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|Drones, The Civilian Frontier Presents New Regulatory Challenges for America
2 - Chris, the opening statement needs more definitive thesis statement towards the end. What is the whole purpose for this...
Research Papersindyirl1 - Aug 17, 2017 / Holt - Aug 18, 2017
|Research Essay on the effects divorce has on families and the ways it can be treated
2 - Sara, this is a very interesting topic to discuss. However, the thesis statement that you created is unclear. It...
Research Paperssmcastr7 - Jul 25, 2017 / Holt - Jul 26, 2017
|The overrepresentation of ELLs in special education programs-Specific Research Question(s)
2 - Yardly, your research is survey intensive. In order to come up with the trend of the saturation of ELLs...
Research Paperslylyjo - Jul 24, 2017 / Holt - Jul 24, 2017
|"Steroids: What are They Really?"
4 - The essay is not bad, however it lacks specific information. Try to fill it a little bit. If you...
Research PapersGeordan - Jun 17, 2017 / Bravi - Jul 3, 2017
|Research abstract: "Experiences of nurse survivors on disaster"
2 - @SHanafi For the background, I could hardly understand what you were trying to say. This study purposes to explore...
Research PapersSHanafi - Jul 2, 2017 / Babbie419 - Jul 3, 2017
|The Identity of Postpartum Depression and Treatments Available
2 - Pricilla, you need to separate the first paragraph into your thesis statement and then the start of your second...
Research PapersPricilla1965 - Jun 27, 2017 / Holt - Jun 28, 2017
|Persuasive Research Paper on Government Cost (Ethical, Financial) of Safety though Surveillance
Research PapersSeanCav - Jun 22, 2017 / SeanCav - Jun 24, 2017
|Vegetarianism vs meat eating; health, environment and animal cruelty
2 - Carly, your opening statement is all wrong. Academic rules do not allow for the introduction of facts and figures...
Research Paperscarlybano - Jun 11, 2017 / Holt - Jun 11, 2017
|Defeating the Military Lifestyle: A Rough (Draft) Proposal
2 - Dwight, I assume that the first part of this paper is your Abstract presentation. As such, it should only...
Research PapersDeweyG - Jun 11, 2017 / Holt - Jun 11, 2017
|Sustainable Business Research based project
2 - Yes, the case studies already exist for sustainable business projects. You will normally find these case studies online using...
Research Papersbenlai1910 - Jun 1, 2017 / Holt - Jun 1, 2017
|Ocean's Pollution - Lesson 11 Essay RD--Need on all of it
2 - Cassandra, your thesis statement is not clear in the opening paragraph. There is a sense of disconnection between the...
Research Papersccahill07 - May 30, 2017 / Holt - May 30, 2017
|Essay On Early Childhood Play and Education
Research PapersAmerzy1588 - May 22, 2017 / ezgifilik - May 23, 2017
|Violent Video Games are A-OK
2 - Jason, the first improvement that you can make to this essay is further developing your opening statement to include...
Research Papersjasonlongjr - May 22, 2017 / Holt - May 22, 2017
|The Importance of Korean Community to The Philippines
2 - Han, what is the point of this essay? The introduction doesn't make any sense. Your first paragraph must properly...
Research Paperszyxpeha - May 20, 2017 / Holt - May 20, 2017
|Introduction - The influence of celebrity worship on college students
Research Papersvanessaaleung - Apr 17, 2017 / vanessaaleung - May 14, 2017
|Prescription Drug Abuse among kids, Teens, and Adults
2 - Noah, I can see that you have included a listing of your reference material at the end of the...
Research Papersnamen772 - May 13, 2017 / Holt - May 14, 2017
|I need a peer review of a 10 page research paper about the effects of TV viewing on young children.
2 - Kassi, the firs thing that I noticed about this paper was that the title was misleading. If you are...
Research Papersklayton - May 12, 2017 / Holt - May 12, 2017
|Research paper about the life of a jazz musician in the 1920s
2 - Allison, you have not properly discussed this essay. The instructions asked you to choose one side of the 3...
Research Papersasilver427 - May 10, 2017 / Holt - May 10, 2017
|Research paper for an English 102 class about the dangers of social media
2 - Cameron, you cannot quote actual information in your opening statement. That is not allowed in an academic paper because...
Research Paperscollinscameron11 - May 7, 2017 / Holt - May 8, 2017
|Should Parents Vaccinate Their Children Rough Draft. Need help on content and in-text citations
2 - Ryan, your thesis statement is not clear on the first paragraph of the essay. While you did present the...
Research Papersbigdogmadness - May 7, 2017 / Holt - May 8, 2017
|Classification of research methodology based on its application.
2 - Peter, what is the purpose of this essay? What are the parameters by which your research information should be...
