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|Mental Health and the Preemie Parent
2 - Good work on the creation of the discussion premise. The backgrounder and topic statements are quite solid and clearly...
Research PapersSharonH - Jan 8, 2022 / Holt - Jan 8, 2022
|Social Media Affect on Mental Health
2 - Focus the research on data relating only to teen use of social media and and the resulting effects on...
Research Papersellakay - Dec 24, 2021 / Holt - Dec 25, 2021
|The Constitutionality of Capital Punishment - research paper
2 - Since the first paragraph is nothing but a series of citations from other sources that do not directly relate...
Research PapersTyNeadik - Dec 23, 2021 / Holt - Dec 23, 2021
|Wage Gap Among Black Women in America
2 - Make sure to keep the focus on the African American woman. This reference suddenly points to a generic...
Research PapersNa3 - Dec 20, 2021 / Holt - Dec 20, 2021
|Conditions of Mental Illness: How Capitalism is Responsible for the Mental Health Crisis
2 - You are still trying to establish your thesis statement. As such, a general discussion of the cost of...
Research PapersBuggy - Dec 18, 2021 / Holt - Dec 18, 2021
|Exploring options for holding corporations accountable - DuPont and PFOA contamination
2 - The hook will be more effective if told through a narration of historical events, without any reference citations. That...
Research Paperssunnyhart - Dec 18, 2021 / Holt - Dec 18, 2021
|Benefits of Legalizing Marijuana in Arizona
Research Papersstewartray - Dec 10, 2021 / stewartray - Dec 14, 2021
|Research Paper on Universal Healthcare. Need three indications of a weakness within essay.
2 - Offer a reason for this reasoning presentation. Not everyone will agree with you regarding the connection of personal...
Research Papersjcannon22 - Dec 13, 2021 / Holt - Dec 13, 2021
|Research paper on why serial killers choose to commit multiple murders
2 - The opening statement lacks impact. Try to come up with a more interesting hook for your presentation. For impact,...
Research Paperselilucero13 - Nov 27, 2021 / Holt - Nov 28, 2021
|Why are vaccines important?
2 - Kindly review your in-text citations. You have not seperated it from the actual text, making the paragraphs highly confusing...
Research Paperslyssamariet - Nov 14, 2021 / Holt - Nov 15, 2021
|Rough draft peer review on why play is important for children
2 - The opening statement and the introduction were placed in reverse in the presentation. The second paragraph makes for an...
Research Paperstabithasenff123 - Nov 12, 2021 / Holt - Nov 13, 2021
|Grammar/Writing Techniques Cultural Competence in Healthcare as it Relates to the LGBTQ+ Community
NEW - Cultural Competence in Healthcare as it Relates to the LGBT Community For editing, content, and formatting needs please...
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|The effect of college debt on the future life choices of students
2 - The paper definitely needs professional editing and proof-reading. Most paragraphs require a content clean-up that is not covered by...
Research PapersMckennarichards - Oct 13, 2021 / Holt - Oct 13, 2021
|Essay - peer review America Under Siege: Combatting the Opioid Epidemic
2 - Try to establish how the "under siege" aspect happened. Why is this the perception? What does your paper...
Research Papersmikecaz - Sep 18, 2021 / Holt - Sep 19, 2021
|Navy SEAL Impact Research Paper
2 - You can do away with this portion. It only repeats the last half of the introduction. Find another...
Research Paperscasenstowe - Sep 17, 2021 / Holt - Sep 18, 2021
|Does Meat cause cancer, how and why? What can be done to eat meat safely?
2 - It appears the writer forgot to upload the complete research paper. The discussion is presented but there is no...
Research Papersmedicmike83 - Aug 11, 2021 / Holt - Aug 12, 2021
|United States Decrease in Population Growth
2 - The essay does not have a proper topic introduction and thesis statement. The first paragraph is directly informative and...
Research Paperspeanut04 - Aug 8, 2021 / Holt - Aug 10, 2021
|The Effects of Physical Activity on Mental Health in Adolescents
2 - The first paragraph needs to clarify where the civil unrest in taking place and how that relates to mental...
Research Papersmmoore598 - Jul 30, 2021 / Holt - Jul 31, 2021
|Universal Background Checks
Research Papersmhallums02 - Jun 21, 2021 / Holt - Jun 22, 2021
|Research Essay advising individuals on how to help their loved ones to stop smoking - review
2 - Do not open with information sources. she prompt summary does not negate the need for a proper topic introduction...
Research PapersJordania - Jun 16, 2021 / Holt - Jun 17, 2021
|Positive work environment and how it influences your work result
2 - Since this is your thesis statement, you cannot use an in-text citation for it. Rather, it would be...
