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Leadership means different things to many people. To me, it's not about managing people or individual, but encouraging and inspiring them through one's actions. I believe leaders are made and not born; meaning that the one who can develop their character, knowledge, and skills can be a Leader.
My leader skills appeared at first when I involved in college organization activity. In 2010, I was elected as the chairman of Universitas Padjadjaran Management Student Society for a year period. As a leader, I have to manage aspiration from all stakeholders including 150 team members. The ability to communicate the vision is vital because I did not pay them. In the end of period I am proud to say that we can and deliver programs that I over in the campaign process such as hosted national business case study competition, city tourism marketing competition, annual sport event, run study club program and the most important thing is that we did regeneration to continue organization.
In 2016, as a digital branch manager in a leading investment bank in Indonesia that supervise 6 team members, I have to make sure all the team member can contribute to the company's target. As a leader, I always set a good example and bring solutions if they had difficulty in work. I came to the office on time so that it may become a good example to others.
Moreover I have never been afraid to take part in competitions. Competition builds winners, leaders, innovators and success stories. Without it, none of us would be here. I took part in many extracurricular activities and business case study competitions to gain more experience and improve on my social and leadership skills. I was the runner up in my faculty's debate competition. My business team went into the finals in Prasetya Mulya's 'Business School Marketing Plan Competition' where we got to introduce a new product line to the brand manager of the biggest F&B Company in Indonesia to boost their sales. In 2012, we also had the opportunity to represent Indonesia in "Danone Trust International Business Games" after emerging as champion in an intense elimination stage with more than 100 participating teams.
Finally, leaders create chances to change their society and country, influences a group towards the goal achievement to refine life quality.
Leadership means different things to many people. To me, it's not about managing people or individual, but encouraging and inspiring them through one's actions. I believe leaders are made and not born; meaning that the one who can develop their character, knowledge, and skills can be a Leader.
My leader skills appeared at first when I involved in college organization activity. In 2010, I was elected as the chairman of Universitas Padjadjaran Management Student Society for a year period. As a leader, I have to manage aspiration from all stakeholders including 150 team members. The ability to communicate the vision is vital because I did not pay them. In the end of period I am proud to say that we can and deliver programs that I over in the campaign process such as hosted national business case study competition, city tourism marketing competition, annual sport event, run study club program and the most important thing is that we did regeneration to continue organization.
In 2016, as a digital branch manager in a leading investment bank in Indonesia that supervise 6 team members, I have to make sure all the team member can contribute to the company's target. As a leader, I always set a good example and bring solutions if they had difficulty in work. I came to the office on time so that it may become a good example to others.
Moreover I have never been afraid to take part in competitions. Competition builds winners, leaders, innovators and success stories. Without it, none of us would be here. I took part in many extracurricular activities and business case study competitions to gain more experience and improve on my social and leadership skills. I was the runner up in my faculty's debate competition. My business team went into the finals in Prasetya Mulya's 'Business School Marketing Plan Competition' where we got to introduce a new product line to the brand manager of the biggest F&B Company in Indonesia to boost their sales. In 2012, we also had the opportunity to represent Indonesia in "Danone Trust International Business Games" after emerging as champion in an intense elimination stage with more than 100 participating teams.
Finally, leaders create chances to change their society and country, influences a group towards the goal achievement to refine life quality.