Research PapersPeter Truong - Apr 28, 2017 / Holt - Apr 29, 2017
|Memory Essay: Interference between auditory and visual memory
2 - Not being an expert in this field, I feel that you have somehow, managed to educate me about a...
Research PapersRdunn07 - Apr 24, 2017 / Holt - Apr 25, 2017
|Title: Why should people pay more attention to protect forest? - Introduction
6 - Hi @tieuvohonghan, It is unfinished essay, right? Actually, I like the way you introduce the prompt, you have a...
Research Paperstieuvohonghan - Apr 23, 2017 / Anhy chan - Apr 25, 2017
|Data mining for fake account detection by content analysis
3 - No,i mean something else. I concluded that for my senior thesis, work in the field of Detect fake...
Research Paperswave525 - Apr 21, 2017 / wave525 - Apr 25, 2017
|Compare/Contrast Research Paper, help with grammar/conventions, only present tense and no 1st person
2 - Caitlin, you need to change up the use of the word "perpetrator" and "abuse" in your essay. Get a...
Research Paperscntoniazzo - Apr 17, 2017 / Holt - Apr 19, 2017
|Research on Ethics of Cloning (Wooly Mammoth)
2 - John, you are trying to discuss too many topics all at once, without giving yourself the benefit of a...
Research PapersJoSmoBoBo - Apr 16, 2017 / Holt - Apr 16, 2017
|The Evolution of Board Games and Their Future in Society
5 - Maybe in the conclusion you should add some personal opinion (could be written in a passive voice) whether it's...
Research PapersKKearney - Apr 14, 2017 / Rich Monte - Apr 15, 2017
|Essay for English: Legalization of Marijuana: The Future is here
2 - Kory your essay is composed of more than 30 percent of quotes. This is something that poses a problem...
Research Papersbballkid19 - Apr 13, 2017 / Holt - Apr 14, 2017
|The influence of gory games for behaviour of gamers in reality. Research on Video Games and Violence
2 - Estevan, when writing a research paper, you must do so from a third person point of view. In order...
Research Papersestgilvid - Apr 12, 2017 / Holt - Apr 13, 2017
|Understanding your credit and how it affects your life. "NEED" Peer Review
2 - Joshua, this essay is really difficult to read. The premise is unclear, the point of the discussion needs to...
Research Papersdeckerjnohatin - Apr 11, 2017 / Holt - Apr 11, 2017
|Some solutions aimed at increasing students' attendance
3 - Chu, this research paper is severely flawed. The most well developed portion needs to be the thesis statement. That...
Research Papersngocanh_97hanu - Apr 10, 2017 / Holt - Apr 10, 2017
|The Struggles Women Face Entering or Rentering College
3 - @miana13 Hi Miana, this research paper is very informative and well prepared. My only suggestion is for you to...
Research Papersmiana13 - Apr 9, 2017 / Strikeracad30 - Apr 10, 2017
|Plato and Aristotle on today, in the 21st century... Peer review
2 - Joel, the title of your essay does not match the research that you have presented. The thesis statement should...
Research Papersrungejm - Apr 8, 2017 / Holt - Apr 9, 2017
|Breastfeeding: Maternal Benefits & Support.......Motivation to keep going!
3 - @Holt Thank you so much for the feedback. Your response is exactly what was missing, but I couldn't figure...
Research Papersjaldrich - Apr 7, 2017 / jaldrich - Apr 8, 2017
|How are turbo-chargers more effective than superchargers?
2 - Eric, in reference to your second paragraph. Do not make any statement that already makes an indirect choice for...
Research Papersesoriano - Apr 6, 2017 / Holt - Apr 7, 2017
|Causes and effects of child obesity - Rough Draft
2 - Analeza, your essay needs to be revised in order to meet specific requirements. Start with the introduction. There is...
Research Papersanalezaclark3 - Apr 6, 2017 / Holt - Apr 6, 2017
|How to write a Draft Research Paper on Cyber Security and Privacy Issues?
3 - @Holt Hello Holt, I appreciate your honest and educated feedback, and for your time. Best, Yvonne...
Research Papersymedina - Mar 31, 2017 / ymedina - Apr 1, 2017
|Film reception theory: The Interview Questions
Research Papersdaolena - Mar 27, 2017 / daolena - Mar 28, 2017
|Pressure on Teenagers to Go to College - Research Essay Draft
2 - Ashley, the main problem with your research paper at this point is that it is composed of more than...
Research PapersAsh2146362 - Mar 27, 2017 / Holt - Mar 27, 2017
|Facebook usage among undergraduate students - research study introduction
Research Paperskalivu - Mar 24, 2017 / kalivu - Mar 26, 2017
|Caffeine: Friend or Foe? In the perspective of the child, the adult, and the elderly.
