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|Bipolar disorder assistance. Research Paper for Rio Salado ENG102
2 - Thomas, excellent presentation. I was enlightened and truly informed about how bipolar men should take responsibility not only for...
Research PapersTommydeck1988 - 2 days ago / Holt - 2 days ago
|Insomnia: It's Effect on the Quality of Life
2 - Rubi, there are several instances of redundancies in this research paper. For example, you used the same definition of...
Research Papersrubisoto92 - Jul 15, 2018 / Holt - Jul 16, 2018
|Persuasive Research Paper on utilizing GMOs
2 - Rachel, your opening anecdote is nice but not really informative. It would be an improvement in your presentation if...
Research Papersrachhcavaletto - Jul 15, 2018 / Holt - Jul 16, 2018
|Overexposure. Research Paper on Teens and Social Media
2 - Kerinda, you can better balance the information in your research paper if you revise it to have a more...
Research Papersdbacksbabe25 - Jul 15, 2018 / Holt - Jul 15, 2018
|Fighting Physical and Mental Illness with Yoga
2 - Nocholas, it would be better for your essay if you start it from the very start with a reference...
Research Papersnickliaci1 - Jul 14, 2018 / Holt - Jul 15, 2018
|Persuasive Essay On Violent Video Games
3 - Thank you for your feedback. I was thinking my essay was missing something just could not figure out what...
Research Papersjsmith0513 - Jul 13, 2018 / jsmith0513 - Jul 15, 2018
|Skins of Social Media - Paper on social media addiction
3 - Vijaya, there are simply too many missing aspects in this paper for it to be considered a completely developed...
Research Papersvbayana - Jul 7, 2018 / Holt - Jul 8, 2018
|The Stigma of Drug Abuse- Course research essay
2 - Simone, this is a very well researched paper that is only weakened by its reliance on too many in-text...
Research Paperssimone47 - Jun 30, 2018 / Holt - Jul 1, 2018
|Advantages of Electric Vehicles - English 102 class
2 - Brian, why do you keep saying "reviled" which means to criticize in an abusive or angrily insulting manner? I...
Research Papersbbrinkley - Jun 28, 2018 / Holt - Jun 29, 2018
|Maslow's Hierarchy of Needs: Applicable in to education at all levels
2 - Dhonsjurae , I find this essay to be highly informative and contemplative in content. The reader is definitely left...
Research PapersDhonsjurae - Jun 21, 2018 / Holt - Jun 22, 2018
|Does the Ketogenic diet decrease the risks associated with getting a cardiovascular disease
1 - Effects of Ketogenic Diets on Cardiovascular Risk Factors My essay is a research paper discussing how the ketogenic...
Research Papersgaruda0214 - Jun 17, 2018 / — -
|Traffic jam elimination -high rise multi storey bus with moving 'clamping' (or anchor) for stability
2 - Arafat, what exactly is the point of this writing? There is no proper thesis statement, there is no clear...
Research Paperslast invention - Jun 11, 2018 / Holt - Jun 12, 2018
|Electrocardiographic Criteria vs Anatomic Criteria In LVH
2 - Tyler. the first sentence in the first paragraph is superfluous. The statement does not connect directly with the chosen...
Research Paperstylerdoak04 - Apr 29, 2018 / Holt - Apr 30, 2018
|"What do we know about the immune system?" Lesson 11 draft
2 - Marnie, this essay is very disorganized in presentation. You do not have a clear thesis statement, you are presenting...
Research PapersMarnie - Apr 28, 2018 / Holt - Apr 29, 2018
|St. John's Wort's Effectiveness in Treating Postpartum Depression
3 - Lisa, there are several elements that can be incorporated into this version of the essay to make it more...
Research Paperslshamroukh79 - Apr 28, 2018 / Holt - Apr 29, 2018
|Teachers Being Armed in School
3 - @eliassasha98 I agree with the previous poster that you should perhaps offer a counterpoint in favor of teachers carrying...
Research Paperseliassasha98 - Apr 15, 2018 / rmueller - Apr 21, 2018
|Peer review needed on the vital roles midwives play in today's society
2 - Lauren, this is a pretty good draft. I would have liked to have read more discussion on a comparative...
Research Paperslegelin90 - Apr 14, 2018 / Holt - Apr 15, 2018
|Women in Law Enforcement- research paper for ENG102
2 - Maquel, in order to create a more authoritative stance on the role of women in the police force, you...
Research Papersmaquelpaterno - Apr 13, 2018 / Holt - Apr 15, 2018
|English rough draft regarding pregorexia disorder
Research Paperslmjmontgomery - Apr 11, 2018 / Holt - Apr 15, 2018
|Marijuana: a drug, or a cure? Respond with three weakness' in my paper
2 - Sam, you have to revise the essay to be more fluid in presentation. Consider the use of transition sentences...
