Well Liana, I have felt that problem before. For me
I just try to describe my experience (school, work, course friends or other) which is related to the subject of course at the first, make it personal because they want to read it. but do not to much !
Then 'show' them that you are eligible person : good for academic for example, good for people surround you, your employer, your country might be, family, easy to speak, hard worker, and so on (tell them that you are important young lady)
And the last try "to praise" them in simple word :), find their "good" or met their objective with your excess.
and of course with formal word.
Hope it work, good luck !
Hi Lim, this is a very important essay. You have a vision of your future as a lawyer, but it is not a very developed vision. You may not have read the biography of a lawyer. You may not have read about the various specializations in the field of law.
I think you should begin by reading the biography of a lawyer you admire. You can also read a few books and articles. You really need to become an expert on the work of a lawyer, and that way you can be confident.
So... you do not have ideas right now, but you will have a LOT of ideas if you just spend this evening with a great book or article. I hope you have time to read a different book/article every day for 3 days before you begin to write.
:-)