2 - Amber, I firmly believe that your thesis statement in the first paragraph needs more work. Try to find a...
Research PapersAMB2174945 - Mar 25, 2017 / Holt - Mar 26, 2017
|Research topics on data mining - suggestions?
33 - I made that suggestion but your presentation to your supervisor is wrong. Which is why I did not understand...
Research PapersAnjana Devi - Apr 11, 2012 / Holt - Mar 1, 2017
|What are your plans when you finish your studies - essay for Master Degree in TESOL
10 - Hi @Holt, thanks for the revision. I'll use it with minor adjustment in my essay. Thank you for the...
Research Papersd2ny - Feb 12, 2017 / d2ny - Feb 14, 2017
|Speaking, reading and writing in a second language has many benefits
Research PapersCYNSQ28921 - Feb 11, 2017 / Malavika Venu - Feb 12, 2017
|Sleep Disorder Research; Introducing sleep apnea the silent killer.
Research Papersmagdaczerny - Jan 22, 2017 / TJLuschen - Jan 22, 2017
|The different issues that illegal immigration has brought to America
3 - Kekoa, the topic you have chosen to discuss is quite broad in coverage while your synopsis or thesis statement...
Research Paperskkubli3246 - Jan 18, 2017 / Holt - Jan 18, 2017
|Violence and Video Games correlation - A research paper
2 - Bryan, the main problem with your paper is that it is composed solely of quoted information from other sources....
Research PapersWillis1313 - Jan 16, 2017 / Holt - Jan 17, 2017
|Essay about motivation letter for German's university scholarship. How to make aroused letter?
3 - Dewa, in terms of presentation, your letter is confused. You have accidentally mixed the content of a letter of...
Research Papersdewakresna - Jan 12, 2017 / Holt - Jan 12, 2017
|Creationism over Evolutionism
3 - I am not a moderator or an experienced essay writer, so take my opinion with a grain of salt....
Research Paperstolliky - Jan 11, 2017 / TRaw98 - Jan 12, 2017
|The Ethical Pitfalls of Orphanage Tourism
2 - George, your discussion regarding "Orphanage Tourism" is very one sided. It does not deliver a balanced discussion because you...
Research Papersgeo2149457 - Jan 11, 2017 / Holt - Jan 11, 2017
|Different forms of Diabetes Mellitus that a person can be affected by.
3 - Will, a peer reviewed article such as this still requires the same information be placed in it as a...
Research Papersshamus7555 - Jan 10, 2017 / Holt - Jan 10, 2017
|Seeking Peer Review - The development and application of animal assisted therapy in human mental
2 - Shi, you need to revise your opening statement in order to present your thesis statement somewhere within that. Your...
Research PapersShi Lyu - Jan 4, 2017 / Holt - Jan 4, 2017
|Small firms, R&D, technology and innovation
5 - @Holt Dear Holt, thank you for your feed back, the text is not yet finished, i post here just...
Research PapersVirak kong - Dec 29, 2016 / Virak kong - Dec 30, 2016
|An Unhealthy Generation: Childhood Obesity
2 - Victoria, your first paragraph should be divided into two because you are discussing 2 different topics in one paragraph....
Research Papersvjb - Dec 24, 2016 / Holt - Dec 24, 2016
|Forensic Accounting Is Important in Financial Investigations
2 - Wendy, lets get started with your thesis statement. It doesn't really tell me what you are going to be...
Research Paperswen2066281 - Dec 24, 2016 / Holt - Dec 24, 2016
|Essay on the acknowledgement of bullying in society-
3 - Lexi, you need to outline your discussion for this research paper before you write it. There is a clear...
Research PapersLexLex - Dec 24, 2016 / Holt - Dec 24, 2016
|LSM Portfolio: English Legal System Seminars and Reflection Question
2 - Jeremy, where is the copy of the seminar questions that you were supposed to respond to? You provided the...
Research PapersJeremy Newcastl - Dec 15, 2016 / Holt - Dec 15, 2016
|Comparing Foreign Ownership, Return Volatility, Volume, and Risk Among ASEAN Countries
4 - How about this miss, Revision #1 The finance research regarding the stock is interesting to explore, especially...
Research Papersahmadmaulinnaufa - Dec 12, 2016 / ahmadmaulinnaufa - Dec 13, 2016
|ENGLISH 102 RESEARCH PAPER ROUGH DRAFT (Will Our Roads be Safe With Legal Weed?)
2 - Hi Ally, try not to present an actual information as part of your thesis statement. This paragraph is supposed...
Research Papersanc64 - Dec 11, 2016 / Holt - Dec 11, 2016
|The debate on making Marijuana legal - the fight has begun
3 - There are a lot of simple sentences that could be combined, as well as transitional words or lists that...
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