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|The Impacts of Science Fiction on Technology
2 - @Shiva_kh Hi there. Welcome to the forum! Hopefully, my feedback will give you insight on how to improve your...
Research PapersShiva_kh - Nov 11, 2019 / Maria - 1 day ago
|Research essay on the topic of The Salem Witch Trials
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Research Papershodaym89 - Nov 7, 2019 / Maria - Nov 9, 2019
|Research writing assignment on influence of family and friends on teenagers
2 - @ngochong0258 Hi there. Welcome to the forum! Thanks for being around. I hope that the feedback you receive here...
Research Papersngochong0258 - Nov 6, 2019 / Maria - Nov 9, 2019
|Essay about the pro and cons of gun control
2 - @sherflohr Hi there! Welcome to the forum. Seeing as you are new here, I hope that my feedback gives...
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|Fluidity help on Coffee research paper
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|The realities of domestic violence research essay
2 - @Mikkan Hi there. Welcome to the forum! Hopefully, my feedback will give you insight on how to improve your...
Research PapersMikkan - Nov 5, 2019 / Maria - Nov 7, 2019
|Social Media correlation with Anxiety and Depression
NEW - Social media use and anxiety disorders It is estimated that there are currently 40 million adults in the...
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|Should children attend preschool?
2 - @ALI2162205 Welcome to the forum! I hope you're doing good. I'm here to give you feedback on your writing....
Research PapersALI2162205 - Oct 13, 2019 / Maria - Oct 18, 2019
|Abstract - Socio – ecological resilience of mangrove-shrimp models under salinity intrusion
2 - @dungtran Welcome to the forum. I'm here to give feedback on this abstract of yours. Generally, there is...
Research Papersdungtran - Oct 11, 2019 / Maria - Oct 14, 2019
|Cultural Differences Between America and Japan
Research Paperskatsue - Sep 26, 2019 / Spark00eh - Sep 26, 2019
|Effects on Recycling Essay - Review Request
2 - @niss Hey, welcome. We're happy to have you here. Please do check out this post for the feedback of...
Research Papersniss - Sep 23, 2019 / Maria - Sep 24, 2019
|IGNORANCE OF THE LAW EXCUSES NO ONE: AN OFFICIAL EXPOSE
2 - @REXLEGISSTANLEY Hi there. Welcome to the forum! I hope that this feedback serves you well in the future. If...
Research PapersREXLEGISSTANLEY - Sep 17, 2019 / Maria - Sep 18, 2019
|ENGL102 - Visual Analysis Paper (Twin Adventurers)
3 - The paper's assignment was a Descriptive Analysis project on two pictures. We could use paintings, photographs, or digital images....
Research Papersdiopbel - Aug 29, 2019 / diopbel - Sep 18, 2019
|Is reading at the age of 3 beneficial? A trend to push children to start reading early on.
2 - @tkeyhani Hi, dear! Welcome to the forum. I hope this feedback becomes beneficial for your writing endeavors. If it...
Research Paperstkeyhani - Sep 15, 2019 / Maria - Sep 16, 2019
|My paper about the Vietnamese grammar
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Research PapersPhamly - Sep 5, 2019 / Maria - Sep 11, 2019
|"Childhood Education: Starting them off Right on the Right Foot"
2 - @EMM2156872 Hi there. Welcome to the forum. Whatever your initial purpose of joining is, I hope that you find...
Research PapersEMM2156872 - Sep 1, 2019 / Maria - Sep 7, 2019
|Animal Cruelty and Human Violence - English 102: Section 11432
3 - vincec, sorry for the late reply, back to the essay: I really think your first paragraph is not catchy...
Research Papersvincec - Aug 30, 2019 / phlorem - Sep 6, 2019
|Effects of social media addiction on people
2 - Hi Your essay is really good except a few grammatical errors or choice of words. First of all,there...
Research Papersedw2189851 - Aug 20, 2019 / ahsan_daniyal - Aug 22, 2019
|Debate research paper on abortion (I'm pro-choice)
2 - Some of your arguments are weak or childish. For example, you talk about animal hunting or buying a gun...
Research PapersCassiehern - Aug 17, 2019 / Rich Monte - Aug 18, 2019
|Research essay on drug addiction and treatment
Research Papersadrimarie21 - Aug 14, 2019 / adrimarie21 - Aug 15, 2019
|ENG 108 Final Paper - Should we live together before marriage?
3 - This is a mind captivating article. Cohabitation is still being observed today especially in the universities. This write-up...
Research PapersPetra Shih - Aug 3, 2019 / Vickspring - Aug 8, 2019
|Americans should not have the right to end their own life
2 - Very interesting topic. Good job. Didnt know this was happening. Paper flows nicely and well written. It is written...
