Hello, I am wandering if someone could help me to correct my Future Professional goals essay
I made my Professional Internship in a dependency of The Minister of Foreign Affair of Colombia in the Consular General office in San Francisco, California, U.S.A., that got me be interested into the consular and diplomatic matter, and make me to want work in the Government toward help to improve relation and cooperation agreements between Colombia and others countries, get better the image that the rest of the world has about Colombia through teaching about our culture, diversity and way of life. Also, I want to serve all Colombians outside the country by helping them to do government document procedures, organize integration events and activities for the Colombian community abroad, and provide assistance help to compatriots. That is why I want to make a M.A. in International Relation and Affair to have the correct bases and study to become a high qualified diplomatic to represent my country and my ethnicity and my roots.
I made my Professional Internship in a dependency of The Minister of Foreign Affair of Colombia in the Consular General office in San Francisco, California, U.S.A., that got me be interested into the consular and diplomatic matter, and make me to want work in the Government toward help to improve relation and cooperation agreements between Colombia and others countries, get better the image that the rest of the world has about Colombia through teaching about our culture, diversity and way of life. Also, I want to serve all Colombians outside the country by helping them to do government document procedures, organize integration events and activities for the Colombian community abroad, and provide assistance help to compatriots. That is why I want to make a M.A. in International Relation and Affair to have the correct bases and study to become a high qualified diplomatic to represent my country and my ethnicity and my roots.