, 2017 / d2ny - Feb 14, 2017
|Speaking, reading and writing in a second language has many benefits
Research PapersCYNSQ28921 - Feb 11, 2017 / Malavika Venu - Feb 12, 2017
|Sleep Disorder Research; Introducing sleep apnea the silent killer.
Research Papersmagdaczerny - Jan 22, 2017 / TJLuschen - Jan 22, 2017
|The different issues that illegal immigration has brought to America
3 - Kekoa, the topic you have chosen to discuss is quite broad in coverage while your synopsis or thesis statement...
Research Paperskkubli3246 - Jan 18, 2017 / Holt - Jan 18, 2017
|Violence and Video Games correlation - A research paper
2 - Bryan, the main problem with your paper is that it is composed solely of quoted information from other sources....
Research PapersWillis1313 - Jan 16, 2017 / Holt - Jan 17, 2017
|Essay about motivation letter for German's university scholarship. How to make aroused letter?
3 - Dewa, in terms of presentation, your letter is confused. You have accidentally mixed the content of a letter of...
Research Papersdewakresna - Jan 12, 2017 / Holt - Jan 12, 2017
|Creationism over Evolutionism
3 - I am not a moderator or an experienced essay writer, so take my opinion with a grain of salt....
Research Paperstolliky - Jan 11, 2017 / TRaw98 - Jan 12, 2017
|The Ethical Pitfalls of Orphanage Tourism
2 - George, your discussion regarding "Orphanage Tourism" is very one sided. It does not deliver a balanced discussion because you...
Research Papersgeo2149457 - Jan 11, 2017 / Holt - Jan 11, 2017
|Different forms of Diabetes Mellitus that a person can be affected by.
3 - Will, a peer reviewed article such as this still requires the same information be placed in it as a...
Research Papersshamus7555 - Jan 10, 2017 / Holt - Jan 10, 2017
|Seeking Peer Review - The development and application of animal assisted therapy in human mental
2 - Shi, you need to revise your opening statement in order to present your thesis statement somewhere within that. Your...
Research PapersShi Lyu - Jan 4, 2017 / Holt - Jan 4, 2017
|Small firms, R&D, technology and innovation
5 - @Holt Dear Holt, thank you for your feed back, the text is not yet finished, i post here just...
Research PapersVirak kong - Dec 29, 2016 / Virak kong - Dec 30, 2016
|An Unhealthy Generation: Childhood Obesity
2 - Victoria, your first paragraph should be divided into two because you are discussing 2 different topics in one paragraph....
Research Papersvjb - Dec 24, 2016 / Holt - Dec 24, 2016
|Forensic Accounting Is Important in Financial Investigations
2 - Wendy, lets get started with your thesis statement. It doesn't really tell me what you are going to be...
Research Paperswen2066281 - Dec 24, 2016 / Holt - Dec 24, 2016
|Essay on the acknowledgement of bullying in society-
3 - Lexi, you need to outline your discussion for this research paper before you write it. There is a clear...
Research PapersLexLex - Dec 24, 2016 / Holt - Dec 24, 2016
|LSM Portfolio: English Legal System Seminars and Reflection Question
2 - Jeremy, where is the copy of the seminar questions that you were supposed to respond to? You provided the...
Research PapersJeremy Newcastl - Dec 15, 2016 / Holt - Dec 15, 2016
|Comparing Foreign Ownership, Return Volatility, Volume, and Risk Among ASEAN Countries
4 - How about this miss, Revision #1 The finance research regarding the stock is interesting to explore, especially...
Research Papersahmadmaulinnaufa - Dec 12, 2016 / ahmadmaulinnaufa - Dec 13, 2016
|ENGLISH 102 RESEARCH PAPER ROUGH DRAFT (Will Our Roads be Safe With Legal Weed?)
2 - Hi Ally, try not to present an actual information as part of your thesis statement. This paragraph is supposed...
Research Papersanc64 - Dec 11, 2016 / Holt - Dec 11, 2016
|The debate on making Marijuana legal - the fight has begun
3 - There are a lot of simple sentences that could be combined, as well as transitional words or lists that...
Research Papersangiereneen - Dec 10, 2016 / nerdella - Dec 10, 2016
|"Dead fish", "Vung An", "Formosa", "Chinese steel factory"; Polluted environment in my country essay
Research PapersThaomy - Dec 10, 2016 / voivua1993 - Dec 10, 2016
|Night Essay- add or suggest what I should expand upon for in text analysis and other issues.
