Psychology - Motivation with which you apply for this program-GKS scholarship

As children, life feels simple. Our biggest worries revolve around play, curiosity, and the little joys of everyday life. But as we grow, the world changes. Responsibilities pile up, expectations grow heavier, and the once-clear path ahead becomes more uncertain. For many, especially teenagers, this transition is overwhelming. Some struggle under the pressure to succeed, while others fight silent battles-turning to self-harm, substance abuse, or isolation as a way to cope.

I have seen firsthand how mental health struggles can take hold of someone, how easy it is for emotional wounds to go unnoticed, and how often people suffer in silence because they feel no one truly understands. This realization sparked something in me. I want to understand the human mind-not just through textbooks and theories, but through real stories, real emotions, and real experiences. I want to be part of a future where mental health is treated with the same urgency and care as physical health.

Korea's advancements in psychology and neuroscience, along with its growing awareness of mental health, inspire me deeply. Watching lectures by scholars like Lee Soo Jung and seeing Korea's commitment to pushing the boundaries of mental health research has only strengthened my passion. More than that, Korea's rich culture, innovative education system, and emphasis on progress create an environment where I know I can grow-not just as a student, but as a person.

For me, this isn't just about earning a degree. It's about learning in a place that values knowledge and change, about gaining the skills and understanding I need to make a difference. I want to use what I learn to reach those who feel unheard, to be a voice for those struggling in silence, and to contribute to a world where mental well-being is prioritized.

This isn't just a career choice. It's a mission. And I know that Korea is the place where I can turn that mission into reality.

As a draft essay, this covers some of the required discussion points. It presents information in relation to a few of the given discussion guide questions. However, this is not enough. The essay is too short. It does not respond thoroughly to the given list of discussion topics. This is not a selective topic essay. You are expected to respond to each question and topic provided because this is your written interview. You will not have a chance to defend yourself in an oral interview. This is it. You need to present your response to each question clearly and completely. You have treated this like a regular college common app essay when it is nothing like that. You must expand on the discussion provided, using the other topics that you did not address in this presentation. Once you do that, then the essay will be a proper draft that can be finalized for content. You Are not at that point yet.

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Personal statement psychology;GKS SCHOLARSHIP

As children, life feels simple. Our biggest worries revolve around play, curiosity, and the little joys of everyday life. But as we grow, the world changes. Responsibilities pile up, expectations grow heavier, and the once-clear path ahead becomes more uncertain. For many, especially teenagers, this transition is overwhelming. Some struggle under the pressure to succeed, while others fight silent battles-turning to self-harm, substance abuse, or isolation as a way to cope.

I have seen firsthand how mental health struggles can take hold of someone, how easy it is for emotional wounds to go unnoticed, and how often people suffer in silence because they feel no one truly understands. This realization sparked something in me. I want to understand the human mind-not just through textbooks and theories, but through real stories, real emotions, and real experiences. I want to be part of a future where mental health is treated with the same urgency and care as physical health.

My name is Ike Ebube Jessica, and I am 20 years old. I completed my secondary education with a strong academic record, ranking among the top 10 students in my department. Throughout my schooling, I have always been passionate about learning and personal growth. I actively participated in competitions such as essay writing, debate, and public speaking, as well as extracurricular activities that allowed me to develop leadership and teamwork skills. Serving as a student representative and leading initiatives on mental health awareness in my school further reinforced my desire to pursue psychology.

Korea's advancements in psychology and neuroscience, along with its growing awareness of mental health, inspire me deeply. Watching lectures by scholars like Lee Soo Jung and seeing Korea's commitment to pushing the boundaries of mental health research has only strengthened my passion. More than that, Korea's rich culture, innovative education system, and emphasis on progress create an environment where I know I can grow-not just as a student, but as a person.

When researching universities, I discovered Sun Moon University, and I was immediately drawn to its psychology program. The university's strong academic curriculum, research opportunities, and supportive learning environment align perfectly with my aspirations. I believe studying in Korea, particularly at Sun Moon University, will provide me with the knowledge and skills needed to contribute to the field of psychology meaningfully.

For me, this isn't just about earning a degree. It's about learning in a place that values knowledge and change, about gaining the skills and understanding I need to make a difference. I want to use what I learn to reach those who feel unheard, to be a voice for those struggling in silence, and to contribute to a world where mental well-being is prioritized.

This isn't just a career choice. It's a mission. And I know that Korea is the place where I can turn that mission into reality.