Research Papersasha1310 - Jun 2, 2021 / Holt - Jun 2, 2021
|Single-payer Healthcare System and Why it should be Implemented in the U.S
2 - The second sentence of the first paragraph is confusing to read. It feels like itis overloaded with information, which...
Research PapersAshUndead - May 23, 2021 / Holt - May 24, 2021
|Benefits of Early Childhood Education. Essay for ENG 102 Rio Salado
2 - What is the discussion focus of this essay ? There is a lack of concerning topics at the start...
Research PapersTiffanylane7 - May 16, 2021 / Holt - May 16, 2021
|A Look at Animal Agriculture from an Environmental Perspective
2 - Define and differentiate. These 2 are usually seen as connected but yeseparate environmental topics. Educate the people who...
Research Papersfruitfulfaerie - May 9, 2021 / Holt - May 9, 2021
|Reducing Social Determinants of Health on the Navajo Nation
2 - Consider providing a historical perspective of how the Navajo healthcare system came to be at the start of the...
Research Papersjahasteen - May 1, 2021 / Holt - May 2, 2021
|Looking for Review of My Essay on Maker Communities and Technology
2 - Please provide more clarity in this particular sentence. The sentence structure is incorrect and therefore does not make...
Research Papersmmvinson - Apr 29, 2021 / Holt - Apr 30, 2021
|How can military mental health services improve?
2 - Move the citation that is at the very opening of this essay to the second paragraph. It is never...
Research Papersmarqvivi - Apr 29, 2021 / Holt - Apr 29, 2021
|How Technology and Social Media Harms Children
2 - This is a highly compelling statement that carries a clear topic for discussion. I believe you must make...
Research PapersAmruc769 - Apr 26, 2021 / Holt - Apr 26, 2021
|Analyzing Nurse Burnout. Who it effects? Reasons for it. Ways it Can Be Prevented
Research Papersdsha24 - Apr 19, 2021 / dsha24 - Apr 20, 2021
|Revisions on my "Falconiforme Finesse" Research Essay
Research Papersjosephstreet2041 - Apr 18, 2021 / Holt - Apr 19, 2021
|What is Knowledge? - Answering the question - Rough Draft
2 - What research was conducted? How was it conducted? ho conducted it? What were the questions asked? How were...
Research PapersKeyTowns - Apr 17, 2021 / Holt - Apr 19, 2021
|The Importance of Destigmatizing Mental Health
2 - You have to remove the quote that is presented in the first paragraph. As a general rule, in-text citations...
Research Paperscarlieh - Apr 16, 2021 / Holt - Apr 19, 2021
|Draft of research paper/persuasive essay on how to define success as a foster youth
3 - Thank you very much. This is exactly the feedback I was hoping for! I'm not sure how this system...
Research PapersSHI2170979 - Apr 11, 2021 / SHI2170979 - Apr 11, 2021
|Research Paper Draft--Martial Arts and Its Positive Impact on Mental and Physical Health in Adults
2 - You can make the writing stronger by offering a more intricate look into the history of martial arts and...
Research Papersa7mg11 - Mar 10, 2021 / Holt - Mar 10, 2021
|The Effects of Human Activity on Climate Change (Seeking criticism and main points of weakness)
2 - Remove the in-text citation in the first paragraph. The first paragraph is your thesis paragraph or introduction to the...
Research Papersleighannfraley - Mar 9, 2021 / Holt - Mar 9, 2021
|Research Essay: Politics: The Destructor of Relationships
2 - The opening paragraph takes too long to get to the thesis statement. You are over introducing the topic. Try...
Research Papersjdemara - Feb 26, 2021 / Holt - Feb 26, 2021
|Peer Review for Cyber Bullying Research Project/Essay
2 - The essay feels like it is starting in the middle of the presentation due to the improper thesis paragraph...
Research PapersCantonJunkie - Feb 1, 2021 / Holt - Feb 2, 2021
|The Academic Institutions in The United States Should Take a More Holistic Approach to Education
2 - You can further extent the content of this essay if you spend more time expanding on your personal opinion...
Research PapersArizonaGrown - Jan 10, 2021 / Holt - Jan 11, 2021
|For the Low Price of "Free": Should Higher Education be Made Free For All?
2 - There is a lacking thesis presentation in this research paper. There is no introduction to the topic. You seem...
Research PapersBlueBlur997 - Jan 3, 2021 / Holt - Jan 3, 2021
|Antibiotic Resistance in Pediatric Patients
2 - The first paragraph should deliver a focused history of the use of antibiotics in children and the commonly known...
