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Passion, USNS in Haiti, Hospital ship; REASONS- Naval Nurse Officer(NROTC)



alexishemeon 2 / -  
Jan 21, 2013   #1
Discuss your reasons for wanting to become a Naval Nurse Officer. (max 2500 characters)

(MY MOST IMPORTANT REASONS: 1. My country served me, so I want to serve in return. 2. I want to serve those less fortunate on behalf of my country. 3. I want to provide healthcare to service-people and their families, because they are most deserving due to the sacrifices they have made.)

I have had a life-long passion for healthcare. This has led me to decide on a career in nursing. Having made this decision, I researched the different civilian routes I could take in nursing, and although I considered the military, it was just in the back of my mind. In the 9th grade, I did a project for my history class where I interviewed my Grandfather, who is a WWII veteran. His haunting personal narratives made me really open my eyes. This was the turning point that led me to focus on a career in the navy.

While researching, I happened upon an article that talked about how the USNS Comfort aided Haiti after the earthquake. This led me to continue reading about the various humanitarian relief efforts the Navy has taken part in. I consider volunteering to be a very important part of my life; so learning of the Navy's humanitarian involvement is one of the most important reasons for my wanting to become a Naval Nurse Officer. While working with the organizations such as UNICEF or Mercy Corps would be an option if I wanted to help people, I would rather provide aid on behalf of my country, acting as a representative of the United States. Also, pursuing nursing in the Navy provides an opportunity attain personal and professional growth.

I realize that working on a hospital ship is not an opportunity that is guaranteed to me, and the strong possibility of this not happening does not detract from my desire to be a Naval Nurse Officer, because my other motivation, which is of equal importance to me, is to be able to provide healthcare to those most deserving of it. I often think back to my grandfather's WWII stories, which tell of extremely graphic scenes that allude to the realities of war. Seamen and Marines are willing subject themselves to the dangers of war to protect the people and rights of this country. This is why I believe that they and their family deserve the best quality healthcare available. It would be an honor for me to provide this for them.

This is a decision that I did not make lightly. I have thought about this since I was 15. I have since sought out people who have served in the Navy, including my cousin Craig Cole who is an enlisted, and my neighbor Captain Jim Albani who is in the reserves. My country has served me throughout my life, providing me with the freedoms that some other countries do not provide to woman. Now I feel it is time to return the favor and serve my country, by serving as a Naval Nurse Officer.

dumi 1 / 6793  
Jan 22, 2013   #2
This is awesome... It's simple, straight and well presented. I like your style of writing :)

I happened upon an article that talked about how the USNS Comfort aided Haiti after the earthquake.

.... I suggest ; "I once came across" in place of "I happened upon"

I consider volunteering to be a very important part of my life;

.... I wish if you'd set up some link with the previous idea before introducing a new idea altogether.


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