2 - Steven, I think that the reason your professor indicated a need for more analysis within the text is because...
Research Papersstevenmassie22 - Dec 9, 2016 / Holt - Dec 10, 2016
|The Cult Status of the Laestadian Lutheran Church
3 - Ava, in the opening statement, you should focus on presenting the fact that the church is considered a cult...
Research Papersrousua - Dec 9, 2016 / Holt - Dec 9, 2016
|Negative connotation of feminism and reasonings of why women today do not identify with the movement
3 - @ratoberry I appreciate the stance you took at the beginning of this essay. You started as a person...
Research Papersratoberry - Dec 7, 2016 / Mehzah - Dec 8, 2016
|All life on earth is dependent on the weather. Global Climate Change
2 - Hi BJ, you have your work cut out for you in this research paper. While it is quite informative...
Research Papersbjjefferson - Dec 4, 2016 / Holt - Dec 4, 2016
|How to Prevent Diabetes. Measures That Can Be Used To Prevent this disease.
2 - Jacqueline, I know that you have the thesis statement in the "How to Prevent Diabetes" section of your research,...
Research PapersJackieG - Dec 4, 2016 / Holt - Dec 4, 2016
|Why Deaf Culture Should Gain More Recognition
2 - Geoffrey, I am not sure if your teacher has told you this but you have not properly presented your...
Research Papersgs83phx - Dec 3, 2016 / Holt - Dec 3, 2016
|Science fiction presence in our life
2 - Siboney, there are one too many problems with this paper of yours. The format of the paper alone, the...
Research PapersSiboney - Dec 2, 2016 / Holt - Dec 2, 2016
|Research Paper: Research Question- Is Marijuana Safer than Alcohol?
2 - David, this type of research paper must be delicately balanced between the good and bad effects of both alcohol...
Research Papersdavidbow31 - Nov 30, 2016 / Holt - Nov 30, 2016
|Safer Streets Include Guns
2 - hello @tvanmierlo97. this is my suggestion for your writing.. hopefully it can help you.. ... but keep society...
Research Paperstvanmierlo97 - Nov 27, 2016 / Pramudia27 - Nov 28, 2016
|Fire Prevention Laws, how far is too far?
3 - Hi Daniel, Welcome to EssayForum :) I have some experience in writing some research projects but this type...
Research Papersdgrindl - Nov 26, 2016 / ichanpants89 - Nov 27, 2016
|Cannabis and Epileptic Seizures Research Paper
2 - Courtney, let's start with your opening paragraph. As far as the inclusion of your thesis statement in the first...
Research PapersCShea1008 - Nov 18, 2016 / Holt - Nov 18, 2016
|Marijuana Controversy and research paper
2 - Sean, the essay is good. However, it seems to be lacking a representation of suggested solutions to the problem...
Research PapersSEA2144743 - Nov 15, 2016 / Holt - Nov 16, 2016
|Modeling And Optimization Of Swelling, Drug Loading And Release From Natural Polymer Hydrogels
Research PapersPolymeryounis - Nov 13, 2016 / london1988 - Nov 13, 2016
|Artificial blood replacing donated blood, goverment involvement research and religious views
2 - Juan, for starters, if you are writing a paper regarding a medical topic, make sure that all of the...
Research Papersjuedas8181 - Nov 13, 2016 / Holt - Nov 13, 2016
|HELP ME WITH RECOGNIZING THREE FAILINGS OF MY PAPER ON THE COLIN KAEPERNICK EFFECT.
2 - Nate, the first problem that you have to address in your paper is the fact that the topic you...
Research Papersnateshepherd - Nov 12, 2016 / Holt - Nov 13, 2016
|A Revised version of Obama Giving Away the ICANN Administration
2 - Ashley, when I read your essay, the first thing I thought was that you had chosen a very interesting...
Research Papersashleymary1022 - Nov 12, 2016 / Holt - Nov 13, 2016
|Letting the Media Have an Upper Hand
2 - Harleyann, your opening statement is supposed to accomplish a number of things for your essay. First, it should present...
Research Papershjwolf - Nov 12, 2016 / Holt - Nov 12, 2016
|How can our teenagers obtain information on sexually transmitted disease? Rough draft essay
2 - Cris, when you revise your thesis statement, it would be best if you pose the full list of questions...
Research Paperscris0829 - Nov 11, 2016 / Holt - Nov 11, 2016
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