Research Papersdeemoss2043 - Dec 28, 2020 / Holt - Dec 28, 2020
|Colonizing Mars and the Death of Earth
2 - Do not open the presentation with a paraphrasing, direct quote, or reference to Elon Musk. You do not need...
Research PapersLaila_tatum - Dec 27, 2020 / Holt - Dec 28, 2020
|How Domesticated Animals Prolong One's Life (Research Paper by Abby Stovall)
Research Papersgoosegonecrazy - Dec 18, 2020 / goosegonecrazy - Dec 21, 2020
|Dress Responsibly: The Social and Environmental Downfalls of Fast Fashion.
2 - 1. In Dress Responsibly, there is no foundational statement that would explain what factors drive the people to dress...
Research Papersari2151690 - Dec 14, 2020 / Holt - Dec 15, 2020
|Exercise Is The Fountain Of Health
2 - So what is the clearly set out thesis statement for this essay? What is the point of your introduction?...
Research PapersSar2178243 - Dec 13, 2020 / Holt - Dec 13, 2020
|Abstinence-Only vs. A Well-Rounded Sex Education: The Right to Knowledge
2 - Your thesis presentation is misleading. You open the essay with a reference to sex in general. However, your actual...
Research PapersSaraRasmusson93 - Dec 9, 2020 / Holt - Dec 10, 2020
|Fight Against Added Sugar
Research Paperscan2018543 - Dec 5, 2020 / Holt - Dec 5, 2020
|Are felons worth less to society
3 - @Holt Thank you! Very valuable feedback. This is the rough draft and your feedback will allow me to submit...
Research PapersGmonroe - Dec 3, 2020 / Gmonroe - Dec 4, 2020
|Theme: Health and Fitness
2 - Are you sure you are writing a research paper? I believe you misunderstood the question and thought you had...
Research PapersPhuong2211 - Dec 2, 2020 / Holt - Dec 3, 2020
|Research paper about Geoengineering! Blessing or Curse?
2 - The entry presentation of your paper is sensationalist in presentation. Since this is an academic paper, sensationalist claims, such...
Research PapersBetancourt - Nov 29, 2020 / Holt - Nov 29, 2020
|The cultural background of someone suffering from substance abuse affects how he or she will respond
2 - You have to reverse the opening paragraph. The opening sentence should start with, "The United States is a country...
Research PapersBCrehan87 - Nov 23, 2020 / Holt - Nov 23, 2020
|Research papers writing with topic "Peer pressure" (Introduction)
2 - Your introduction is not effective. You need to be able to first introduce the meaning of peer pressure to...
Research Papersdieulinh267 - Nov 7, 2020 / Holt - Nov 17, 2020
|Three areas of weakness in my paper - American Policing and Racism: Then and Now
2 - One area of weakness in this presentation would be the lack of sub-sections in the presentation. Since you are...
Research Papersoni4u2 - Nov 7, 2020 / Holt - Nov 8, 2020
|The First Punic War - Research Paper
2 - What exactly was the purpose of your research paper? Isn't there a way by which you could connect the...
Research Papersahartq - Nov 3, 2020 / Holt - Nov 3, 2020
|Research paper on water quality and types of water suppliers. Which is better for our health?
2 - The presentation feels like you are starting in the middle of the paper instead of at the beginning. Do...
Research Paperslourene13 - Oct 25, 2020 / Holt - Oct 25, 2020
|A New Era For e-Commerce - research paper
2 - Separate the introduction of Chris Walton. You have to first give his background, as a professional, what are his...
Research Paperstavogodoy - Oct 14, 2020 / Holt - Oct 15, 2020
|The Safety of Workers at Nuclear Power Plants
2 - The opening paragraph is a bit confusing to read. You should open that by focusing on the increasing demand...
Research Papersslande41 - Oct 14, 2020 / Holt - Oct 15, 2020
|Rough Draft on Climate Change - we have short time to react.
3 - You are making a hyperbolic claim in the first paragraph without first establishing the foundation for the claim. Where...
Research PapersKeeg - Oct 3, 2020 / Holt - Oct 4, 2020
|The Risk of the Younger Generation with Technology - Rough Draft for peer review
2 - You have provided a good introduction and thesis statement for your research paper. It has a clear thesis, proper...
Research Paperslluyis - Sep 23, 2020 / Holt - Sep 23, 2020
|Why now is the time for the U.S. to adopt universal health care legislation
3 - @Holt Thank you very much for your feedback! I will make the suggested changes to the opening paragraph...
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|Is CBD Right for My Kid(s)
2 - You may want to consider creating a clearer thesis statement in the first paragraph. You are practically starting in...
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