Research PapersJCrismon - Aug 3, 2019 / Readerlover2 - Aug 5, 2019
|Media's Hidden Effects for ENG 102
2 - @nickENG102 Hello. Welcome to the forum. I'll be providing you with writing feedback on this specific essay. I hope...
Research PapersnickENG102 - Aug 1, 2019 / Maria - Aug 2, 2019
|Psychology self analysis - first research paper ive ever written.
2 - @jessiemkay Hello there! I see that you're new here. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find this platform...
Research Papersjessiemkay - Jul 29, 2019 / Maria - Jul 29, 2019
|Help peer review my essay titled, "Major League Baseball and the Effect on Foreign Policy"
2 - @BSmith1209 Hello there. Welcome to the forum! I'll provide you with writing feedback on your essay. I hope you...
Research PapersBSmith1209 - Jul 27, 2019 / Maria - Jul 29, 2019
|What is the Sino-US trade war and their effect on the economy?
2 - @SylviaFong Hello there! I see that you're new here. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find this feedback...
Research PapersSylviaFong - Jul 27, 2019 / Maria - Jul 27, 2019
|Does America have a Gun Problem - Rio Salado
2 - @ewamunds Hello there. I see that you're new here - welcome to the forum! I hope you find this...
Research Papersewamunds - Jul 26, 2019 / Maria - Jul 26, 2019
|Draft Essay about "E-waste solutions for a growing environmental challenge" - Peer Review
2 - @JAM2076547 Hello there. Welcome to the forum! I hope you find the feedback you gather here to be beneficial...
Research PapersJAM2076547 - Jul 26, 2019 / Maria - Jul 26, 2019
|Argumentive essay, obesity in children/ Unhealthy foods
3 - @KelseyWhite Hi there! Welcome to the forum. Let me do my best to provide you with an analysis...
Research PapersKelseyWhite - Jun 30, 2019 / Maria - Jun 30, 2019
|Cobalt Mining Research Essay Evaluation
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Research PapersCoralea95 - Jun 29, 2019 / Maria - Jun 29, 2019
|Spanking: Effects and Traumas - Help with this short college paper.
2 - @ishmealruffin Hi there! Welcome to the forum. First and foremost, work on the manner in which you...
Research Papersishmealruffin - Jun 17, 2019 / Maria - Jun 18, 2019
|CHILDHOOD OBESITY AND WHO TO BLAME - Parents, Education, Prevention
2 - @BEA2160470 Hello there! Welcome to the forum. I'll do my best to assist you in providing a feedback....
Research PapersBEA2160470 - Jun 14, 2019 / Maria - Jun 15, 2019
|How did the Industrial Revolution paly int o the rise of modern architecture
2 - @Rachel Cai When you said: ..., in my opinion need some changes like: ... brought a profound impact...
Research PapersRachel Cai - Jun 13, 2019 / malenitass - Jun 14, 2019
|De-Stigmatizing The Gap Year
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Research Papersthatonemoroccan - Jun 8, 2019 / Maria - Jun 8, 2019
|Pension system, cross-culture, differences between Chinese and American aging conditions and so on
2 - @Alyssa Liu Hello there! Firstly, be cautious of the structure of your sentences. Notice how you have a...
Research PapersAlyssa Liu - Jun 2, 2019 / Maria - Jun 3, 2019
|Research paper on the use of CBD oil to treat mental illness in children
2 - @cmurphy1182 Hi there! Welcome to the forum. First and foremost, I think it is great that you are...
Research Paperscmurphy1182 - Jun 1, 2019 / Maria - Jun 1, 2019
|Protecting people with Autism During Police Encounters: Research paper
2 - @Mastapluck Hi there! First and foremost, I think that you should focus on compressing your thoughts into smaller...
Research PapersMastapluck - May 28, 2019 / Maria - May 29, 2019
|Is Organic Farming Worth the Cost?
2 - @juliannabond59 Hi there! Evade being repetitive when it comes toy our words. Doing this will enable you to...
Research Papersjuliannabond59 - May 22, 2019 / Maria - May 23, 2019
|Research Paper on stress, burnout and depression.
3 - @kay2158231 Hi there! Seems like you already have a general idea how you can improve your essay. Let's...
Research Paperskay2158231 - May 22, 2019 / Maria - May 22, 2019
|Dissociative Identity Disorder: Something Real or an Act
2 - @MarieJurado18 Hi there! First and foremost, be cautious of the structure of your sentences. I have noticed that...
