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An essay on the leadership role in the journey of my life



nvkirankumar 1 / -  
Sep 13, 2019   #1

actions speak louder than voice



I believe leadership is all about inspiring and influencing people. It is said that actions speak louder than voice. I believe in that statement very strongly.

A good team leader is one who can carry out things smoothly like delegation of tasks, responsibilities without any disturbances

Fortunately, I have been serving in the leadership role since 2011 continuously in different organizations without any gap.
Beginning with schooling days - I served as "House Captain" of 1/4th strength of my school during my 10th standard. I also served as School Pupils leader. Being a house captain we use to volunteer many events in the school, I being a leader of the team used to assign tasks to mates according to their capabilities and interests which made them happy and finally turns out things to be successful.

During the course of my Under Graduate Programme, I served as an Executive Body Member of a Student body organization "Association of Computer Engineers" where we used to organize several programs for improving communication skills, public speaking skills, technical skills weekly. During this phase of my life, I have really learned a lot like Time Management where we have lot of things to study, home tasks. Being in this role we used to spend 3 days of every week mostly in planning, organizing of different events in the college. One of the greatest tasks is that we have hosted a very very important event IEEE Conference in our college where different delegates will be coming from all over the world. With this opportunity, we learned Guest Management.

And then During my Internship and 1st year of my Fully time employment - I was a member of Kony Konnect Club - Here also we organized several programs internally among employees, doing some volunteering actions as part of Corporate sector mandates. During this phase of my role, I was able to gather people for volunteering tasks which are generally neglected by many in this phase where people are earning and they get nothing out of this act.

And currently, I am a member of a Spiritual organization called "Gita Life - An ISKCON initiative" - Here, I am Event Co-ordinator since last two years - we conduct weekly programs throughout the year, organized several trips, handled many ad-hocs, managing dynamic schedules.

This has been a challenging task in my life. Because
All the members of this organization are working corporates in different multi-national companies. Challenge is that people here are earning and the most important thing is that they are Independent and this is the phase of the life everyone waits for.

In this situation we indirectly ask them to completely sacrifice their whole weekends (except some exceptional cases) in preaching mission of Srila Prabhupada(ISKCON). THE MOST INTERESTING THING IS THAT "PEOPLE HERE FON'T GET PAID". Generally, we can expect people to do our requirements when we offer them something materially (either it is money or material benefits). So, here I learned a lot in this course of my life.

FYI: In preaching, there are several tasks involved. Weekly registrations, Designing invitation cards, Food Management, Program Management, Time Management, People Management. This has been like All-in-All.

Being served in these above mentioned different positions, I influenced a lot of people in my life and really feeling very happy.

Maria - / 1096  
Sep 15, 2019   #2
@nvkirankumar
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