Research Paperssamfernann - Apr 11, 2018 / Holt - Apr 14, 2018
|Save the Kids: Buy a Flip Phone
2 - Hi heather, the first thing that I noticed upon finishing the first paragraph of your research paper is that...
Research Papershlautz - Apr 10, 2018 / Holt - Apr 13, 2018
|Essay about analysis an online article on how use of social media relates to anxiety
2 - Jiaje, this is supposed to be an analytical essay, That means that your perspective of the information provided should...
Research Papersjiajie - Apr 3, 2018 / Holt - Apr 9, 2018
|Review on the essay "Your Kids Phone is Not Like a Cigarette" in the New York Times by Anya Kamanetz
2 - Matt, for an article review of a New York Times article, there is almost no reference to the article...
Research PapersMatthendler - Apr 3, 2018 / Holt - Apr 6, 2018
|Organic Foods vs. Processed Foods (Rough Draft)
2 - Lorraine, the opening paragraph of your presentation is interesting. However, it does not provide a clear thesis statement for...
Research Papersloryzoe - Mar 31, 2018 / Holt - Apr 1, 2018
|AURLS：An Active Defense Solution for Web Applications Based on URL Shifting
Research Paperszjstone - Feb 4, 2018 / Holt - Feb 7, 2018
|Research paper for human papillomavirus
2 - Esther, I'm not sure if you posted your complete research for review. It feels like this is only a...
Research Papersesther026 - Jan 23, 2018 / Holt - Jan 23, 2018
|The Increase in Bullying leading to Suicide
2 - NIkki, before I respond directly to your questions, I would like to point out that in a research paper,...
Research Papersnathonfalls - Jan 18, 2018 / Holt - Jan 18, 2018
|Police and Citizen De-escalation and Implementation Techniques
2 - Ronald, I don't think that you need to address more examples in your research paper. You have more than...
Research Papersronaldel - Jan 4, 2018 / Holt - Jan 4, 2018
|A Comparison of Cinderella Complex between Zhang Ailing and Jane Austen
2 - 唐雅楠, your abstract is not correctly developed. The abstract of a research paper is supposed to be composed of...
Research Papersnibblestuffy - Jan 2, 2018 / Holt - Jan 2, 2018
|Obesity is one of the greatest uprising in America in the last 25 years - obesity in the USA essay
3 - Obesity is one of the greatest uprisings in How has obesity affectedthe U.S. and what has caused this...
Research PapersErikojne - Dec 31, 2017 / rinirini - Jan 1, 2018
|The Value of Educating Women Worldwide
1 - The Value of Educating Women Worldwide By: Kayla Harrop English 102 12/29/2017 Imagine if every women in...
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|Real v Artificial Christmas Trees
3 - Daniel, there is a point for discussion in your essay that could have winningly persuaded the reader to your...
Research Papersdargaez - Dec 31, 2017 / Holt - Dec 31, 2017
|Research paper on negative stigma regarding mental illness and [how to prevent it]?
3 - Wendy, I find that your essay, in this current draft mode, has all the elements required to make it...
Research Papersweext - Dec 31, 2017 / Holt - Dec 31, 2017
|The Power of Synchronicity
2 - Michaela, the essay is very good. It is informative and gives a clear picture to the reader regarding what...
Research Paperskaycheat - Dec 9, 2017 / Holt - Dec 10, 2017
|How to show that the highlighted row is my addition to the research?
Research Papersproud2000 - Dec 9, 2017 / proud2000 - Dec 10, 2017
|PTSD Service dogs research paper. There are many ways that a dog can lend a helping hand..
2 - Donna, the information in the essay is highly interesting. However, the hook does not effectively entice the reader. The...
Research Papersdonna21 - Dec 4, 2017 / Holt - Dec 5, 2017
|Canadian flag debate, Medical care act, Terry Fox's marathon of Hope/ Canadian History
Research PapersSyedShahriar - Jan 16, 2011 / bozka4251 - Dec 1, 2017
|Eng 102 research paper on the recent decline of nurses
Research Paperscammiedixon1 - Nov 26, 2017 / cammiedixon1 - Nov 26, 2017
|Addressing an issue in my country with my degree choice
3 - thank you very much for your contribution and feedback@Holt I removed the second and paragragh and added this as...
Research PapersCodex1717 - Nov 25, 2017 / Codex1717 - Nov 25, 2017
|An article review on the intercultural communicative competence and language teaching
4 - Hi, here are my suggestions: According to the author of the article decades, through the process of...
Research PapersDalatkitty - Nov 20, 2017 / TJLuschen - Nov 21, 2017
|The Connection Between Type 2 Diabetes, Obesity, and Insulin Resistance
2 - Rachel, are you writing this as a paper for your peers or a paper for lay people? The audience...
