Hello everyone! I have always struggled with English classes so I appreciate other pairs of eyes to spot my errors! Thank you so much! :) I am an adult returning student. First time applying for scholarships. Intimidated. But here it goes! - This is due on Friday. If anyone happens to see this before then, I would appreciate the help! Still going to use it for other applications going forward this year. So I appreciate any suggestions or feedback. Thank you for your help!! :)
Here are the requirements of this essay.
This is a "personal statement" essay.
The requirements are min. of 250 words. (It's double that) and to answer several questions.
Please tell us about:
* Your interest in your program or major.
* How ___ (my college) has impacted your life.
* Your personal and professional goals and/ or achievements
* Any community service and/ or ___ (my school's) organizations you've been involved with.
This essay is my story of who I am, my experiences taking care of those I love, and how that has inspired me to pursue a degree in the healthcare field as a Registered Nurse.
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"No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted." - Aesop. Experiences throughout my life with ill and disabled family members have shaped me into who I am today. It has inspired and motivated me to work in the medical field and make a difference in people's lives.
As a girl I witnessed the long term effects of surgery and radiation treatments as my father battled throat cancer. For years he endured fatigue, a pureed diet and speech therapy until he recovered. My family has taught me the value of commitment and long term care of an ill loved one.
As a young adult I moved in with my grandmother to help as her Alzheimer's progressed. Looking back at my childhood experiences with her, she was an inspiration to me. I am proud that she was a Certified Nurse Assistant. I grew up hoping that I too, could someday help others and improve lives.
As an adult, I cared for a loved one who is a disabled veteran on and off for nine years. My life experiences as a caretaker have strengthened me to be able to do more and help others in a positive and healthy way.
Now that my parents are senior citizens and my mother is living with Multiple Myeloma (a form of bone marrow cancer), I am more motivated than ever to work in the healthcare field.
My long-term goals are to earn an Associate's Degree in Nursing and obtain a career as a Registered Nurse. I am interested in working in oncology, pediatrics or elder care.
After being out of school for almost a decade, I came back to ------- in fall 2011. Despite having a learning disability and working full time, I earned a Phlebotomy Technician degree. Through hard work and determination, I shattered my fears that I "couldn't do it" and graduated in 2012 with high honors! My family and I are very proud that I am the first in our family to graduate college.
After graduating, I took additional EKG classes in summer and fall 2012 to upgrade my degree to "Healthcare Technician Certificate". I will graduate with this certificate in May.
In February I was honored to join ------'s chapter of ------ Honor Society. I've participated in two bake sale fundraisers for our Hurricane Sandy Relief trip to New York.
Being new to community service, I look forward to getting involved! I am currently looking into volunteer opportunities available at ---- hospice, ----- and local elder services.
I will be taking prerequisite classes this year in preparation for ------'s 2014 nursing program. I can not thank ------ enough for all the support that has made my success possible. I can't wait to someday begin this new chapter of my life as a Registered Nurse to make a difference in patients' lives.
In a story called "The Starfish Thrower" by Loren Eiseley, a young man picks up starfish on the beach and throws them into the ocean, to save them from dying. An old wise man approaches him and tells him that there are many miles of starfish and that, "You can't possibly make a difference!" The young man bends down and gently throws another starfish into the ocean and replies, "It made a difference for that one."
Here are the requirements of this essay.
This is a "personal statement" essay.
The requirements are min. of 250 words. (It's double that) and to answer several questions.
Please tell us about:
* Your interest in your program or major.
* How ___ (my college) has impacted your life.
* Your personal and professional goals and/ or achievements
* Any community service and/ or ___ (my school's) organizations you've been involved with.
This essay is my story of who I am, my experiences taking care of those I love, and how that has inspired me to pursue a degree in the healthcare field as a Registered Nurse.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted." - Aesop. Experiences throughout my life with ill and disabled family members have shaped me into who I am today. It has inspired and motivated me to work in the medical field and make a difference in people's lives.
As a girl I witnessed the long term effects of surgery and radiation treatments as my father battled throat cancer. For years he endured fatigue, a pureed diet and speech therapy until he recovered. My family has taught me the value of commitment and long term care of an ill loved one.
As a young adult I moved in with my grandmother to help as her Alzheimer's progressed. Looking back at my childhood experiences with her, she was an inspiration to me. I am proud that she was a Certified Nurse Assistant. I grew up hoping that I too, could someday help others and improve lives.
As an adult, I cared for a loved one who is a disabled veteran on and off for nine years. My life experiences as a caretaker have strengthened me to be able to do more and help others in a positive and healthy way.
Now that my parents are senior citizens and my mother is living with Multiple Myeloma (a form of bone marrow cancer), I am more motivated than ever to work in the healthcare field.
My long-term goals are to earn an Associate's Degree in Nursing and obtain a career as a Registered Nurse. I am interested in working in oncology, pediatrics or elder care.
After being out of school for almost a decade, I came back to ------- in fall 2011. Despite having a learning disability and working full time, I earned a Phlebotomy Technician degree. Through hard work and determination, I shattered my fears that I "couldn't do it" and graduated in 2012 with high honors! My family and I are very proud that I am the first in our family to graduate college.
After graduating, I took additional EKG classes in summer and fall 2012 to upgrade my degree to "Healthcare Technician Certificate". I will graduate with this certificate in May.
In February I was honored to join ------'s chapter of ------ Honor Society. I've participated in two bake sale fundraisers for our Hurricane Sandy Relief trip to New York.
Being new to community service, I look forward to getting involved! I am currently looking into volunteer opportunities available at ---- hospice, ----- and local elder services.
I will be taking prerequisite classes this year in preparation for ------'s 2014 nursing program. I can not thank ------ enough for all the support that has made my success possible. I can't wait to someday begin this new chapter of my life as a Registered Nurse to make a difference in patients' lives.
In a story called "The Starfish Thrower" by Loren Eiseley, a young man picks up starfish on the beach and throws them into the ocean, to save them from dying. An old wise man approaches him and tells him that there are many miles of starfish and that, "You can't possibly make a difference!" The young man bends down and gently throws another starfish into the ocean and replies, "It made a difference for that one."