Research PapersMarieJurado18 - May 19, 2019 / Maria - May 20, 2019
|HOW VIDEO GAMES POSITIVELY INFLUENCE TO STUDENTS' LIVES
2 - I would suggest revising your introductory line to something along the lines of: There have been discussions on the...
Research PapersNATNg13 - May 3, 2019 / Maria - May 3, 2019
|How Lauryn Hill's Album Defines What It Means To Be Human
2 - Citations should always be placed at the end of sentences, not in the middle. This is applicable to all...
Research Paperscrl17b - Apr 28, 2019 / Maria - Apr 29, 2019
|Impacts of Depression and Its Effects on People. Second greatest reason for disability in the world
Research Paperssarah0912 - Apr 27, 2019 / sarah0912 - Apr 29, 2019
|The Abstract of the research of the route direction
2 - I would suggest that you try to use formal language to help your essay become more structured. When you're...
Research Paperswashiguanyu - Apr 23, 2019 / Maria - Apr 23, 2019
|ENG102 - Taking a Stand Against Bullying
2 - I can't quite pinpoint what type of citation format you are using. From what I can see, it's supposed...
Research Papershorriblewriter1 - Apr 22, 2019 / Maria - Apr 22, 2019
|English 102 - Mobile IV Therapy: AZ IV Medics
2 - A couple of mistakes that I had noticed sporadically scattered throughout the essay: 1. Misuse of capitalization 2. Lengthy...
Research Papersmheistan - Apr 21, 2019 / Maria - Apr 21, 2019
|CBD: Better Than Prescripition Drugs
2 - Let's go through the technicalities. I suggest that you find a better transition word when you move from one...
Research Papersjazfox - Apr 5, 2019 / Maria - Apr 5, 2019
|Research Paper/Persuasive Essay on "The Many Sides of Veganism"
3 - Thank you for your feedback. I think it is very constructive and will help me to move forward in...
Research Papersshidagiggles - Apr 1, 2019 / shidagiggles - Apr 2, 2019
|Social media's negative affects on society
2 - There are a couple of things that I suggest you look into. On a technical level, I would look...
Research PapersHmcpherson5 - Mar 27, 2019 / Maria - Mar 27, 2019
|Research Essay Draft Titled "Protecting the Public Interest on Social Media Platforms"
Research PapersColinLooper - Mar 26, 2019 / ridhoswasta - Mar 27, 2019
|Is Medical radiation safe?
2 - Bframirez, On a technical level, I suggest that you review the usage of punctuation. There were a few sentences...
Research Papersbframirez91 - Mar 24, 2019 / Maria - Mar 24, 2019
|Mental Illnesses and The Causes
2 - Tyson, While your essay is sufficient in terms of expounding details, you should be wary of structuring your...
Research PapersWildmanty - Mar 23, 2019 / Maria - Mar 23, 2019
|Barriers of Discrimination for the Transgender and Gender Non-Conforming Community
Research Papershraye313 - Feb 16, 2019 / Holt - Feb 17, 2019
|Video Games And Violence - Research Paper : Eng 102
2 - Sarah, for starters, the thesis statement of your essay is not clear. It lacks a connected form of discussion...
Research Paperssarahrubin89 - Feb 2, 2019 / Holt - Feb 3, 2019
|Veterinary Technician Shortage: Do I stay or do I go?
2 - The immediate problem that can be seen in this research paper is the lack of in-text citations and proper...
Research Paperszuki2004 - Jan 31, 2019 / Holt - Feb 1, 2019
|Research Paper for ENG 102 on the effects of divorce on children
2 - Kelly, you must complete your reference to a thesis statement in your opening paragraph. That cannot be left for...
Research Paperskkriegel - Jan 2, 2019 / Holt - Jan 4, 2019
|Why Should Employers be Required to Provide Rest and Meal Breaks?
2 - Alicia, your essay has too much theoretical presentation and cited paraphrasing but not enough factual data presented. Convincing any...
Research Papersasheren - Dec 18, 2018 / Holt - Dec 18, 2018
|Mandatory Health or Individual Rights: Compulsory Vaccination in Society
2 - Jil,, I think that you can still clarify what the thesis statement of your essay is. Will this essay...
Research PapersJillith - Dec 15, 2018 / Holt - Dec 16, 2018
|SHORT REPORT ABOUT INTERIOR DESIGN
2 - 1. I believe that in the first sentence you skipped over the word room and said having a private...
Research PapersStevenTran - Nov 18, 2018 / GiuliVal - Nov 30, 2018
|Analysis of the Relationship between Education and Poverty
2 - @Otsuki Your wuoted information regarding the poverty rate in Japan is null and void for the discussion. The information...
Research PapersOtsuki - Nov 28, 2018 / Holt - Nov 29, 2018
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