Research PapersRay15 - Nov 19, 2017 / Holt - Nov 19, 2017
|CRITICAL THEORY: CHRISTIANITY AND SOCAIL TIES, LIKEMINDEDNESS, & EMOTIONALITY
3 - My professor explicitly instructed to introduce my subject using 1-3 sentences. Followed by a point that someone else makes,...
Research Paperspchaulk - Nov 15, 2017 / pchaulk - Nov 16, 2017
|Pornography: A Research Paper on the Devastating Drug
2 - Mattisen, this essay, being a research paper, should be written from the third person point of view. The researcher,...
Research Papersmattiemfree - Nov 14, 2017 / Holt - Nov 14, 2017
|The Impact of Being in an Unhealthy Relationship
2 - Hi Daniel, I really like the topic that you chose for your essay. Self-Love is something that people need...
Research Papersdsmith - Nov 10, 2017 / Holt - Nov 11, 2017
|School Uniforms, The Good and Bad - research
2 - Juliana, you have listed this as a research paper. While your research does strongly support the advantages of having...
Research Papersjewlz1019 - Nov 8, 2017 / Holt - Nov 8, 2017
|A critique of my English Research Essay on Pretrial Release (Criminal Justice)
3 - @Holt Thank you so very much for the feedback, greatly appreciated and I will make the corrections you recommended!...
Research Papersverusha1975 - Nov 2, 2017 / verusha1975 - Nov 3, 2017
|Fake News in Financial Literacy
Research PapersGILFZ59241 - Nov 3, 2017 / Holt - Nov 3, 2017
|Memorizing TV - ROUGH DRAFT RESEARCH ESSAY
2 - Caylin, the essay needs a more definite thesis statement at the end of the first paragraph. As a reader,...
Research Papersmscaycay - Nov 3, 2017 / Holt - Nov 3, 2017
|Cancer Sentence outline! Cancer Prevention Recommendations
2 - Hmm, well. Your outline is very basic. The outline itself makes sense and is all tied together. However, the...
Research Papersohwowwaitwhat - Oct 21, 2017 / kaylaZZ - Oct 21, 2017
|Climate Change - An existential treat? Blackwater in Iraq. Pol Sci - Research Question
2 - Kerem, perhaps you can frame the securitization discussion through the context of the current political climate in America where...
Research PapersKerem89 - Oct 20, 2017 / Holt - Oct 21, 2017
|The Right to Euthanasia. Feel free to give any response for this Sentence Outline!
2 - Angela, your proposed discussion outline is clearer than the thesis statement that you wrote. I am highly confused as...
Research Papersohwowwaitwhat - Oct 15, 2017 / Holt - Oct 15, 2017
|A short evaluation report on an given proposal - solar cap
Research Paperstangtang - Sep 24, 2017 / Holt - Sep 24, 2017
|What is Hobbes' argument for the absolute nature of sovereignty? Is it convincing?
2 - Fang, you have to lessen the in-text citations in your paper. Any paper that contains more than 30% citations...
Research Papersxbaqsh246 - Sep 20, 2017 / Holt - Sep 20, 2017
|Research paper outline: The role of Globalization in relation to popular culture
2 - Ashley, globalization on a popular culture context is too broad a topic. You need to narrow it down some...
Research Papersabrow317 - Sep 6, 2017 / Holt - Sep 7, 2017
|The essay will be to analysis the business of Starbucks
Research Papersjessieluo - Sep 6, 2017 / jessieluo - Sep 7, 2017
|Shark Survival is Vital for Humanity - ENG102 Final
2 - Ashley, your essay is suffering from a severe case of TMI. The presentation of the varying degrees of information...
Research PapersAshleyVirnelson - Aug 29, 2017 / Holt - Aug 29, 2017
|Is the war on terrorism fueling the opioid crisis?
2 - Anthony, I understand that the history of Opioid abuse dates back centuries. However, trying to trace and discuss the...
Research PapersApaiano - Aug 26, 2017 / Holt - Aug 27, 2017
|Drones, The Civilian Frontier Presents New Regulatory Challenges for America
2 - Chris, the opening statement needs more definitive thesis statement towards the end. What is the whole purpose for this...
Research Papersindyirl1 - Aug 17, 2017 / Holt - Aug 18, 2017
|Research Essay on the effects divorce has on families and the ways it can be treated
2 - Sara, this is a very interesting topic to discuss. However, the thesis statement that you created is unclear. It...
Research Paperssmcastr7 - Jul 25, 2017 / Holt - Jul 26, 2017
|The overrepresentation of ELLs in special education programs-Specific Research Question(s)
2 - Yardly, your research is survey intensive. In order to come up with the trend of the saturation of ELLs...
Research Paperslylyjo - Jul 24, 2017 / Holt - Jul 24, 2017
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