Essay
Who in your experience at Cooper high school has been your biggest influence and why?
250 words or less
As a student at Randall Cooper High school, I have grown from a freshman to a graduating senior. During these four wonderful years I have learned how to be successful in my academics. I would not be where I am today without the help of Mrs. Mosley. Mrs. Mosley has been my biology, AP biology and Anatomy teacher. Mrs. Mosley is my biggest influence because through her I was able to find my passion for science. Not only was I able to find my passion in science, Mrs. Mosley always assisted me in understanding difficult subjects, as well as motivated me to do well in my academics. Mrs. Mosley helped me improve my study skills and allowed me to use her personal science books to uphold a better understanding of subjects. Mrs. Mosley is kind and thoughtful and she is a great role model. I have decided to major in biology, and I would not have made that choice if I did not have a great teacher like Mrs.Mosley. Mrs. Mosley is my biggest influence and I am greatful that I was able to be her student at Randall Cooper High school, the lessons and skills I have learned through her will continue to benefit me in academics.
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Who in your experience at Cooper high school has been your biggest influence and why?
250 words or less
As a student at Randall Cooper High school, I have grown from a freshman to a graduating senior. During these four wonderful years I have learned how to be successful in my academics. I would not be where I am today without the help of Mrs. Mosley. Mrs. Mosley has been my biology, AP biology and Anatomy teacher. Mrs. Mosley is my biggest influence because through her I was able to find my passion for science. Not only was I able to find my passion in science, Mrs. Mosley always assisted me in understanding difficult subjects, as well as motivated me to do well in my academics. Mrs. Mosley helped me improve my study skills and allowed me to use her personal science books to uphold a better understanding of subjects. Mrs. Mosley is kind and thoughtful and she is a great role model. I have decided to major in biology, and I would not have made that choice if I did not have a great teacher like Mrs.Mosley. Mrs. Mosley is my biggest influence and I am greatful that I was able to be her student at Randall Cooper High school, the lessons and skills I have learned through her will continue to benefit me in academics.
**** Could someone edit and comment on my essay? I really want to win this scholarship. Thank you! *****